Writing

Portfolio

Made by Nguyen
Minh Khue

10E15
 Table of
content
1.Outline Collection - 03
a) Compare Contrast: Doctors and
Teachers ............ 04
b) Problems and Solutions: Poor
time management........12
c) Process essay: How to lead a
happy life.......20
d) Causes and Effects: Plastic in
marine life........28

2. Entry draft
peer check - 39
3. Entry writing
revised version - 44
4. Self-reflection - 46
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 Compare and
Contrast
Teachers and Doctors

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 Outline

Topic
Topic: Compare-
Contrast teachers
and doctors
Subject: Teachers
and Doctors
Key words:
Compare -
Analysis
Contrast;
Teachers;
Doctors
Genre:
Comparative
essay

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Group Outline
1. Introduction:
Hook: similarities and differences between
teacher and doctor
Specify the theme
Thesis: Even though doctors and teachers
have many similarities between these two
jobs, there are differences between these two
jobs.
2. Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: Teachers and doctors both
devote much to society, require specialized
knowledge and high mortality
They both have ample mental skills like
positive self-talk, enhancing confidence,
goal-setting, achieving the most productive
mindset
Jobs require specialized knowledge and
discrete qualifications in their own fields to
practically master it
They work and interact with many people
every day to express unilateral speculation
and help others at their onerous issues

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 3. Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence: Differences such as the purpose, the fee to
learn and the working environments divided these two.
Aspect 1:Purpose
+Teacher: to give information and guide the students, leading
students to the purpose of life, inspiring dreams, and pushing
the limits of human potential
+Doctor: to do research about some epidemics, cure
hazardous diseases, take care of their patients, enhance the
overall health of the residents
Aspect 2:The education
+Doctor: Follow a pre-med track in undergrad where they
focus on math, biology, and physics. They should target
colleges that offer a six-year medical track.
+Teacher: 4-year bachelor’s degree, complete a one-to-two-
year master’s degree, prefer GPA to 3.0.
Aspect 3:working environment
+Doctor: in need of electricity and clean rooms free from
microbes for doing experiments and treating the patients
correctly
+Teacher: continue working and teaching without electricity
in rooms that are far from being ideally clean
Conclusion paragraph:
Restate the thesis+point: In general, doctors and teachers play
an important role because of their abilities to improve lives,
make them safer and healthier, and share their knowledge and
skills with the world.
4. Opinion/Realization:It is hard to imagine this world without
these professions and this is why people should respect both.

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Problems and
Solutions
Poor time management

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 Outline

Topic
Topic: Problems
and Solution
related to poor
time
management
Subject: People
struggling
managing their
time
Analysis
Key words:
Problems,
Solution, Poor
time
management
Genre: Problem
and Solution
essay

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 Group outline
1. Intro

In today's fast-paced world, time management is considered to be one of the

most essential skills that lead to success. Poor time management can have
negative consequences such as reduced productivity and an adverse impact
on one's health. This essay will explore the challenges associated with poor
time management, as well as providing possible solutions to tackle this issue.

2. Body:

- Problem 1: Health problems

Poor time management may cause numerous negative effects and one of the
noticeable impacts is burnout. Burnout happens when you are stressed
because there is not enough time left to complete any tasks, which is a
harmful mental illness.
Poor time management may also lead to an imbalanced biological clock since
more time is wasted and less time is used to relax, eat or sleep. Even some
people choose to skip meals so they can finish work on time.
- Problem 2: Productivity problems
Poor time management obviously leads to a decrease in productivity since
there would be less time to complete tasks and as a consequence, the results
would not be at the highest quality.
Not only the quality but the quantity of completed tasks also decline. Poor
time management makes it hard to finish work on time so there may still be
some work left and through many times, the incomplete tasks stack up while
the finished ones only take up a small part.

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 Group outline
- Solution 1:
However, there are still possible solutions for these problems.
Making a to-do list everyday may help us stick to the schedule
and mention to us how many and what tasks need to be
completed. It also helps us to prioritize from the most crucial
work to the least so it is impossible to miss any deadlines or
finish any work late.

- Solution 2:
Poor time management can be changed slowly and giving up
bad habits is the first step. Procrastinating and multitasking
are two actions that need to be eliminated. While
procrastinating leads to the lack of time to complete tasks,
multitasking could make the quality of the work decrease

3. Conclusion
In conclusion, poor time management can have significant
impacts on various aspects of our lives.The consequences are
poor work performance and multiple health related issues.To
address poor time management, individuals should prioritize
self-care,establish boundaries and engage in stress-reducing
activities.

