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Generally, all religions see children as having a duty to obey their parents which is part of showing
respect to them/respect should be shown in return for their parents’ love and commitment to
them/many religions see children has having roles within the family such as helping out with
chores/looking after siblings/learning about their religious faith/participating in religious practices
eg. being taught their religion, taking part in worship/they continue the family and traditions/care for
parents (in old age)/bring joy and happiness to parents, etc.
Commentary
This student hasn’t read the question carefully and in the first part of the answer, has explained
parental responsibilities to their children. The first quotation isn’t found in the Gospels and the
second doesn’t relate to any teaching of Jesus to children.
2 marks
Commentary
This student has also not read the question carefully. It is more about the role of parents and the
purpose of children rather than their role.
0 marks
Student A
Commentary
This student has made two developed points. Good use of specialist terms.
4 marks
Commentary
This student’s answer is fairly brief, but nevertheless has done what was required. There are two
developed points, each showing the influence of the belief in charity on Jewish lives.
4 marks
Commentary
This student has given one explanation of the Real Presence but has not given an influence.
1 mark
Commentary
This student does not appear to understand the term ‘Real Presence’ but the second point gives
an influence that does relate to it, so has been credited.
1 mark
• The First Sight: the Buddha saw a frail old man / his first real experience of old age / this sight
showed the Buddha impermanence (anicca) and suffering (dukkha).
• The Second Sight: the Buddha saw someone lying in the road in agony / his first real
experience of illness / his first real experience of sickness / illness becomes a reality of life for
the Buddha / illness shows impermanence (anicca) and suffering (dukkha).
• The Third Sight; The Buddha saw a dead man carried through the streets in a funeral
procession / his first real experience of death / he realised that death comes to everyone / if
someone was born, they would go through the process of growing older, illness, suffering and
death / there was no escape, even for kings.
• The Fourth Sight; a different sight to the other three; a holy or religious man / the Buddha saw a
man dressed in rags and carrying an alms bowl / the man had a peaceful expression on his face
/ the Buddha felt inspired to be like this holy man and to become a wandering truth–seeker / this
was perhaps the beginning of the Buddha’s quest to search for the answer to the problem of
why people suffer and how to stop that suffering, etc.
Commentary
This student shows sound understanding of several specialist terms, using them appropriately.
4 marks
Commentary
This student also showed understanding through appropriate use of some specialist terms.
4 marks
Refer to sacred writings or another source of Muslim belief and teaching in your answer. (5
marks)
Commentary
This student has given and explained two beliefs about the Day of Judgement. A quotation has
also been given, but can’t be credited as it was not attributed to a source of authority.
4 marks
Commentary
This student has given two developed points about the Day of Judgement, but there’s no reference
to any source of authority.
4 marks
High-level response
Student A
Commentary
This student has made two developed reasons and has included a quotation which has been
correctly attributed to the Bible.
5 marks
Commentary
This student has made developed reason from Christianity and Buddhism. The quotation to
support the first reason is correctly attributed to St Mark’s Gospel.
5 marks
Arguments in support
• Worship that follows a set pattern or routine becomes very familiar to worshippers / becomes a
tradition over centuries / so they can hope to understand God by repeating the routine and
meditating about its meaning.
• The liturgy will generally be led by a priest, and what the priest says and does will help
worshippers to understand God / for example in the Catholic Mass, worshippers will become used
to the Eucharistic Prayer which uses the words of Jesus at the Last Supper / which helps them to
understand that Jesus died in order to save humanity from sin.
• Liturgy enables people in any country to feel part of worship even when language is unfamiliar.
Student A
Commentary
This student makes three simple points: praying more, going to church more often and then getting
closer to God. The answer repeats the wording of the question many times, but there’s no
development of the points made. It is a Level 1 answer.
3 marks
Commentary
This student has made two points, each of which has slight development. The answer is therefore
just into Level 2.
4 marks
Arguments in support
• All that Christians need to do to be saved from sin is to believe in/have faith in Jesus / Paul talks
about this in Romans 3–5 / everybody is saved who has faith in Jesus (3:20–26) / they are
treated as righteous because they believe.
• Christians are not justified by works (what they do) / nobody can earn righteousness and
be saved / being saved from sin is not a matter of bargain or sale.
• The sin of Adam and Eve separated humans from God / so that all humans inherit the original
sin of Adam and Eve / Jesus atoned for the sins of humanity by his sacrifice on the cross / but
this does not mean that people can earn a place in heaven by doing good works / because
they will always fall short of the standard set by Jesus / however, God loves humanity, and
salvation is
offered as a gift.
Salvation comes through God’s grace and the Spirit / even though humans will always fall short of
the standards set by Jesus / but Christians believe that grace is not earned but is given by the
presence of the Holy Spirit in their hearts / and by this they will be saved.
Paul concludes that ‘All are justified freely by God’s grace through the redemption that came by
Jesus’, etc.
If belief and grace were everything needed for Christians to be saved from sin, then everybody
would be saved / but the Bible makes it clear that this is not the case / the Parable of the Sheep
and the Goats, for example, makes it clear that those who do not live by God’s commands will
go to hell (Matthew 25:31–46) / to be saved, something more is needed.
Grace and Spirit are not themselves a certain way of being saved / good works are needed /
meaning that Christians should obey God’s commands as well as they are able.
Since Christians can never be perfect, God’s grace is what allows them to be saved even when
they have sinned / so long as they repent and try to follow God’s commands in the future.
If belief in Jesus were the only requirement for Christians to be saved / then they could break
some or all of God’s commands and still go to heaven.
Christians therefore need both faith and works to be saved from sin / this is what the Letter of
James says (2:14–26) / if a fellow human being lacks food or clothing and someone says they
love them but they do not feed or clothe them, that is useless / faith without works is dead / just
as a body without spirit is dead, faith without works is also dead.
Some Christians believe that baptism is needed to be saved from sin, etc.
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