COPYREADING AND HEADLINE WRITING

Assessment Sheet

INSTRUCTION: You are a copyreader from the “The Dumaguete Standard (TDS)” newspaper. Stanley
Reyes, a news writer of the said media firm, handed to you a draft of his straight news article for editing
for print. Kindly copyread his article below using the appropriate copyreading symbols, then supply ONE
(1) HEADLINE at the top of the article, and provide the appropriate slugline on the top-left, and the
following printer’s instruction on the right side of each part of the article: for the headline is 2 lines, Times
New Roman, boldface, 18 points, 4 columns, at most 20 units per line, hanging indentation, and
downstyle; for the lead is Times New Roman, boldface, 12 points and 25 ems; and for the body is Times
New Roman, lightface, 12 points and 12 ems.

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Citing outcome the ineffective of the “no Segergation, No Collection’ policy, lack of duecoordination with
barangays, and the people’s complacent from the aforementioned measure,

Dumaguete Province was been at impase [or deadend] in maintaining proper waste management, the
cityy enviromental and natural resource office (CEn RO) said Friday, last six october 2023

In an interview with the Dumaguete standard, CENRO head Patrimonio Cherry Mae the beautiful said that
as the city’s golden-rule on watte collection being implemented, she is still “over--whelmed so by the
Garbage Around.”“Sins we are imposing or following the sysstem of No Segregation, No Collection’ the
city has dirtier! because of [unsegregated] garage around, because we leave them behind ” Patrimonio
stated.

The police sought too ensure that establishment and instutions segregating their waste as biodegradable,
recyclable, residual hazardous wastes before colection by the cenro, imposing further penalties for
violations.Ma’am i-copy ra ni tanan?

“We don’t collect if it’s not segregated duh, so you can see now {there are much} waste left on the streets,
but I’m not happy with this!, because when you see you say garbage ‘Oh, we [the CERNO] are
responsible for this,’ but we have-beendoing that for how many years collecting everythings, and they are
not helping. But still, we did not achieve the result that we wanted to achieve. Still, the waste [is] piling up
in the MRF,” Patrimonio added. Patirmonio added(2) the need for barangays across Dumaguete to ramp
up segregation efforts in their respective jurisdictions, citing the need to enforce segregation at source

The CENRO urged further residentts to “just follow the law” in segregating waste their at source and
avoided illegal activities such as throwing in river-Banks and burning open. “If you are helping us, the city,
you are also helPing yourself because whatever happens to the city, you will affected. odiba

“After, we are just helping all the barangays, but then we did not achieve a better solution to the problem,
because our garbage will pile up in our dump-site, and we are now diposing f our waste to Bayawan.
Looking into this situation, how can we compel or pusher the barangays to really move to help in the
segregation?” Patrimonyo said.

Article Source: https://medium.com/@thenorsunian/cenro-dgte-wails-city-wide-waste-issue-1d039c1df6cf (Note: some details are altered from original article.)
 PAGWAWASTO AT PAG-UULO NG BALITA
Sipi ng Pagsusuri

PANUTO: Ikaw ay isang tagawasto mula sa pahayagang “Lingguhang Tinig (LT)”. Si Chloe Masangkay,
isang news writer ng nasabing pahayagan, ay nagbigay sa iyo ng draft ng kanyang straight news article
para i-edit nang mailimbag. Mangyaring wastuhin ang kanyang artikulo sa ibaba gamit ang naaangkop na
mga simbolo sa pagwawasto, pagkatapos ay magbigay ng ISANG (1) ULO NG BALITA sa tuktok ng
artikulo, at ibigay ang naaangkop na slugline sa kaliwang tuktok at ang sumusunod na tagubilin ng printer
(PI) sa kanang bahagi ng bawat bahagi ng artikulo: para sa headline ay 1 linya, Times New Roman,
boldface, 18 puntos, 4 na column, hindi hihigit sa 35 unit bawat linya, crossline at caps lowecase (Clc);
para sa lead ay Times New Roman, boldface, 12 puntos at 25 ems; at para sa katawan ay Times New
Roman, lightface, 12 puntos at 12 ems.

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Ito ang reaksiyon ni Garcia sa apela ng Teachers Dignity Coalition (TD C) na pagkaloobanng
overtime pay ang mga guro na walang tigil na nagwork sa hulaan ng mahigit sa 24-oras.

Sinabi naman ni Garcia na kahit gaano man kalayo nila naising pagkaluban ng overtime pay mga guros
ay hindi naman nilaito kayang gawin dahil wala aniyang Budget ang poll body dito para,

[Many of our Department of Health Education employees work beyond 24 hours and are thus entitled to
overtime pay,] nanawagan ni tdc Chair BenjoBasas

Sa ilalim kasi aniya ng joint circular ng Commission on COA – Department of Budget and
Management (COA-DBM), tanging ang mga emplyado lamang ng ahensiya ang entitled sa overtime pay.
Paliwanag ng polll chief, ang mga gurong nagsilbi bilang electoral board members noong eleksiyon ay
hindi empleyado ng Comelec?

“In as much as we would like to give, however, there this joint COA-DBM (Commission on Audit –
Department of Budget and Management) rectangular which provides that onlyemployees of an agency
[are] entitled to claim Overtime. The teachers who served as electoral members board are not employees
of Comelec,” pahayag pa ni Garica, nang matanong ng mga mamamahayag hinggil sa apela ng tdc!

MANILA, Phils. — kahapon nilinaw ni commission on Elections (Com-Elec) Chairman George erwin
garcia the great na hindi maaaring nakapagbigay ang poll body ng overtime pay para sa mga gurong
nagsilbi sa katatatapos na 2023 Sangguniang Kabataan Elections Baranguay at (BSKE), ganern

Pinagmulan ng Artikulo: https://www.philstar.com/pilipino-star-ngayon/bansa/2023/11/03/2308577/walang-ot-pay-sa-teachers-na-nagsilbi-sa-bske (Paalala: binago

ang ilang mga detalye mula sa orihinal na artikulo.)