The story of her holding an orange

This is true and unedited account of what happened to me little over two months ago. I posted my story on another forum and got unbelievable response, and now, here I am, telling you what happened. This was my fist post.

Okay guys, before I begin, I gotta give you a fair warning. This story is absolutely true unfortunately.
It is also very long. It goes back to my childhood, but it wasn’t as terrifying until very recently. Now I am completely lost in fear. I am an adult man, logical and intelligent (or I’d like to believe so) sitting in my bed, scared shitless right now, goosebumps all over my body and tears of horror in my eyes. I ask for your help in explaining this fucking
horrifying thing. Caution: I am not the greatest writer, and you’ll notice that I curse quite a bit. I want you to know that what you read from now on is the situation perceived by my mind. I like to think that I am a very rational, logical person and I haven’t been able to explain these occurrences in any natural way. Since my mom got a new job, she
started making new friends. It is common in our country that friends come to each other’s houses for a cup of coffee, cake, gossip and whatnot. Few weeks into her new job, my mom made friends with this woman, Rose. She would come maybe twice a week and they’d sit around the coffee table on our balcony and just talk. One day, when I was 17, I
was at the balcony with them. I’m not sure why I was there, but knowing me, I probably ran out of hours on the internet (back in a day we bought internet monthly per hour in my country) and was bored as fuck. So we’re sitting there, they’re gossiping about who knows what, and mom gets up to go get some cake she baked recently. I remained
sitting at the table with Rose and that’s when my life changed forever. Rose was a good looking woman. She was about 5’6”, skinny, long black hair, pearly white teeth. Attractive woman overall. Not ashamed to say that few times at night, I’d masturbate thinking about her.
So anyways, I am sitting there with her, and she turns to me. She has this creepy grin on her face; bright red lipstick with bright white teeth underneath is just making it look more scary. Her head is moving slowly, almost as if she became a puppet.
She says something in the lowest tone possible, certainly not loud enough for me to understand. “Excuse me?” I say, still not being scared, just a bit weirded out. “You ready to go now?” She said this in a voice of a child, I kid you not. Like maybe an 8 year old girl. Grin is still there. She mustered those words through her teeth, never opening the jaw.
“What?” I ask, starting to get scared. “You ready?” The same thing again. Only this time, she pulls out an orange out of her purse. That’s it, she just took the orange out, and held it there. Didn’t offer it, didn’t eat it herself, just held the fucking thing. At that point, I was getting scared as fuck. Thankfully, my mom came with the cake. Rose, almost as if
someone pushed a button on a remote control, switched back to her normal self, putting an orange back into her purse without my mom noticing. I left the balcony creeped out, but I was 17 so I brushed it off quickly. That night, I had trouble sleeping. My room is on the first floor and my window is at a maybe 5’ height, so I kept looking at it praying
not to see some scary monster. I would turn in my bed constantly and look at the window maybe every 5 minutes. It was getting late and I started to doze off, but decided to look into the window one last time. And there she fucking was. Standing in the fucking window. Rose. Just standing, looking directly at me (moonlight was bright enough for me to
see), with the same grin on her face. Lipstick was red as ever, and teeth were whither than ever. I was paralyzed in fear. I often imagined what I’d do in situations like these, and I always had an escape plan for any hypothetical I threw at myself. But now, when this friend of my mother’s was staring at me through my window at 4am, just smiling, I was
motionless. My mouth got dry, I got goosebumps (have them now as I type this), and I swear it became freezing in my room, probably just the way body reacts to shock.
I finally gathered the courage to get up. I started walking towards the door. Hear head was turning with me. Slowly. With the grin still there. Again, it was as she was a puppet. I wanted to scream for my parents, but knowing how tense they are, I decided not to cause panic just yet. There had to be some rational explanation, right? For fuck knows
what reason, I decided to walk to the window and ask her what the fuck her problem was. I made two slow steps towards it and froze. I froze because she moved. You know what her movement was? Taking the orange out of her purse. Does anyone know what the record time is for having goosebumps? Because they sure as shit aren’t going away.