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Vocabulary

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 Process essay
How to lead a happy
life

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 Outline

Topic
Topic: How to
lead a happy
life
Subject:
People who
don't know
how to lead a
Analysis
happy
Key words:
Lead, Happy
life
Genre: Process
essay

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 Group outline
1.Intro:
"Have you ever wondered what it truly takes to
lead a life filled with genuine happiness? In a
world that often prioritizes success and material
wealth, it is easy to overlook the essential steps
needed to cultivate lasting joy. But imagine a life
where contentment and fulfillment are not just
fleeting moments, but a consistent state of being.
Join me on a journey to unlock the secrets of true
happiness and discover the transformative
power of intentional living. ”
2. Body
- Understanding Happiness:
Contemplate what truly matters that bring you
joy and satisfaction.
Expressing gratitude is a superb way to help you
focus on the positive aspects of your life, and
contributes to overall happiness.

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- Embracing Positivity:
Explain how positivity, focusing on the brighter side of life, even in
challenging situations, can lead to increased life span, lower rates of
depression, and better psychological and physical well-being
Do not be unconfident about your flaws and always willing to better
yourself
- Treat yourself. Take care of yourself both physically and mentally.
Spare time for yourself -> boost self-esteem and confidence
Avoid negative language, such as complaining or gossiping as they can
lead to a negative mindset. On the other hand, using positive language
can help to promote a positive mindset.
Always prepare yourself for new experiences and challenges.
- Building Strong Relationships:
Human beings are social creatures, and meaningful relationships
contribute significantly to our happiness quotient.
- Pursuing Passions:
Elaborate on how pursuing our passions gives us a sense of fulfillment
and joy. They allow us to express ourselves and contribute to our
personal growth.
3. Conclusion:
In conclusion, happiness is a choice. By understanding ourselves,
nurturing relationships, finding purpose and embracing positivity we
can create a truly happy life. Take action now, implement these
practices, and embrace the journey. Your happiness is within reach,
so go for it!

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Verbs:

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Collocations:

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 Causes and
Effects essay
Plastic in marine life

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 Outline
Topic:

Topic
Plastic in
marine life
Subject:
Human
Key words: Analysis
Marine life,
Causes,
Effect
Genre:
Causes and
Effects essay

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 Group outline
1. Intro:
The world's oceans are in crisis.
Plastic pollution has become a
major environmental issue, with
devastating consequences for
marine life. From microscopic
plankton to majestic whales,
every creature in the sea is
affected by the scourge of plastic.
In this essay, we will explore the
causes and consequences of
plastic pollution in marine life,
and discuss potential solutions to
this urgent problem.

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 Group outline
2. Body
I - Causes:
- Plastic waste from tourists:
+ Plastic waste can be non-reusable
utensils from restaurants along the coast, it
could also be the water bottles and packages
visitors left after finishing their sunbathe on the
beach.
+ Single-use plastics such as water
bottles or zip-lock bags are frequently used by
tourists. These items are convenient for
travelers, however, if they are not properly
managed, they will pile up into a mountain of
trash and pose a detrimental effect on marine
creatures.
+ Tourists may not be fully aware of
the environmental impact of their actions,
especially in regions where waste management
and environmental education are not
prioritized. A lack of awareness can lead to
irresponsible disposal practice
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 Group outline
- Plastic waste from local residents:
+ Fishermen drop nets, lines,
ropes and abandoned vessels,
which are mostly made of non-
recyclable materials, especially
plastic.
+ Residents along the coast
directly litter domestic waste into
the ocean.
+ Plastic waste from residents
along the river banks and streams
also contribute to the pollution as
the water flows to the sea.

