Heart's Medicine: New Blood (Season 2) Narrative Design Document

Heart’s Medicine: New Blood (Season 2) — Narrative Design Document (2019)
Heart’s Medicine: New Blood’s season 2 Narrative Design

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Carlos Ramírez Moreno (2019)

THE NARRATIVE DESIGN WORK FOR ALL MY ORIGINAL STORIES

VISUAL NOVELS IS DIVIDED INTO THREE STAGES: PREMISE
DEVELOPMENT, STORY BREAKDOWN, AND NARRATIVE DESIGN.
EACH OF THE STAGES DEVELOPED FOR HALF OF THE SECOND
SEASON OF HEART’S MEDICINE: NEW BLOOD ARE DETAILED BELOW.
1. STORY PREMISE
1.1. TITLE
“Against All Odds.”
1.2. THEME
“Sometimes the hardest thing to do is the right one.”
1.3. GENRE
Medical Drama, Romance, Soap Opera.
1.4. SERIES LEARNING/MESSAGE
Everyone has reasons to act in a certain way, even people who at first sight seem selfish
or reckless. We’re all determined by circumstances, and every decision we make affects
the lives of others, as well as ours.
1.5. LOGLINE
“A medical intern will witness a negligence case, caused by a reputed physician, that could
cost a patient’s life. This will cause her and her colleagues to question the principles of
their profession. But looks can sometimes be deceiving, and the decision they eventually
make can have an impact not only on their careers, but on the future of the entire hospital.”
1.6. SEASON OVERVIEW