Anyways, after being terrified for a minute, I decide to go on. I am a big guy and figured I’d be able to fight her off if push comes to shove. My windows pull up in order to open. I pull it open maybe some 10 inches and stop. She’s not moving, just holding the fucking orange and looking at me with the scariest grin you’ll ever see. I stand there. She
stands there. Then, she starts bending. But every move she makes is so slow, so mechanical.
She’s bending so she can reach the open part of the window. I’m horrified. She pushes her head through it (just enough space for her head to go through). Jump to ratings and reviews"When I was 17 and living in Europe, strange woman started following me. She would find me everywhere. And every time she'd find me, she'd only want one thing: for
me to take the orange.

After a year of being constantly stalked, I moved to America. 10 years later, she found me again. This is the true story of her, the woman holding an orange." --Amazon descriptionGenresHorrorFictionShort StoriesAdultMystery Displaying 1 - 30 of 81 reviewsMarch 30, 2014Seriously? This got a book release too?I'm going to take a wild guess here and
say that this author was inspired by what happened with the 1000vultures story Penpal. Both of these works were posted originally in the subreddit nosleep, which has a couple of hidden gems here and there.But this?I never got what made it so terrifying. I remember rolling my eyes when I saw the name, but I'd been wrong before with my first
impressions of NoSleep stories and decided to give it a try.All I remember was it being thoroughly mediocre and over-dramatic. But at least it was set up as a quick read in a sometimes-good subreddit. In book form, not gonna lie, it's kind of insulting. It didn't have the potential to be a book then--hell, not even the slightly better written Penpal had too
much of a chance--so I have no idea why the author thought it'd be a good idea to release it as one. EDIT: Oh man. So I was reading the author bio on amazon and saw this:If you're looking for a nicely paced piece of fiction - Stephen King is for you. If you're seeking true horror, well, welcome, come in.*takes deep
breath*AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.No.November 25, 2015I feel like this guy wrote this as a bet. "Betcha I can write a horror story about an orange." You probably can, but that doesn't mean it will be good.Wisdom is not putting a tomato in a fruit salad, but idiocy is thinking it's a good idea to make it the villain of your horror story.February 23, 2022This
review is also available on Cornerfolds.com.I first read The story of her holding an orange by Milos Bogetic (better known as Inaaace) on Reddit’s r/nosleep over a year ago. It pulled me in and I spent days checking and rechecking to see if he’d posted an update. It ended abruptly, leaving me (and everyone else) to scour the comment section for
answers.
When I heard Inaaace was releasing a book with more details and an expanded ending, I could not wait to read it! It took me a little while to get around to actually opening the book on my Kindle, but I finally did it.The story of her holding an orange should never have been released as a book. There, I said it. And I know I’m not the only person who
feels this way.

As a story on Reddit (or Creepypasta or wherever else it was posted), this was an amazing read. It had the “creep factor” and held on until the last, heart stopping line, which left an entire subreddit in panic mode.
Unfortunately, it just didn’t translate very well.Milos says from the very beginning, “I probably break every rule of proper writing…I write the way I speak.” I would most definitely agree with Milos. From page one there are grammatical errors and curse words for no good reason. Granted, this was originally written for Reddit and this kind of
language is expected there. There does not seem to have been much editing between the original posts and the book form. Milos is repetitive, gives unnecessary details, and takes the “conversational style” to the extreme. As I was preparing to review this book, I had to keep reminding myself that it is a book, not a post online, and that I needed to
review it as such. I say again, it should not have been released as a book.The actual story, however, is a different matter. Milos manages to make an orange creepy in a story that is entirely original. The main antagonist, Rose, is mysterious and, quite frankly, terrifying, for 90% of the book. There’s no explanation for her bizarre behavior, which amps
up the disturbing nature of the character. In a nutshell: this story is weird, creepy, and unique. Unfortunately, the last 10% of the book essentially ruins it.The original story ended in such a way that readers were left thinking about it for weeks and still reference it often. The ending written for the book feels like it was an afterthought (because it was)
and completely removes all of the mystery and discomfort surrounding Rose’s character. It makes her almost sympathetic, something she was never meant to be.Overall, The story of her holding an orange is excellent – on Reddit. I would absolutely not recommend buying the book or even reading a free copy.

