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LEARNING- STUDYING- ONLINE PLATFORM

The increased availability and affordable price of modern technology have been instrumental in the
way children study and learn nowadays.

 the increased availability and affordable price of modern technology

 dirty cheap
 be instrumental in/ play the key/ sterling role
 study and learn

Many modern technologies, such as computers and the Internet, are critically important in assisting
a child's learning, however, the learning process/ study path should be guided and directed by the
wealth of experience of human teachers.

 such as computers and the Internet

 are critically/ vitally/crucially/pivotally important
 be guided and directed (teach/ taught/taught)
 the wealth of experience of human teachers.

We should mark the fact that/ It is a well-known fact that computers with their highlights are
extensively applied in education, specifically, they could present knowledge in a vivid and novel way.

 We should mark the fact that

 computers with their highlights
 be extensively/ popularly applied  popular # populous
 in a vivid and novel way
Many cutting-edged devices can also enable students to enhance their general understanding of how
to cope with academic difficulties as well as giving them compulsory skills in proper preparation for
their adulthood.

 cutting-edged/ advanced devices

 enhance their general understanding
 cope with academic difficulties
 solve/ resolve/ address / tackle/handle
 proper preparation

The digital information has to be preprogrammed and constantly updated; however, the Internet may
not be always a reliable source for knowledge, since there is often conflicting and fake information
available without any strict controls.

 Digital/ detailed/further information

 be preprogrammed and constantly updated
 a reliable (credible) source for/of knowledge
 conflicting and fake information available
 with(out) any strict controls

A traditional and long-established practice for learning is to study and gain knowledge in the
schooling environment, learning skills in various ways taught by conventional methods by school
teachers.

 A traditional and long-established practice for learning

 study and gain knowledge
 conventional methods
 the schooling/ academic environment/ academic institution

rat race/ burden

A school is an ideal place where the general students gather to be educated, guided and taught by
human educators.

 be educated, guided and taught by human educators.

In the all-round education, for instance, students' development is orchestrated stage by stage, step by
step by experienced teachers, and their acquisition of knowledge is guided and backed up
systematically.

 the all-round education

 be orchestrated stage by stage, step by step by experienced teachers/ teacher with years of
experience
 be guided and backed up systematically.

Modern technologies can complement more traditional teaching and learning methods without being
used as a replacement for these traditions.

 to complement
 traditional teaching and learning methods
 a replacement for these traditions

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Opening

 Topic/ Opinion

Body (2)

 Opening/Idea 1/ Explain/ Idea 2/ Explain/ (Sum) (1+2)

 Opening/Idea 1/ Explain/ Idea 2/ Example/ (Sum) (1+2)

Conclusion

 Reaffirm your opinion

275-320 words

Some people think that the technology has changed our life more positively. A/D

Sum: 298 word (Time: 3 hours)

Describe the famous person the you admire

Who he is/How he looks/ Why you admire/ Your feelings