In the argument given above, residents and homeowners near Brookville community decided upon a

set of rules applicable on landscaping of the locality's yards and color scheme according to which their
houses should be painted resulting in a 3 fold increase in housing rates. Looking from a practical
perspective, these 2 factors does not seem to be very influential in increasing the property rates
throughout. Moreover these results were recorded seven years ago and might not be applicable in
the current scenario with Deerhaven acres.

Looking towards exponential growth in pricing rates, it has always been a combination of multiple
factors and have major correlation with the location of the property, its view, accessibility towards
amenities such as healthcare, grocery, academic institutions and more. Furthermore, recent
developments around the locality also affect the prices for example if a recent announcement
announcement has been made by the local government that an airport will be built within in five
years and with project completion time is five years. Then a sudden increase in footfall will be
experienced increasing the demand nearby and thus experiencing a huge hike in land rates.

Another element that needs to be considered is that these results were noted seven years ago, and a
lot must have changes since then. There could be a lot of difference in the development of both the
cities, it is possible that both of them did not welcome similar rate of advancement in their locality
thus making it difficult to decide whether the similar results can be expected in the deerhaven
locality, taking into consideration the exactly similar kind of rules. In many countries during the period
of seven years whole ideology of people change regarding the property structure, like people must
have a change in taste and rather than looking for a big house in terms of area they look for a place
with a beach nearby or some esthetic view.

The author should have been more specific about the factors and should provide more information
about the nearby amenities of both the localities for a fare comparison and analysis. As these may
prove to be outdated and misleading results for the deerhaven acres. Information regarding the
population, its ethnicity, men to women ration and age group must be provided in order to better
understand the taste of the audience.

In conclusion, the given statement does not provide any concrete evidence about the changes that
brought three hundred percent increase in the property rates experienced in Brookville, that might
also be applies extrapolate the prices in other localities as well.
Intro : This should consist of three or four sentences in which you provide an overview of all the
fallacies you plan to address.

Fallacies : Each should get its own indented paragraph. You’ll want to discuss it in detail, and you may
even opt to quote from the prompt in making your case.

Suggestions for improving the prompt argument : Time-permitting, you’ll ideally want to include a
paragraph in which you detail how the author could make a stronger case.

Conclusion : As short as the introduction, this should summarize your body paragraphs (the fallacies
and suggestions) and tie up any loose ends. Don’t skip this part! Even if you only have time for a single
sentence, write one. An essay without a conclusion will almost certainly receive a lower score than
one that is finished.