If you want to read this story as it was meant to be read, I highly suggest going reading the original posts by Innace on Reddit.I give this book 2 stars, simply because the original story was brilliant. Please, please don’t read this book.August 17, 2013This can hardly be called a masterpiece, but it was good enough. Above all it was intriguing, I really
wanted to find out what's with the damned orange. After reading a few reviews prior to reading the book, I was prepared to be truly disappointed or at least unimpressed by the ending, but actually this is the bit I liked the best. SPOILER I don't know if the other readers were not cool with the idea of Rose being the baby or simply didn't get it, but
overall I think it was very smart.

No horror-movie type of ending would have suited the story - for example Milos' family is cursed, he dies, fin. Nope. As for the writing, it was as the author describes it himself - simple. The way a person would speak or chat, etc. It wasn't forced, but it wasn't very imaginative either. The cursing part was a bit tiresome, maybe due to the fact that I'm
not used to read books with a lot of curse words in them.Overall a pleasant short read, nothing prize-worthy, but worth an hour of your time.January 30, 2016The story of a woman wanting to feed a boyShe really wanted him to eat fruits and vegetables. She always offered him oranges. She did so in a cutesy voice to see if he responded. She was so
misunderstood. Just kidding. I read this on reddit no sleep one night and thought it was really interesting. I read the whole thing in an hour or something and was so passed the author decided not to give the ending away so his book could come out. (Really smart business-wise). I refused to get the book until milos announced there was a deal for the
day on Amazon and you could know the ending of the story for free that day. So I took the opportunity. Since I had read most of it during the summer, I skimmed everything and got the the juicy part.Only the juicy part wasn't juicy. The juicy part, like the orange, became kind of rotten. And I am so glad I did not pay for that ending because wow was
that disappointing. I would've given it one star but since it entertained me a lot in the summer I bumped it up a little. May 19, 2013I just finished the online version of this short, which I think has another ending than the book. I, however, do not feel the urge to purchase this book because I wasn't that impressed by the story anyway - plus I feel a bit
annoyed by the fact that all of the sudden you have to buy a book to finish the story.July 16, 2013On the Creepypasta Facebook page is where I came to know of the story about a terrifying woman who oddly enough, demands a boy to take the orange she holds in her hand. I can say that I bought the book from Amazon, because I was interested in how
it ended. Although, the ending was rather dull and disappointing. It didn't tie up any of the plot, other than finding out how Milos and Trish's families were involved with the woman in white and the man in black...and the story of why she holds the orange.We are not told what the man is, why Rose didn't want Milos babtized or anything of that nature.
Despite this, it was still a good story, one that had me so intrigued that I lost sleep over it.
January 20, 2019Loved the style, the pace, the plot. Loved the story in itself.A bit of a rushed and underwhelming ending, that's why I only give it 4 stars instead of 5. Over all, GREAT!March 4, 2017Eerie!This will definitely keep the shivers running up and down your spine! A short that's well worth the time it takes to read. I'm looking forward to a
second one!May 18, 2013an orange. the most terrifying fruit one can imagine - at least after reading those stories.for some reason i didn't like the book-version as much as i liked the consecutive stories being released on NoSleep. but i guess that was just because of the thrill of waiting for the story to continue - when reading the book you already
know what happened. and it also didn't scare me as much as reading it on reddit. but again, those might be because of the circumstances - i'm on reddit at night and the book i read on a sunny afternoon. the ending is still a bit disappointing - in a comment on NoSleep he stated that after he took the orange he started to change and become like rose
but he managed to stop it but nothing more... idk, some sort of elaboration on that would've been nice. also, i, too, am confused by why rose is the one holding the orange, what the man in the suit was etc. just too many open ends, i don't like that. plus the swearing seemed kinda forced in the book - when reading it on NoSleep i hardly realized that he
wrote 'fucking orange' instead of 'orange' etc. i don't mind swear words, i use them way too much myself but somehow i noticed every single 'fuck' and 'shit' as if it were blinking in bright orange - they just seemed forced.
