Narrative writing 3 includes the words, ‘I was so focused’.

Class: 11A
Name: M. Gerelmaa

“Choice”
I clearly remember I was about to sleep on my comfortable bed calmly, somehow, I didn’t
know my place has changed this quick…I’ve came to my teen age who was studying
continuously, reading her thick book, I was so focused to it. She was sitting in a class, full of
sunlight reflecting to the room, and I was just standing alone seeing to her. Suddenly, a boy age
of her came and sat next to her. He was looking at her with the loveliest eyes I have ever seen.
At that moment, I remember that boy, who was used to be my best friend like five or six years. I
realized it was the most beautiful moments during my life time. I was admiring them looking cute
until I woke up again, but in the darkest room. I saw myself again, looking furiously, like making
a war with her biggest enemy. A red thing like a fire was glowing in surroundings, I saw hatred
in her eyes. That enemy was in front of her, both were looking seriously, like decided to fight for
their life. I was truly knowing they are going to regret for both decisions. I was so much worried;
when I blink my eyes, I came in a restaurant and stood to see my family who was so much
happier at the moment, full of pretty smiles, happiest conversations, just so much enjoyment. It
made me cry somehow, because that was the only thing I wish for when I turn adult. It gave me
the best memories that left in my head, that I could never forget. My precious tear drops were
falling from me, until I realized I came to another place. It was computer gaming café, where
students go in to play some games on a pc. I saw my teen moment again, playing with their
best friends, looking like crazy addicted person. She was playing really fast, touching her
keyboard; I just saw those eyes, who wouldn’t get up from that chair, like she can play a game
in her whole life. There were so many colorful lightnings, but I saw dark shade that only show
up on her.
That shade made me to be in completely shock; Was it dream or some kind of
preconception? I was awake truly from that, just living alive in my current room. I thought many
things from it, imagining my future and others. I think it was reference from God or angel. It will
be much better to choose perfect road to found your right way, which means even if you are
tired or exhausted, it is possible that your surroundings are full of lightnings with your right
person. A right person who will support you, and love you. So, that shows your future is shining.
But it will be wrong way, if you are addicted to something badly. Sometimes, dream can show a
future even you can’t remember anything about it at the morning. Probably, things get even
worse, when you try to be perfect at everything..