“The season begins with Phoebe about to be interrogated by Little Creek Hospital board.
Mason, one of the board members, asks her to be completely honest. Not only her career,
but the reputation of the entire hospital is at risk.
Three weeks earlier...
Phoebe, Mac, and Seth are in the second semester of their internship. During this period
in Little Creek Hospital, Phoebe will learn from one of the most renowned and sought-
after physicians in the country, Dr. Weir. She is demanding and professional, but at the
same time kind and attentive to her patients.
Allison arranges a surprise meeting between Dr. Weir and Phoebe, who joins her in the
diagnosis of Brandon Buchanan, a famous singer who’s supposed to play with his band in
Snuggford within three nights. The patient shows symptoms of sporadic lightheadedness,
imbalance, fatigue, headaches, insomnia, and fainting episodes. Dr. Weir tests Phoebe
skills to diagnose the patient and proves why she’s one of the most renowned
diagnosticians in the country. Brandon is first diagnosed with labyrinthitis, an inner ear
infection.
Outside the patient’s room, Phoebe notices Dr. Weir having a tense telephone
conversation that seems to indicate she has a serious personal problem but tries to
disguise it. Then Allison shows up to tell Phoebe that Seth and Mac are already taking
care of her second patient, Ms. Herrera, a retired professor with a chronic kidney disease
(CKD). While diagnosing Ms. Herrera, Phoebe is told that Brandon is having a severe
nerve pain attack, so she rushes out to join Dr. Weir again.
Dr. Weir believes that it’s most likely that the nerve pain is being caused by a chronic
fatigue syndrome (CFS). He’s prescribed with some painkillers and antidepressants.
However, Phoebe feels there’s something more. More tests need to be made to discard
other disorders. She might ask some questions to the patient, but Dr. Weir would answer
them instead, implying there’s no need for further research.
Here comes Dr. Weir’s conscious malpractice: she doesn’t want to spend more time with
this patient for two reasons: 1) Too much work, she needs to attend a lot of patients,
there’s no need to stop on this case, and 2) Brandon thinks he can make it through, he
feels the urge to leave the hospital and go back to rehearsals for his upcoming show.
Phoebe disagrees with this: “Doctors can’t let patients decide!” Dr. Weir sees it from a
different angle: it can save her a lot of work, and it can make the patient happy... Phoebe
just needs to keep the little secret. “It’s a win-win situation.” “If we had to follow all the
procedures all the time, this would be an impossible job.”, she concludes.
During the next days, Phoebe focuses her work on the other case along with Seth and
Mac. Ms. Herrera happens to have a kidney chronic disease whose treatment isn’t covered
by her insurer. The patient confesses that she has always known about this chronic illness,
but it hasn’t been until now that it has manifested strongly. She hid this information to
her insurer to obtain a coverage that, otherwise, would have been denied. Now Phoebe,
Mac and Seth will have to decide what to do: Drop the patient? Urge her to proceed
despite the expense? Compromise the standard of care to reduce costs? Decline to
provide substandard care, and therefore any care at all? Or even attempt to manipulate
reimbursement rules or falsely underbill for the patient's benefit?
Nurses run through the hallway, heading towards a patient’s room. It’s Brandon! One of
the nurses explains that he has suffered a heart block. Phoebe performs a cardiac workup
and sees an aberrant heart rhythm. For now, it’s a second-degree heart block, therefore,
needs no treatment, but Phoebe points out that it can evolve to a third-degree heart block.
In that case, he would need a permanent pacemaker. Dr. Weir agrees to give Phoebe two
days to run all the tests she wants. Mason tells Phoebe that Brandon’s representatives are
starting to get nervous. They’re asking how come he entered the hospital with heaving
and weakness and suddenly he’s having heart blocks. A lot of investors and promoters are
worried about the costs of a tour cancellation. Mason downplays the matter for now but
asks Phoebe to inform him on anything that can help the hospital overcome the process.
Phoebe starts feeling guilty for what happened.
From now on, Phoebe will spend time with Brandon trying to figure out the source of his
illness (spoiler alert: It’s Lyme disease). Phoebe will talk with Dr. Weir about what
happened, but she will understand that informing Mason about what happened will put
not only Dr. Weir’s, but also Phoebe’s career in danger. In addition to this, Phoebe must
continue to help Seth and Mac with the other case, and she will have to help them make
a decision similar to her own: Choosing between what’s right and what’s professional,
between ethics and rules.
Eventually, Phoebe will find the nature of Brandon’s disease thanks to a bullseye-shaped
rash hidden in his body, which is one of the main signs of Lyme disease.
By the end of the season, Phoebe will have to make a hard decision, based on all the
information she has gathered on Dr. Weir’s personal background. Contrary to what she
initially believes, Dr. Weir has been under a lot of pressure during the last year, and what
happened to her was caused by a series of personal problems. Dr. Weir knows she made
a mistake, but at that moment she couldn’t think clearly because of the overwork she is
going through.”
1.7. SEASON CONFLICT
“Struggling with the inner conflict of doing what’s right even at the risk of losing
everything. Getting to know the personal circumstances that lead people to act in a certain
way. Working and making decisions as a team.”
1.8. POSSIBLE SEASON OUTCOMES
The player will make the final choice in the last episode:
• Tell the truth (Brandon “wins”). It was a case of medical negligence caused and
concealed by Dr. Weir. Consequently, she will lose her medical license, but
Brandon will be compensated.
o Depending on our relationship with Dr. Weir, she will show resentment
or understanding against Phoebe.
o Brandon will be thankful.
• Hide the truth (Dr. Weir “wins”). All medical procedures were carried out.
Everything was done in favor of the patient, who also insisted on being discharged.
Consequently, Dr. Weir will continue practicing as a physician, but Brandon
won’t receive any compensation.
o Depending on our relationship with Brandon, he will show
disappointment or understanding against Phoebe.
o Dr. Weir will be thankful.
• Reach an agreement (best ending!). For this option to work we need the support
of at least three characters: If we have enough relationship points with Allison,
Seth, Mac, or Josh, they’ll testify to support Phoebe’s statement. In this way, Dr.
Weir will accept her mistake, and in gratitude, Brandon will withdraw the charges.
o If we choose this option and then we don’t have enough relationship points,
we can convince these characters to help us with a Premium choice.
1.9. MAIN CHARACTERS

PHOEBE (PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Phoebe is a bright and energetic student with a lot of ambition. She is an avid follower
of Allison’s Heart career, and she is ready to prove herself as the best physician at the
renewed Little Creek Hospital.”
CHARACTER GOALS
1. Become the best physician.

