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1. How effective were the quotes Dr. King used throughout his speech?

Pick 2 quotes from the speech and explain


how they worked to support his point and why they were effective.

Thesis/Claim:
When Dr. Martin Luther King stated the quote ""we have come to our nation’s capital to cash a check." I think that he
trying to get the point across that it is time that All Men Are Created Equal meaning that every person no matter their
gender, race, or religion should be treated equally and should be able to stand side by side.

Reason #1: Evidence 1A: Evidence 1B:


" When the architects of our republic
This note was a promise that all men,
I think that Dr. King is trying wrote the magnificent words of the
yes, black men as well as white men
to say that King is promising Constitution and the declaration of
would be guaranteed the inalienable
that African Americans will be Independence, they were signing a
rights of life, liberty, and the pursuit of
getting the rights they never promissory note to which every
happiness."
had. American was to fall heir.

Commentary 1A:
The quote is explaining that when the founding fathers wrote the Constitution they were signing a note that elaborated that all men should be treated
equally no matter their. This also elaborates on reason 1 because Dr.King is trying to get the point across to African Americans that the time is
coming that they will be given equal rights and in order for him to promise this he had include factual evidence that can't be denied so that the
audience could be assured of their rights.

Commentary 1B:
This quote ties back to the thesis of giving a bad check( lacking guaranteed rights, the not promised that we'll be giving the same rights as white
man. This quote proves what Dr.King is talking about in the first reason

Reason #2 Evidence 2A: Evidence 2B:


"It is obvious today that America
Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has
Negros and whites have the same rights has defaulted on this
given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has
on paper but in reality, those rights cant promissory not, insofar as her
come back marked as "insufficient funds
be exercised because of segregation citizens of color are concerned."

and hatred each race has towards each " We refuse to believe that there

other are insufficient funds in the


great value of opportunity of this
nation.

Commentary 2A:
This quote is saying that America has not defaulted or correctly used the promissory not which should be legally. It then goes by saying
that her citizens of color are concerned because they are the ones that are indulging hypocrisy. This causes races to have hatred towards
each other because there's is secret animosity that one race is superior than another

Commentary 2B:
As reason two is saying that our rights can't be exercised because of segregation and hatred to each other is when america has given us a bad check.
In the story a bad check can be represented as the lack of guaranteeing the rights of citizens. Since there is hatred towards the African American
community they don't even receive the bare minimum.

Conclusion:
Dr.King effective use of these words shows many other citizens around America what AA people have to indulge in the southern states.
He used charged language in order to get his points across and he emphasizes the promissory note from the Founding Fathers. The
Constitution was not used as written on the paper which causes disruption among the community and the government writing bad
checks to black people. Dr. King want citizens to utilize what they do have such as their voice to reiterate to the government the right that
we did have and were supposed to be guaranteed. Being born with the color of dark skin would have failed you if you were living in the
1900s.

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