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CHARLES MOLESWORTH
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plunging past the despair. In "Tulips," for example, the imagery of forced
seeing, of vision itselfas the source of the exacerbated sensibility,assaults us
everywhere:
They have propped my head between the pillow and the sheet-cuff
Like an eye between two white lids that will not shut.
Stupid pupil, it has to take everythingin.
The comic, almost spitting disgust of the assonance in the phrase "stupid
pupil" adds to the allusive parody bf Emerson's "transparent eyeball" from
Nature.But this painful, forcedseeing is still betterthan the anesthetized drift
that constantlythreatensthe poet. But whatever the reader might feel,Plath
seems consciously desirous of either the driftor the pained fixation,as long as
they provide her with an extreme experiential locus.
I watched my teaset, my bureaus of linen, my books
Sink out of sight, and the water went over my head.
I am a nun now, I have never been so pure.
The openness to experience which some regard as one of the hallmarks of
American literaturebecomes, in Plath's poetry,an ironic balance point that
can tip either toward salvation or annihilation.
I didn't want any flowers,I only wanted
To lie with my hands turned up and be utterlyempty.
How free it is, you have no idea how free-
The peacefulness is so big it dazes you,
And it asks nothing, a name tag, a few trinkets.
It is what the dead close on, finally; I imagine them
Shutting their mouths on it, like a Communion tablet.
This pair of alternatives, salvation or annihilation, here joins in a single
image-turned-simile,and again the toneless quality of the lines parodies the
transcendentreligious structurethat lies behind them,just as "stupid pupil"
parodies Emerson. "So big it dazes you" and "you have no idea how free"
come from the vocabulary of schoolgirl intensification,and Plath built her
language almost exclusively out of various formsof intensification.Conden-
sation, catachresis, metonymy,and the strategiesof riddles and allusive jokes:
all these are devices to record and yet ward offthe numbing of ordinary
consciousness by an overwhelmingly fragmented object-world, a flood of
facticitythat simply will not submit to tenderness or mercy.
One of the critical cliches that sprang up around confessional poets was
that the language itself provided their salvation, that the redeeming word
could set right what the intractable world of egos, projects, deceits, and
self-destructionshad insidiouslytwisted.This canard still putativelyleftroom
for poets to develop personal styles and remain recognizably confessional.
Oddly enough, however, when thrownback on a radically personal axis, the
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end of his life Berryman was capable of beginning his talk with college
audiences by saying, "Well, why don't you go ahead and ask me how it feels
to be famous?"'
Part of the tension that makes Berryman's career interestingsprings
from the fact that he surely must have known the public who read Life
magazine was much less likely to maintain his poetryfor posteritythan was
the audience of "younger" poets in the college writing classes. Some critics
have pointed out how Berryman wrote an extremelyliteraryanti-literature,
fitfullytryingto outwit culture at its own game of great truth-makingby
throwingin the disjectamembra of language: puns, dialects, allusions to figures
from"current events," all creating a sort of mass-media mix, a consciousness
as scrambled as the six o'clock news, yet carefully wrought, ultimately
upholding artifice as the highest value. Berryman's audience, comprised of
would-be litterateurs,must have at hand a ready recall of thousands of
"savory" cultural tidbits, but they must not have spent so much time in
libraries that they've forgottento visit newsstands. The exhaustion of the
culture, and the exhaustion of the cultured individual, accept their final
threnody in Berryman's poetry. But to insure his salvation, Berryman was
willing to risk all forart, willing to risk his life to complete the last strokein
his self-portraitof the tormentedartistin the half-willedgrip of a crass age.
In an interviewpublished in the HarvardAdvocate,Berryman was asked
why he bothered to write poetry,especially considering that he himselfhad
said that a person must sacrificeeverythingto be a poet, and still the reward
was never money and only very limited prestige. He answered this way:
That's a tough question. I'll tell you a real answer. I'm taking
your question seriously.This comes fromHamann, quoted by
Kierkegaard. There are two voices, and the firstvoice says,
"Write!" and the second voice says, "For whom?" I think
that's marvellous; he doesn't question the imperative, you see
that. And the firstvoice says, "For the dead whom thou didst
love"; again the second voice doesn't question it; instead it
says, "Will they read me?" And the firstvoice says, "Aye, for
they return as posterity."Isn't that good?2
This answer is instructiveon many points,each of which illumines the Dream
Songsand other confessional poetry as well. Notice the real answer must be
singled out; the fact that the question was taken seriously needs special
testimony.The habits of irony,concealment, and defensivenesshave made it
necessary to expend part of the available artisticenergyqualifying the status
of one's language. Also, the answer quotes another writer,showing how often
the confessionalpoet traps himselfin the context of another's saying, despite
his attempt to be forthright.And the story invokes "voices," characterless
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private language out of the cultural confusion of the age and in findingan
audience (though Dylan's is obviously so much wider the comparison is
rather strained) of true believers who are willing, almost before the fact and
despite the repetitiousnessof the art, to see in the mock-casual defiance of
respectabilityan artistwho belongs at the top of the list, an artistwho merits
his fame by flaunting it. Unlike Dylan, however, Berryman ends with a
limited audience, smaller than that of baseball, and smaller too than that of
Wordsworth,since it must be made up of those who "follow" both with a
disinterested,yet animated, curiosity.