2. Earn Allison’s trust and respect.
3. Help her friends Seth and Mac.
4. Season Goal: Decide whether she should inform the hospital board against Dr.
Weir.
CHARACTER SHEET
Name Phoebe Rise
Age 24-25
Personality Brilliant, energetic, ambitious and a bit reckless.
Backstory Phoebe lost her sister Emma when she was very young. She
was with her on a shopping mall when the elevator they were
in got stuck. This triggered Emma’s claustrophobia, which
caused a panic attack, that caused a heart stroke, which was
weak due to a condition. Phoebe called Josh, her elder
brother, who was studying medicine, and tried to guide her
through the reanimation, but she couldn’t do it. She got stuck
with her sister for an hour before she got rescued, feeling
guilty because of it.
Ethnicity Caucasian
Look (Default) Blonde, red blouse and jeans.
Traits Crafty, strong.
Flaws Can be a bit straightforward sometimes.
MALCOLM (MAC) (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Do you know those sports guys that don’t give a damn about you and me? That’s like the
opposite of Mac. Not only is he a great quarterback, but he is always caring and warm to
everyone. And that’s why he is so likeable!”
RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER
• At the beginning: If there was a romance in the first season, both characters will
resume the relationship from this point. If not, they will remain friends.
• Can evolve to: Mac thinks Phoebe should keep hiding what happened with Dr.
Weir. The risks of being involved in the case are too high. This stance can generate
conflict with Phoebe.
RELATIONSHIP WITH NON-PLAYER CHARACTERS
Character name: Seth.

• At the beginning: Best friends.
• Can evolve to: Seth and Mac will disagree regarding Ms. Herrera’s case. Mac
thinks they should urge the patient to proceed despite the expense. This will
generate conflict between the two friends.
CHARACTER SHEET
Name Malcolm “Mac” Burton
Age 25-26
Personality Warm, caring, friendly and impulsive. Sometimes he is too

nice for his own good.
Backstory Mac’s family is not particularly wealthy. His father

abandoned them years ago and he has been taking care of her
mother ever since, as she never overcome the depression that
came with it. He has always worked and studied at the same
time. He earned a sports scholarship to do what he really
wanted to do: Be a doctor to heal people with problems like
her mother’s.
Ethnicity Black
Look (Default) Tall, bulky, brown, and short hair.
Traits Strong, charming.
SETH (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Seth is the embodiment of perfection. He is sharp, athletic and has always everything
under control... well, except his emotions. Sometimes he is not very good at handling
them.”

• At the beginning: If there was a romance in the first season, both characters will
resume the relationship from this point. If not, they will remain friends.
• Can evolve to: Seth thinks Phoebe should inform against Dr. Weir, no matter the
consequences for her career. Agreeing with him will make their relationship better.
RELATIONSHIP WITH NON-PLAYER CHARACTERS
Character name: Mac.

• At the beginning: Best friends.
• Can evolve to: Seth and Mac will disagree regarding Ms. Herrera’s case. Seth
thinks they should refer her to a safety net provider, such as a public clinic. This
will generate conflict between the two friends.
CHARACTER SHEET
Name Seth Chambers
Age 24
Personality Smart, cold, precise and loses his composure faster than he
would like to admit.
Backstory Seth comes from the top of the top. His family is famous
because of how wealthy it is. He has always raised with
perfection in mind, so that’s what he is always trying to
achieve.
Ethnicity Caucasian
Look (Default) Slim, wears glasses, blonde hair.
Traits Smart, good at almost everything he does.

DR. WEIR (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Samantha Weir is an eminence in the country. She has become one of the stellar hires of
Little Creek Hospital since its reopening. She is an educated and kind person, but behind
this mask of confidence, she hides many insecurities about her ability to keep the top level
expected from her”.
• At the beginning: Phoebe feels thrilled about learning from one of the best
surgeons in the country. Dr. Weir is truly an inspiration for her.
• Can evolve to: Phoebe will be disappointed by what happened, and she will
seriously consider informing against Dr. Weir. However, Phoebe can also find out
a lot about the doctor’s background, causing her to think twice about her decision.
Name Samantha Weir
Age Late forties
Personality Educated, strong and very confident. A little arrogant too, due to her
infallibility as a diagnoser (think of a female House, but gentler). Behind
her mask of confidence, however, she hides many insecurities about her
ability to keep the top level expected from her as Little Creek Hospital’s
“stellar hire.”
Backstory Samantha has always been a winner, and this has earned her the envy and
enmity of many coworkers. She has worked hard to reach the top of her
specialty. Now she’s facing a mistake that can leave her in evidence in
front of all those who once wanted to stop her promotion.
Samantha is overworked. She is very close to a burn-out and doesn't want