plus the ending's really messed up. there's a high possibility that he and his girlfriend are related and he still has a kid with her? i know it's just half the genes and three generation away but still... too fucking weird. January 20, 2016This book, while fun to read online as it progressed, was lackluster as a book. I actually think I enjoyed the ending
much more than most. It added some sort of actual plot and structure to what was happening. Otherwise the entire book is literally a repeating sequence of "moment in characters life- woman shows up- prompts him to take orange- oh no spooooooky!" It's fun for a sequence like short updates on a horror blog. I don't think it translated to a book.
Their weird self jabs the author takes on his own writing as well as the hamfisted joke about the Hollywood movie deal just make the writing feel...
immature? It's quite short and a fast read, but I'm not sure I'd spend money on it again. Just look it up on NoSleep.April 11, 2016Why are there so many reviews of this creepypasta? It almost makes me think I should skip my commentary, but I didn't see anyone mention this... the plot involves a fellow who experiences a repetitive visitation from a
creepy person and he is distraught that no one will believe him. Recurring theme. Then, in two cases, when he tracks down others who have had the same experience he makes comments like "well, you probably can't believe anything that *%!*&*!* senile crackpot says." I could have done without all the profanity, by the way.January 19, 2019In a way,
this book (or rather, short story) reminded me of the movie The Blair Witch Project. Imagine you are sitting around a fire with your friends on a dark night and one of them decides to tell a spooky story. You think it's good, so you write it down, using almost the same words your friend improvised a few minutes ago. And then you publish it.It's not a
great book, it's not a great story, but it is different, original, intriguing, unsettling... and so short nothing is really lost if you don't like it.March 27, 2014I always say that the great thing about independent art of any kind is the lack of restraints imposed by studios, publishers, record companies, and the like. I have to say that The Story of Her Holding
an Orange is one of the more unique and interesting independent books I’ve read lately...Read the rest of the review at Ravenous Monster Webzine: 27, 2015Absolutely dreadful. I've only ever thrown 2 books across the room and this was one of them. Crap writing, awful pacing, some totally unnecessary things including a thing that makes me furious
and upset on a personal level, plotholes a mile wide. To be honest, I don't know why I expected any different from a cheap, self-published reddit story.March 25, 2015Interesting story with a nice spooky edge to it, though it didn't bother me later since the creature/woman only seems to bother certain people. I do wish it was written in a slightly more
literary style because that's my personal preference, but the style the author uses is effective.January 28, 2018I think I’m one of the few to own a print edition of this book. The story was interesting to say the least. You find out why she has the orange. It didn’t scare me like it did originally on wattpad. However the ending was kind of sweet. May 13,
2013It was scary.