Berryman's art, then, thrives on what we might call the "dirty little
secret" of our desire forfame, the secret so bluntly and artlesslyrevealed by
Norman Podhoretz in Making It. But if Berryman was intent on making it,
Sylvia Plath seemed equally intent on not making it, on undoing her own
selfhoodwith all the fierceartisticattentionon concealment and mysterythat
Berryman has lavished on fame and self-display.When I speak of Plath's
concealment I mean to stressthe counter-forcein her confessional impulses,
the part of her poetic temperament that makes her turn a poem about the
hatefulness of her father into a quasi-ritual, a Freudian initiation into the
circlings around our darkest secrets.
There's a stake in your fat black heart
And the villagers never liked you.
They are dancing and stamping on you.
They always knew it was you.
Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through.
Strangely Transylvanian and oddly chthonic, the father in "Daddy" is one
only someone under analysis, or perhaps an adept in advanced comparative
mythology,could easily identify.But so great is the pain of her exacerbated
sensibility that only the greatest crimes against humanity will serve as
adequate metaphors for it:
I may be a bit of a Jew.
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Here the repetitions,the insistentrhymingon the "ou" sound, and the tone of
contemptuous fascination mimic and exorcise the child's fixationon author-
ity,self-hatred,and guilt. But who but a supreme egotistcould take the plight
of the victims of genocide as the adequate measure of her own alienation?
Perhaps ifwe didn't know the relativelycomfortablebourgeois background of
Plath's family, perhaps if we could say the poem was about authority "in
general," perhaps the feminists'need to make clear the far-reachingpower of
chauvinist "enemies" could be used to soften the barbarity of the poem's
rhetorical strategy.But the petulance of the voice here, its sheer unreason-
ableness masked as artistic frenzy,finds ready acceptance among a large
audience. This audience widened considerably when Plath's novel, The Bell
Jar, became a best seller. The novel hardly breaks through the linguistic
barriers the poetry crosses with such seeming ease, though late in the novel
the descriptions of a growing schizophrenic breakdown are extremely
effective,and one wonders if they were influenced by the theories and
writings of R. D. Laing, so well do they capture the mode of mental
operations described in The Divided Self.
But Plath's art remains a considerably private affair. In "You're," for
example, she obsessivelydescribes a fetusthrough a series of metaphors, and
the use of linked apposite clauses, with few active verbs (the participle is
Plath's favoritepart of speech), all in the space of two stanzas, each with a
symbolic nine lines. Here is the second stanza:
Vague as fog and looked for like mail.
Farther offthan Australia.
Bent-backed Atlas, our travelled prawn.
Snug as a bud and at home
Like a sprat in a pickle jar.
A creel of eels, all ripples.
Jumpy as a Mexican bean.
Right, like a well-done sum.
A clean slate, with your own face on.
The forwardbut incompleted thrustof the poem's title finds completion in
the last image of the poem, with its flat irony that celebrates and deflates
individuation, as if human identitywere both an unlimited possibilityand an
encumbering curse. Again, as with Berryman,the ironygenerates a mixing of
modes, a deliberate flaunting of propriety in favor of a higher logic of
connectiveness ("Bent-backed Atlas, our travelled prawn") which suggests
Auden at his campiest. But the structureof the poem portraysthe mind of
someone obsessed with a recurrentimage. The unborn child here achieves
somethinglike a mythologicalstatus, but one drawn in secular terms,a kind
of archetypal definition by inclusive, fortuitous resemblances. (George
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horrorsas her books present,it becomes impossible to finda titleor a line that
will rivetus, and finallythe poetryis read more out of a duty to listen to the
maimed than out of a sense of discoveryor artisticenergy,let alone tragedy.
The public clutching of her awkward language becomes its own reproach.