to admit it. Her work-life balance is WAY off and it’s having a big effect
on her work and her family, which is now in the middle of a divorce
process. She’s struggling through it with the help of some drugs, but she
will eventually make a mistake that will compromise her licence,
Phoebe’s career, and the reputation of the hospital. She’s the incarnation
of oversaturated hospitals and overworked physicians.
Ethnicity Asian-American
Look Strong facial features, brown pinned up hair, no ornaments. Brown eyes.
(Default)
Traits Workaholic. Educated, strong, and very confident. Woman of few words.
MS. HERRERA (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Ms. Herrera is a retired professor with a kidney chronic disease whose treatment isn’t
covered by her insurer. She hid this information to her insurer to obtain a coverage that,
otherwise, would have been denied. Now Phoebe, Mac, and Seth will have to decide what
to do.”
• At the beginning: Doctor-patient relationship. Nothing special.

• Can evolve to: Phoebe believes the best option is to treat her as inexpensively as
possible and try to justify every test they do.
Name Laura Herrera
Age Late sixties
Personality Reasonable, serious. She’s a well-read person who sometimes takes

things too seriously. She is an insightful person able to detect if
something is happening between two people, especially if they are in
love.
Backstory Ms. Herrera studied Literature at the National Autonomous University

of Mexico. She later specialized in Latin American Studies, obtaining a
position as an assistant professor at the University of Snuggford, where
she has become an eminence in this field of research.
Ethnicity Latin American
Look A little dark-skinned, curly brown hair, brown eyes. She wears some
(Default) slightly “exotic” accessory (maybe some colorful South American-style
earrings), but in general she tries to go unnoticed.
Traits Educated, passionate about literature.
BRANDON (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)
BRIEF DESCRIPTION
“Brandon is the lead singer of the emocore band My Screaming Cheetah. He was bitten
by an Asian long horned tick during a tour in Japan two months ago. He had a bullseye-
shaped rash but didn’t tell anyone because he didn’t want to reschedule the dates.”
• At the beginning: Doctor-patient relationship. Nothing special.

• Can evolve to: Phoebe begins to feel guilty for what happened. She starts to spend
time with Brandon trying to figure out the nature of his disease and deciding
whether she should inform the board against Dr. Weir.
Name Brandon Buchanan
Age 27
Personality Quiet, clever, creative. He seems very calm on the outside but he’s
constantly trying to disguise many worries and insecurities (not being
openly gay, for example). He is a kind and educated person, but every
now and then he has anger outbursts.
Backstory Brandon was a whiz kid. Grown up in a family of musicians, he learned