Never thought I would get creeped out by an orange. I read the online version so I'm not sure if the ending is different but I was pretty disappointed with the ending. April 25, 2018I don't enjoy giving one star reviews, but this one definitely deserves it. First of all, I started reading this (like many other readers) on NoSleep. I do think it's a bit rude to
offer 90% of the story online and then make the user pay for the final 10%, but hey, everyone has to make a living and I have Kindle Unlimited, so I wasn't bothered by it. I wasn't particularly intrigued by the plot (woman insists boy take orange throughout his life, this continues, boy insists something strange is going on but it's not at all supernatural
even as she doesn't age over decades), but I kept seeing comments like, "Oranges is the best story I've read on the site!" so I kept reading. I was very disappointed. The writing, in both the original post and the book itself, drags. It isn't pleasant to read. I know the author doesn't "want" to write well, but dude, you're writing a fucking book. Basic
attention to grammar and detail is fine; you won't be sacrificing any of your Angry Character by getting a proofreader and making sure your sentences flow. It's fine on a site like NoSleep, but if you expect people to willingly pay up for your work, some effort should be put into the prose. That's all I'm saying. In addition, there was nothing scary about
this book. I didn't find any of the events to even unsettle me; I was confused for a majority of the plot because the narrator insisted that nothing supernatural was happening, even as /clearly fucking supernatural/ things were going on. I wish there had been some more work put into this - why didn't he believe? What was holding him back? That would
have been a character motivation I'd have loved to see, rather than, "I'm a tough guy! But I started crying because this scared me so much! (I know you don't start sentences with 'but', but I DON'T GIVE A FUCK!)"Anyway, do not recommend. At all. A lot of stories like this fail to stick the landing (that's the nature of writing something episodic, I think;
you build up so much hype that it's hard to write it well) but this one failed all the way throughout. February 14, 2021From a Reddit r/nosleep I began this story r/nosleep where all stories are presumed to be true, are scary & hence, the nosleep subreddit. After reading the first 5 (maybe 6) parts on Reddit, including the copious comments,
suggestions, research by other users, etc., when it came to final part, it took me to Amazon. Luckily, it’s one I get to read for free so I downloaded it. Some parts of the story (& that’s what it is: a short story) were changed here, the timeline cleaned up a bit, language polished, but basically the same story, even same language in spots. The last part (&
reason for downloading) was a bit anticlimactic. All that for ***SPOILER*** so that, apparently, these two descendants can birth Rose back to life. Could have easily been fleshed out to a real book. So, if you’re looking for a quick, slightly scary read, this could be it, though I enjoyed it much more with all the comments on the subreddit r/nosleep.
That’s where you should really go for great scary stories that are true, including this one. The three stars are really for the original (even minus the ending and cleanup) on Reddit.
If I’d read it first, here on Kindle Unlimited as a stand-alone novella, without all the research & comments done by others in the subreddit, it would be just two stars. July 8, 2022It was intense at the beginning.. but long description and several unwanted detail kinda bother the feeling when reading it. Also the transition from one viewpoint to another
is not smooth.The ending is a disappoinment for me. Dunno if the cliffhanger is intended or not. Just.. it was lower rather than my expectation :(But like the way the author telling the story, and the intense feeling it provides when the antagonist forces her intention towards him. Truthfully it made me scared and that was the best feeling to get the
thrill.Im waiting for the second edition if there will :(November 24, 2017This is an amazing story was spawed by a writer on the horror-fiction platform NoSleep on Reddit.com.I won't go into the plot because it's just about ~100 pages long.
Reddit.com/r/NoSleep is a place for writers and Readers to share their fiction, the clue is, that everyone has to act like every Story is 100% true. This leads to amazing community interactions between People commenting and the authors themselfes.December 30, 2017IntriguingI first read the shortee version on Reddit, and was so intrigued that I
followed the link to Amazon to read the book. The story is told in such a realistic style, like the author is just sitting in the same room as you, which somehow makes it more real. It's a little predictable at times but as a whole, it kept my interest until the end. I would definitely recommend!March 14, 2020After all the bad reviews I was sure this book
wasn’t going to be good, but I liked it.
I liked the story , I liked the ending, and I liked that although it was a short read it still had in it everything you needed to know. If you like a good horror story I would recommend giving this one a try. December 4, 2021I'm the type of person who scares easily, and this book didn't even spook me, like it didn't even make me feel tense. It's a thriller
disguised as a horror story, with one of THE WORST endings I've ever saw. If you feel curiosity about it read the original post, trust me, you don't want to know the ending, it ruins the rest of the story.December 30, 2018Its good till the endThe book was very strong despite issues with grammar (which worked for this book). But the ending was to
abrupt like the author didnt know where to go from where it was ended. Is it worth $5. Yeah just a bit if a cliffhanger November 30, 2020Raw, Visceral, and RealI remember reading this story on the internet, once upon a time. When Milo's announced that he was going to turn this into a novel, I thought, "I'd buy that!" So, here I am! This is a must-
read for any horror fan.May 8, 2017October 30, 2017Cute little story.
