The Eskimos lived first time in Alaska for more 7000 years ago.

Nowadays,
about 16% the Alaskans is the Eskimos. These people is really three groups: the
Inupiag, the Yupik and the Alutiiq. These groups are not quite different, but they
speak different langueges.
Alaska is a part of Russia in a long time. Then in 1867, The US bought it from
Russia with 7.2 million USD (with the price of 7.2 million USD). Many people think
this price is very much. But in 1840s, the Americans found the gold in Alaska, then in
1901, they found a little oil in there. Then, in 1950s, they found a lot of oil.
Alaska is a big place. This is the biggest state - big twice as much as than
Texas - the next biggest state. But not many people live in there. More 8 million of
people live in New York city, but only have 730000 of peole live in all the Alaska.
And about a half of among they live in Anchorrage city.
Alaska have many mountains and glaciers. The glaciers like a river of ice. The
Matanuska glacier is one of the most beautiful.
The winter is freezing and includes many storms. In the winter, the sky is very
dark because not sun in the north part of the state, in another areas, it just comes out
from 2 to 7 hour per day.
LẦN 2
Eskimos first lived in Alaska more than 7000 years ago. Nowadays, about
16% of people are Eskimos. These people are really three groups: the Inupiaq, the
Yupik,
=> of the people/of Alaskans
the Alutiiq. These groups aren’t too different, but they speak the different languages.
=> speak different languages
Alaska is a part of Russia a long time. Then, in 1867, USA bought it from
Russia
=> was a part => for a long time
by 7.2 million USD. Many people said that the price is too much money. But by the
=> for 7.2 million USD => was too much money/was
too high
end of the 1840s, Americans found gold in Alaska. Then in 1901, they found some
oil there. Then, in the 1950s, they found a lot of oil.
Alaska is a very big place (=> large place). This is the biggest state - twice as
big as Texas - the next biggest state, but not many people live there. More than 8
million (Over 8 million) people live in New York city, but only have 730 000 people
who live in all of Alaska.
Alaska have many mountains and glaciers. The glaciers are like the rivers of
ice.
=> has
The Matanuska is one of the most beautiful glacier. (=> glaciers)
The winter is freezing and includes (or has) many storms. (The winters are
freezing with a lot of snow storms). In the winter, the sky is very dark
because it hasn’t the sun in the northern pole of the state, but in
=> there is no sun => the northern part
 others areas, it only comes out 2 - 7 hours (=> comes out for 2 - 7 hours) per day.
Chương 2
Lần 1
Visiting Kodiak island
There has many outside fun activities in Kodiak island.
=> is => on
Kodiak island locates the northern of Alaska. This is the second largest island in USA
=> in the USA
but it has less than 160 km of the roads. => of roads

Trong tiếng Anh, khi nói về số lượng hoặc độ dài của một loại đường nào đó, chúng ta không cần
dùng mạo từ “the” trước từ “roads”. Ví dụ: “There are 100 km of roads in this city.” hoặc “The country
has 5000 km of railroads.”

Trong trường hợp của bạn, bạn đang nói về tổng số độ dài của tất cả các đường trên đảo Kodiak,
không phải một số đường cụ thể nào đó. Do đó, bạn không nên dùng mạo từ “the” trước từ “roads”.
Câu sửa có thể là: “This is the second largest island in the USA but it has less than 160 km of roads.”

It has many high mountains, green forests, rivers, lakes. About 30 000 tourists visit
Kodiak island every year. They come to climb mountain (=> mountains), go fishing,
watch whales that jumbing (=> jumping) under the sea and go camping. Bear -
watching is also an activity that the tourists is very favorited.
The island is named for (=> is named after) a Kodiak big bear (=> the
Kodiak "big" bear”).
=> “named after” khi nói về việc đặt tên theo một người hoặc một vật
nào đó.
Nếu là theo một con gấu cụ thể, thì câu này cần có mạo từ xác định “the” trước
“Kodiak big bear”. Nếu là theo loài gấu Kodiak nói chung, thì câu này cần có dấu
ngoặc kép quanh từ “big” để chỉ ra rằng đó là một phần của tên gọi chính thức của
loài gấu này