piano and singing from his mother. He joined his first band at the age of
12 with three schoolmates; one of them, Clint Marshall, now his
boyfriend, is also one of the founder members of My Screaming Cheetah.
They have released four studio albums since their debut at the age of 18.
Now they are in the middle of a world tour whose next stop is Snuggford.
Brandon was bitten by an Asian long horned tick during a mini tour in
Japan two months ago. He had a bullseye-shaped rash but didn’t tell
anyone because he didn’t want to reschedule the dates. He felt flu-like
symptoms, like fatigue and a lack of energy, but he attributed it to the
stress of the tour.
Ethnicity Caucasian
Look Pale skin, dark haired, green eyes with dark eye liner.
(Default)
Traits Singer, musician, artist.
1.10. SETTINGS
The season takes place primarily in Little Creek Hospital. These are all the contemplated
locations of the game:
• Hospital’s hallway.
• Hospital’s cafeteria.
• Patient’s room.
• Operation room.
• Hospital lockers.
• Bar.
• Phoebe’s apartment.
• Seth’s place.
• Buck’s place.
• Allison’s office.
• Board/Mason’s office.
• Concert hall.
The season happens one month after the events of season one.
2. STORY BREAKDOWN
EPISODE 1 BREAKDOWN
• Meeting room. “It's time...” Doors open. Mason informs Phoebe why she’s
appearing before the Little Creek Hospital board. Not only her career but the
prestige of the entire hospital will depend on what she decides to say. The
situation is serious. “How did all end up like this...?”, she asks herself.
Superimposed: “THREE WEEKS EARLIER...”
• Hospital hallway. First day of the internship’s second semester. Phoebe returns to
Little Creek Hospital full of hope for getting back to work. She comes across
Allison, happy to have her back. Allison asks her to go to room no. 22 on the
second floor for something very important. She doesn’t tell her why exactly but
asks her not to be late.
• Hospital hallway/entrance.
o If Phoebe decided not to stay with either Mac or Seth at the end of the first
season, both show up. They use this moment to catch up.
o If Phoebe and Mac ended up the first season together, he shows up alone
first. He openly asks Phoebe where she’s been hiding. Phoebe has been
very busy and didn’t answer his calls. Promises to talk about it later. Seth
appears, which generates an awkward moment between the three. Phoebe
sees off toward Allison’s office.
o If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together, he shows up alone
first. He seems like he wants to ask something but doesn’t want to sound
nosy. He seems slightly worried about their ambiguous relationship.
Phoebe has been very busy and didn’t answer his calls. Promises to talk
about it later. Mac appears, which generates an awkward moment between
the three. Phoebe sees off toward Allison’s office.
• Brandon’s room. Phoebe doesn’t find Allison, but a female doctor (Dr. Weir 1)
who starts talking about a patient in an unexpected way. She gives Phoebe the
chance to ask three questions to the patient to diagnose him.
1 Think about Dr. Weir as a female Dr. House. She can diagnose Brandon by only knowing a couple of things
about his life. He’s a famous rocker. He lives the life of a rocker. Drinks alcohol, takes drugs to stay active,
lives a stressful life. While Phoebe is distracted by “trivial” questions, Dr. Weir already knows what’s wrong
with Brandon (only in part, though). She just wants to teach Phoebe a lesson of diagnosis. Phoebe’s impressed
by the conviction and firmness of her diagnosis. To corroborate her hypothesis, Dr. Weir improvises a caloric
stimulation test. She introduces a small amount of cold water into the ear canal with a syringe, proving
Brandon’s eye-movement to be erratic.
• Hospital hallway. Phoebe expresses her admiration for Dr. Weir, and she
congratulates Phoebe for her work. They have a friendly conversation that is
interrupted by a phone call. Dr. Weir apologises and attends it. Allison shows up
to apologise for the little “trap” she set and tells Phoebe that Mac and Seth are
already taking care of their next patient. She asks her to join them and remember
to keep a secret that she’ll be the only one working with Dr. Weir. Before leaving,
Phoebe sees Dr. Weir having a tense telephone conversation. It looks like she has
some serious personal problem.
• Ms. Herrera’s room. Phoebe joins Mac and Seth, and the team starts asking the
needed questions to make a first diagnosis. In this scene we see how Mac and Seth
feelings towards Phoebe start to affect (just slightly for now) the relationship
between the three. Any opinion in favor of one is seen by the other as a sign of
disaffection. Then Allison bursts into the room. Brandon has gotten worse! He