fast readDisplaying 1 - 30 of 81 reviewsGet help and learn more about the design. Estimated reading time — 6 minutes If you’re just staring to read my experiences with this horror, you should read my other stories first. You can find them here: Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Okay guys, a lot has happened since the last time I checked in. Lot of you
messaged me asking if I was doing ok. Some of you even went as far as sending me you phone numbers and really reaching out. I thank you for that. We have not encountered Rose since the last time. Also, we decided to move. I got a decent job on the south of the US and we thought it’d be a good idea to get out of here (any Atl folks, holla at me).
My father did go see the priest who baptized me and the story actually become more convoluted, if you can call it that. Anyways, I got baptized in a church called Ostrog, in Montenegro. Here is the pic of it. I don’t believe in god in any kind of way, but this church is amazing. It was built a long time ago. When the Turkish Empire came to take over,
people took it stone by stone and moved it up in the mountain where the Turks couldn’t reach it. It is a magnificent building. Many people of different religions, including Muslims and Buddhists, come to that church in search of a spiritual help. That is the only place I ever felt something “more” than just my non-believer reality. So, when I was six, my
dad decided to baptize me there. Neither of my parents are particularly religious, but my dad fallows traditions, and baptizing kids is one of them. He decided that baptism should be performed at the most famous church in Balkans, Ostrog. You had to schedule it, and demand was so high that I was going to do it with other kids as a part of a group
baptism. When we arrived there, and disappointment awaited (at least for my dad, I couldn’t give any less fucks). At the entrance of the church, the priest stopped me. “You. You cant go in.” He physically stopped me with his hand.
Priests in our country wear long black robes and rock long beards. So I was standing there being held by this batman looking dude. My dad jumped in front of me and asked what the problem was. “You my child (talking to my dad), I know you. I baptized you. I can tell. (He did baptize him 20 years ago or so). But your son, he can not go in here.” “And
why is that?” My dad asked, shocked. “I cant really tell you, but it is better for us all if he went elsewhere.” “But why?” “Son, please, leave. But remember this, don’t dare not baptizing him. You have to.” “I don’t understand.” “Nor will you ever.
Just do it.” So my dad took my hand and walked away not knowing what in the fuck was going on. On our way home, he was trying to figure out what happened. He thought that maybe I messed something up, like peed behind the church or something (which sounded like my kind of thing, but I didn’t do it). When we got home, we got a phone call. It
was from that priest. He wanted us to come back. Right away. It was a 35 minute ride back. My dad and I were more confused than ever. We arrived at the church, and all the previous baptisms have been performed already.
It was only 3 of us there. “I decided to baptize your son despite…” “Despite what?” my dad asked curiously. “I could not tell you. But it is important we do this fast.” So we did. I walked in a circle and he went on with his prayers spraying holy water on me. I remember getting bored as hell right before he finally finished. He told us to go away and not
to come back unless something out of the ordinary happened to me. My dad was just glad we got it done. That was 20 years ago. My dad went back there few days ago.
Priest was still alive, although retired. He still lived on the church grounds. It took some talking into (and donations) for him to speak up. I got baptized on February 13th 1992. On the night before my baptism, priest was handling his sheep (back in the day, priests raised sheep and cows and lived mostly off of that) when he saw a figure in the dark. It
was strange for someone to stand there that late at night, especially because visits were over and all the clerical staff was already in their designated housing. “Hey, who is that?” Priest yelled. “Come, father.” Woman’s voice spoke calmly. Priest explained that from time to time, he’d get visits from desperate people, begging for blessing or shelter. So
he went ahead to see what the woman wanted. He said that when he came there, he saw a woman in white, standing, not moving.
She was standing among sheep, but they formed a circle around her, almost like a safe distance.
Priest claims that he immediately felt something unholy. “ What do you want?” he asked in a defensive aggressive voice. At that point he knew it wasn’t a peaceful visitor he was talking to.