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2.Consequence
-Risk of marine species ingest plastic debris
+More and more species ingest or be entangled
by plastic debris or litters, such as fish, seabirds and
whales,etc

+386 marine fish species including 210 species of

commercial importance have been recorded to
ingest plastic debris → lead to extinction of varied
species or some on the verge of extinction

-Threaten to human’s health

+Plastic debris can significantly menace water
source,food safety and quality,coastal tourism by
infiltrating ecosystem
+Plastic causes more than ten categories of
serious diseases, including at least three forms of
cancer, disruptions to the endocrine system and
hormone imbalances, endometriosis, male fertility
struggles and problems for fetus development

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 Group outline
Conclusion:
The consequences of plastic pollution
on marine life are dire and far-
reaching. From suffocation and
starvation to entanglement and
ingestion, the effects of plastic on our
oceans are devastating. But it's not too
late to make a difference. We can all
play a part in reducing our use of single-
use plastics, recycling properly, and
supporting initiatives that aim to clean
up our oceans. It's time to act now,
before it's too late for our oceans and
the creatures that call them home. Let's
work together to create a cleaner,
healthier future for our planet.

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Vocabulary

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 Draft Personal
Writing Entry
These days, the term “mindfulness” has
become popular among people, especially
the genz generation. The reason for its
prevalence is probably because of its useful
impacts on the mental health of people.
The effects of mindfulness can be various,
one of the most conspicuous changes is the
reduction of anxiety. Since mindfulness
allows people to be conscious of everything
around them, they know the progress of
every work and task, therefore,
mindfulness reduces the level of anxiety
considerably. In other words, mindfulness
alleviates symptoms of anxiety.

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 Draft
Another impact to be mentioned is that mindfulness
also manages the level of depression. This state of mind
helps people to think straight without overthinking,
which directly leads to a positive result that thoughts
and emotions are controlled. Compulsive thoughts may
result in uncontrollable behaviors and even harm to
people. Therefore, mindfulness not only manages
depression but also prevents unwanted activities from
happening
Mindfulness can also enhance the well-being of people
practicing it. The consciousness of people makes them
aware of the activities and people around them, which
also lead to a higher level of happiness and satisfaction.
Therefore, mental health will be remarkably increased.
In conclusion, there are numerous positive effects of
mindfulness, such as the reduction of anxiety,
depression management and enhanced well-being.
Those are all impacts on mental health, which are
absolutely beneficial.

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Peercheck

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Peercheck

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 Revised version
personal writing
entry
These days, the term “mindfulness” has become
popular among people, especially the genz
generation. The reason for its prevalence is
probably because of its useful impacts on the
mental health of people.
The effects of mindfulness can be various, one of
the most conspicuous changes is the reduction of
anxiety. Since mindfulness allows people to be
conscious of everything around them, they know
the progress of every work and task, therefore,
mindfulness reduces the level of anxiety
considerably. In other words, mindfulness
alleviates symptoms of anxiety.
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 Another impact to be mentioned is that
mindfulness also manages the level of depression.
This state of mind helps people to think straight
without overthinking, which directly leads to a
positive result that thoughts and emotions are
controlled. Compulsive thoughts may result in
uncontrollable behaviors and even harm to
people. Therefore, mindfulness not only manages
depression but also prevents unwanted activities
from happening
Mindfulness can also enhance the well-being of
people practicing it. The consciousness of people
makes them aware of the activities and people
around them, which also lead to a higher level of
happiness and satisfaction. Therefore, mental
health will be remarkably increased.
In conclusion, there are numerous positive effects
of mindfulness, such as the reduction of anxiety,
depression management and enhanced well-
being. Those are all impacts on mental health,
which are absolutely beneficial.

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 Self reflection
I have never done anything like this
listening portfolio before, therefore, I was
hindered by many difficulties in the
process of completing this. However,
hardships are not the only thing I
experienced from this writing portfolio,
besides, I have also learned numerous
useful skills. There are many unforgettable
memories in the period I finish this writing
portfolio and it would be a shame if I don’t
mention the novelties I experienced. The
first difficulty is to summarize the outlines,
which includes both the group outlines and
the language banks. The positive side of
this is that I gained my concluding skills,
however, this task is really time-consuming
and requires meticulous adjustments.

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 Self reflection
Not only the outlines, the peer check essays
also came as a challenge to me. I had to
finish an essay normally, then I had to
exchange my draft with a peer and we
checked each other’s drafts. Then I will
have to fill in the sheet which the teacher
gave me, each category is rated in a specific
scale and I must provide the evidence of
each category. I also have to correct
grammar, word order, spelling,...mistakes.
However, this is just my first project so I
hope that in my future projects, I will be
able to present a better version of it with
my advanced skills and updated
knowledge.

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Thank you

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