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Eng B EE Grades Women - S Football GB
Eng B EE Grades Women - S Football GB
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Total marks awarded 17/28 This is an interesting topic that is appropriate for
Language B, though it does lack focus on the
concrete evidence illustrating how attitudes have
changed over time. The historical approach is limited
and focuses more on the early struggles. The
“turning point” is not made very clear and more
modern developments are left by the wayside. The
number of spectators alone is not sufficient to show a
change in perception. The lack of measurable
evidence weakens the argument overall, resulting in
a satisfactory but not insightful attempt to present the
material.