“Tomorrow. Tomorrow you will encounter a boy. Just like any other. His name will be Milos. You won’t baptize him.” Priest told my father that he performed several exorcisms before but he was never actually scared. This time, he felt unsafe. “You and your kind have no place on this holy ground.” “My kind, father? What would that be?” “You,
demons.” His voice was cracking in fear. She laughed. “Demons? I realize you’re a man of cloth, but believing in demons?
That takes a lot of faith, father.” “I want you to leave, now.” “Listen to me you pity priest. I know who you are. I know what you think. I know you feel my strength.
Deny my request, and you’ll never sleep in peace again.” Then, she left. Rest of the story you know. He refused to baptize me than he changed his mind. Apparently, he told my dad that he’d rather be tormented by an unholy spirit than deny god’s child a chance to connect to Jesus. He also said that he has been paying for it since the day he baptized
me. Every single night for two weeks after he baptized me, he has been seeing a woman in white appear on his window. She’d just stand there, looking at him with hand tilted. No smile though, but only a face of anger.
He’d say many prayers but it didn’t seem to affect her. Then, his sheep started dying. There were no wolf marks, no sign of force. Just laying dead. Finally, number of exorcisms skyrocketed. He claims that this was a direct consequence of him disobeying woman’s orders. He even showed an exorcism videotape (they started filming in the chapel in the
mid 90s) to my dad. My dad says it was unreal. Apparently a 13-year-old girl came in the chapel with her mom. Her mom was sobbing in tears begging for help. Priest started performing his ritual when the little girl started throwing stuff around. Priest called two young guys who came in to pray that day and asked them to hold her. She kept walking
in circles, with two grown men holding her. And right before she fell to her knees, she said “You shouldn’t have done it father.” She was cured. My dad had more than enough of information thrown at him, but he wanted to know what this woman was. Priest said that he originally thought it was a demon, but a lack of prayer efficiency and her freedom
of behavior on the holy ground was concerning. He then thought it was some sort of a cult, witchcraft maybe. The problem is, she has been visiting him on February 13th every year. All the livestock he’d have would die on that day. Any sick person coming for help to the church that day would get worse. Number of possessed people would skyrocket
abnormally on the 13th. And at the end of the day, she’d come to the window, no matter where he was.
He tried talking to her many times, asking what/who she was. She never responded. She never aged. Priest was finally broken down to the point where he quit. He remained living at the grounds, but he couldn’t do his job anymore. He lost faith. He claimed that the god should’ve protected him. My dad says he may be mentally unstable at this point.
He was mentioning something about Morana, whatever that meant. It appears to be a goddess of death in some cultures, but I really think this man has gone mad. I think that this whole story was jabber of an old man gone senile. Goddesses? Demons? Hardly. That would be the disappointing story of my baptism. I have not had any encounters with
any of them since the last time. I am moving away, hoping it helps. I also decided this: if I encounter them again, I am taking the orange. I cant go on like this forever. I just… can’t. For the ending of this story, go HERE – it will not be posted on Creepypasta. I feel that the final part is most effective when left at its original source. Credit To – Milos
Bogetic NOTE: This is the sixth in a series of several popular Reddit posts documenting some seriously creepy experiences. We are publishing them here with express permission of Milos Bogetic aka inaaace, the original poster. The story is in multiple parts, and will be published completely over the next few days – much like what I did with the
‘Bedtime’ series earlier this year. After the stories have all gone up, I’ll edit each post with links to the other parts. The OP has finished the continuation book that he promised during his successful kickstarter project. You can find the paperback and Kindle e-book versions here: The Story of Her Holding an Orange by Milos Bogetic – full disclosure:
our referral link is included.
I know that this will not be new material for all of you, but for those of you who – like myself – don’t use Reddit, I wanted to post it so that you guys could enjoy it as much as I did after having it brought to my attention. Thanks again to Milos for letting me post it, and enjoy! Copyright Statement: Unless explicitly stated, all stories published on
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