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The fact of the Titan submarine implosion

Thesis statement: The tragic incident that occurred on the Titan


submarine, which was an implosion, was a natural event and not
deliberate. There are several reasons to support this claim.

A. Introduction:

B. The risks surrounding a submarine underwater

1. The enormous pressure


2. Sea storms, underwater waves
3. External collision, attack, water leakage

C. The manufacturing company, Ocean Gate

1. The presence of the CEO of the company in the submarine


2. Warnings from former employees
3. delayed ship launch by one year

D. Technical and manufacturing problems in the submarine

1. Malfunction of the control and steering system


2. Weakness in the navigation and early warning system
3. Poor quality of manufactured materials
E. Conclusion:

F. Reference: Helen Regan and others. (2023). Missing Titanic sub


crew killed after 'catastrophic implosion'. Available from:
http://www.CNN.com Accessed: June 23, 2023.

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