It has more than 3500 animals that is very great and live the forests (=> live in the
forests). But you have to quiet if you want to see them.
About 13 000 people live in Kodiak island all of year (=> on Kodiak all year)
and half of them live in Kodiak city. These remaining people (=> The rest of
people/The others) live in the small villages along the sea. Alutiiqs is the first people
who live in the island. They came to there 7500 years ago and stayed.
Today, about 17% of the residents in the Kodiak (=> on the Kodiak) island
are Alutiiqs. They speak English and Alutiiq. In 2010, only 50 people speak Alutiiq!
But now the schools is teaching this language because they don’t want to it die. (=>
want it to die)
The most important business acctivities there is (=> are) fishing and tourism.
There has (=> are) 7 hotels, 17 eating sites (=> place to eat) and many stores
(=> shops) in Kodiak city. The stores sell things that made in the island.
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Enjoying the outside sports
Do you like the outside sports? Alaska is a place that for you (Alaska is the place for
you/Alaska is a place that is for you)
Many tourists come Alaska to enjoy outside walking in the clean, cold sky.
And they come to play the adventure (extreme) sports, that sports is excited
(exciting) but also dangerous.
Some people come Alaska (come to Alaska) to climb the McKinley mountain
in Denail National Park. That mountain is 6194 meters high, the highest mountain in
the North America.
From in 1932 to 2012 (From 1932 to 2012/Between 1932 and 2012), 120
climbers died on the mountain. On the June in 2012 (In June 2012), 4 Japan
(Japanese) climbers died in an avalache.
Whitewater rafting is also a popular sport. The Nenana river, in Denail
National Park, there is fast flows (=> flow. Bởi vì cần dùng dạng số ít của động từ
“flow” để phù hợp với chủ ngữ số ít “there”) in some places.
The Alyeska is a (an) ideal place to play (go) paragliding. Don’t worry if you
don’t know how to play (do/try) paragliding.
A teacher (an instructor) who goes paragliding with you can help you enjoy
the beautiful mountains below.
Skiing is very popular in Alaska. There is much (a lot of) snow and it is a
good place to ski. Eagle Crest is a (an) excilent montain to ski (for skiing).
And there is many (a lot of) exciting things to enjoy in Alaska (bởi vì sau V là
một danh từ số nhiều “things”). One of among these (one of these nghĩa là một
trong số đó/Some of these) that (dùng is vì mệnh đề thiếu động từ chính/”are” vì
S là Some of) less exciting than paragliding or whitewater safting but they (=> it. Vì
chủ ngữ là “one”) are exciting (vì S là it => is)
- finding (looking for) gold on the rivers on the Kenai peninsula
- flying glaciers (flying over the glaciers) through a plane or helicopter
- visiting the Sea Life Center in Seward. You can see the excellent sea
animals.
Some people also like travel (like to travel) through Alaska. In 2010, Andrew
Skuka went 7600km through Alaska and Yukon for 176 days. That’s 43km per day.
Almost time (Most of the time)he is walked. He used to 6 the boots (He used six
pair of boots). But he also go (went) rafting on the river and ski (skiing). He sleeps
(slept) in the tent.
When Andrew ski (skied) in Denali Park, he is very worry about the avalaches and
snowstorms. He didn’t see any avanlaches but has (had) a really strong storm and his
tent is blew away (is blown away)!. Andrew went for 48000km in his life and he
don’t (doesn’t) want to stop. When he isn’t working, he writes the books that tell his
trips.

Part 1
Eskimos first lived in A more than 7000 years ago. Today, about 16 % of the
Alaskans are Eskimo. These people are really three groups: the Inupiaq, the Yupik
and the Alutiiq. These groups isn’t very different but they speak different languages.
A was a part of R for a long time. Then in 1867, the US bought it from R for 7.2
million USD. Many people thought this was too much money. Then by the end of
1901, americans found gold in A, in 1901, they found some oil there. Then, in the
1950s, they found a lot of oil.
A is a very big place. This is the largest state - twice as big as Texas, the second
largest state. But there are not many people living there. More than 8 million people
live in NY city, but there are only 730000 people living in all of A. and about half of
these live in AN city.
A has many mountains and glaciers. The glaciers are like the rivers of ice. The Ma
glacier is one of the most beautiful.
The winter is freezing with a lot of snowstorms. In the winter, it is very dark because
there is no sun in the northern part of the state, but in other areas, it comes out for 2 -
7 per day.

Visiting K island
There are a lot of outside fun activities on K island
K island is located in the southern A. this is the second largest island in the US but it
has no more than 160 of roads. K island has many high mountains, green forests,
rivers, lakes,… about 30000 visitors come to K island every year. They come to climb
mountains, catch fish, watch whales that jumping under the sea and go camping.
Watching bear is also popular.
K island is named after the big K bear. There are more than 3500 great animals that
live in the forests. But you have to be quite to see it.
About 13000 people live on K island all year and half of these live in K city. The rest
of the people live in the small villages. Alutiiqs are the first people who live on the
island. They came to there 7500 years ago and stayed.
The most inportant activities there are going fish and tourism. There are 7 hotels, 17
eating sites and many shops on K island. The shops sell lots of things that made.

Chương 4
Green travel in A
Tourism can be good for the countries. But tourism also maybe bring the issues.
Visitors spend on much money. dùng sai giới từ. Bạn nên dùng "on" khi bạn muốn
nói về mục đích hoặc lý do tiêu tiền. Ví dụ: Visitors spend "a lot of" money "on"
souvenirs. They live (stay at) in the hotels, eat in the restaurans and shop in the
stores. This is good for A and the residents here. But a lot of people who are same
place can make lots of noises. And that can difficult with the animals in A. Visitors
take the rubish in the forests, rives, sea. Animals and fishes can eat them and can be
sick.
Many people in travel offices in A want to this state always clean. They want to the
animals that are be safe and live a normal life. This is the reason why they want to
everyone implement green travel.