Berryman and Sexton were often occupied with denying the direct,
autobiographical basis fortheir poetry.But the recourse they had to theories
that stressedthe need foraesthetic distance and controlgrew less shelteringas
their careers progressed.Behind much of this, of course, were Eliot's famous
dicta about the impersonalityof the author and the need to separate the
"man who suffersand the mind that creates."4 But the practice of most
confessional poets went sharply counter to Eliot's reserve, and as the
modernist breakthrough seemed at once to be assimilated and yet incon-
sequential (or much less forceful),poets felta continuingneed to see theirart
as a challenge to the calcified surfacesof emotional life,"an ax forthe frozen
sea within us," as Sexton said, quoting Kafka. But confessional poetry
flourishedin the early and mid-sixties,and rather suddenly the wide-ranging
developments in America's cultural modes and life-stylesovertookthe "new"
manner. For a middle class on the way to socializing the use of marijuana the
revelation of a post-divorcebout of depression carried littleweight.What had
seemed to Snodgrass and Sexton in the late 1950s the most taboo subjects
became the topics of widespread and ordinary,if not always well-informed,
discussion. Emotional irregularitybecame a virtual commodity, advertised
and marketed; cultural instability and faddishness generated their own
growthcycles. As forBerryman and his obsession with fame and an alcoholic
self-destruction,he began more and more to look like a carry-pverfromthe
of
generation Hemingway and Fitzgerald, or to seem like a Norman Mailer
(with considerably less presence) on a television talk show. America could
only be titillatedby an author who made a great deal of money while he was
busy excoriatingpublic mores,and veryfew lyricpoets fittedthat description.
So what had started with considerable fanfare died out rather quickly;
the confessional mode became American poetry's firstcasualty of a public-
ity-blitz.Actually, many of the marks of confessionalpoetrypersisted,though
some latter-day disciples like Erica Jong returned them to their natural
habitat, the pornographic romana' clef.The speaker in confessional poetry
continues to survive, but now often in a surrealistic cloak, and the secrets
revealed are likely to come draped with an imagery borrowed from South
American poets. "The tulips are too excitable," says Plath at the opening of
her poem, and that same note of a near-hystericalsensibility,threatenedby a
world of objects and possessed of a narrow range of perfervid emotions,
sounds again and again in contemporarypoetry.
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realizing that the mere impulse toward a radical honesty fails to insure its
realization, since, as Irving Goffmandemonstrates,there can be no meaning
forthe selfwithout a social frame. Contemporary poetry,like its predecessor,
modern poetry, more often than not seems to be overheard rather than
spoken. And, it might be added, as confessional poetry lost its tendency to
public display, a poetryof the "interior life" replaced it, with an impulse to
etch rather than to proclaim, a need to suck imagery dry with the thirstof
egoism. Many contemporary poets convey the impression that they would
like to revel in their own sensibilityand free the resources of language from
any ideational or discursivepurpose. In tryingto explore this sensibilitythey
often resort to artistic strategiesthat resemble those of confessional poetry:
they resort to a tepid, defensively ironic attitude, they often try to be
winsomely childlike in their honesty, and they accept their own pain and
glory in it, almost as if poetry were a kind of alienation sweepstakes.
Many of the traits exhibited in common by surrealist parables and
confessional poetry are, of course, endemic to most of American contem-
porary poetry, and the two modes discussed here simply isolate and
concentrate them. The use of a toneless first-personspeaker; a relatively
dense but discontinuous imagery; a constant, one might almost say a willed,
preoccupation with alienation and emotional dislocation; an interior life
rendered in termsof bizarre figuresor ironic parables: these traitscan often
be traced, in part, to a writer-audience nexus that is extremelythreadbare,
and they imply, despite their pluralistic attitudes, a fairly limited but
homogeneous audience of readers who generally accept psychological
maladjustment and social impotence as the given, if not the "norm." The
poetryof moral enervation,whose master spokesman was J. Alfred Prufrock,
has become, successively,a poetryof a plangent egoism and finallya poetry
of psychological vacuity. Pried asunder both from an audience and from a
social value, many contemporaryAmerican poets have become caretakers of
their own obsessions, tending a ground both desiccated by defensive irony
and overgrownwith psychologized imagery, but seldom visited by outsiders.
The concern with craft,with "workshops," and with the enclave theory of
poetic schools and critical camps seems somehow woefully beside the point
when the reader looks forvision or music or grandeur or even pleasure among
the magazines and anthologies that are too readily available today. This
condition of limited promise can sometimesbe corrected simplyby reading a
single poet's work in depth, for what I have tried to describe is really what
has become a nearly dominant idiom in our poetry, widespread and
pervasive, but certainlynot the only alternative. It results,as do most poetic
idioms, from many poets working in an uncritically accepted vocabulary.
Those few poets who became known as "confessional" drew on a deep source
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