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Hot Air Balloon Ride


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During recess,

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Did you know that you don't always have to use the word good in your writing? Try to use different words for an
overused word like good. It will make your work more fun for others to read.
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The movie was so good that it brought in millions of dollars at the box office on its opening weekend. Everyone
thought the actors were very good in it. People thought the special effects were really good, too.

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