had a nerve pain attack during one of the scans. Allison asks her to join Dr. Weir
again immediately...
LOCATIONS
• Meeting room.
• Patient’s room (Brandon).
• Patient’s room (Ms. Herrera).
CHARACTERS
• Phoebe.
• Mason.
• Allison.
• Mac.
• Seth.
• Dr. Weir.
• Brandon.
• Ms. Herrera.
EPISODE 2 BREAKDOWN
• Brandon’s room. Phoebe assists Dr. Weir with Brandon’s new diagnosis. Dr. Weir
diagnoses a chronic fatigue syndrome (CFS). However, Phoebe thinks more tests
need to be made to discard other disorders. Dr. Weir seems reluctant. She needs
to attend a lot of other patients, and Brandon thinks he can make it through. Tests
mean time and Brandon doesn’t want to waste it. Both pressure Phoebe to
discharge Brandon with a prescription of painkillers and antidepressants. Phoebe
makes clear that they’re skipping procedures.
• Hospital hallway.
o If Phoebe disagreed with Dr. Weir, she politely asks Phoebe to never
question her diagnosis in front of a patient. Then she leaves.
• Ms. Herrera’s room. Phoebe goes back to Ms. Herrera’s room, but Mac and Seth
aren’t there. Phoebe can use this time to look a little into the patient’s backstory
and get to know her better.
o PREMIUM CHOICE : Phoebe can ask Ms. Herrera whether Seth and
Mac were talking about her in her absence:
▪ If Phoebe and Mac ended up the first season together, Mac openly
told Seth how much he missed her this last month.
▪ If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together, he tried to
worm info about Phoebe out of Mac.
▪ If Phoebe ended up “alone”, they were simply talking about
random stuff.
o Phoebe gets a message from Mason, asking her to go to the file room asap.
Seth and Mac are there too.
• File room. Mason tells the team about “the most exciting part” of being a doctor:
Issuing bills! There are a lot of overdue bills and Mason needs two of them to
handle the paperwork.
• Hospital cafeteria. Once they finish, the three friends celebrate having worked as
a team with a drink. After some chit chat, Phoebe says someone should go check
Ms. Herrera’s test results:
o If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together, Mac will leave. She
and Seth will have some spare time to talk about their feelings. After that,
Mac pages to tell them he has the results (go to beat A).
o If Phoebe and Mac ended up the first season together, Seth will leave. She
and Mac will have some spare time to talk about their feelings. After that,
Mac suggests going check if Seth’s at the lab with the test results (go to
beat B).
o If Phoebe ended up single, the three of them go to check the results (go to
beat C).
• Laboratory.
o A) Phoebe arrives at the lab and asks Mac about the test results. Mac
seems worried: “We got a problem here.”
o B) Phoebe arrives at the lab and asks Seth about the tests results: “You
aren’t going to like them...”
o C) The team arrives, and Mac grabs the test results. Phoebe asks about
them. Mac seems worried: “We got a problem here.”
LOCATIONS
• Hospital cafeteria.
• File room.
• Laboratory.
CHARACTERS
• Phoebe.
• Mason.
• Mac.
• Seth.
• Dr. Weir.
• Brandon.
• Ms. Herrera.
EPISODE 3 BREAKDOWN
• Ms. Herrera’s room. The team argues over who should give the news to Ms.
Herrera. Eventually, one of the three tells her that she has a chronic kidney disease
in a very advanced state. She should start preparing for dialysis or a kidney
transplant immediately. Ms. Herrera doesn’t seem very surprised by the news.
Phoebe notices.
• Hospital hallway. Phoebe is about to ask Allison, who happens to be at the hallway,
about the procedure to request a transplant, but as soon as she approaches, a
sudden commotion interrupts. Nurses run through the hallway, heading towards
a patient’s room. It’s Brandon! One of the nurses explains that he has suffered a
heart block. Phoebe runs after him.
• Brandon’s room. A few minutes later. Dr. Weir explains that she has performed a
cardiac workup and seen an aberrant heart rhythm. For now, it’s a second-degree
heart block, therefore, needs no treatment, but Phoebe points out that it can
evolve to a third-degree heart block. In that case, he would need a permanent
pacemaker. Dr. Weir agrees to give Phoebe two days to run all the tests she wants,
then leaves. Phoebe gets a text message. It’s her brother, Josh: “Hey, I just left
work. Can we meet at Donny’s in 20 minutes? There’s something I need to talk
to you about.” Phoebe decides to talk to Brandon... once he wakes up. But first,
she can either go to Allison’s office (go to beat A) or meet Josh at Donny’s (go to
beat B).
o A) Allison’s office. Phoebe tells Allison about Ms. Herrera’s case, but she
notices that isn’t the only thing worrying her. Phoebe can use this
opportunity to show her confidence in Allison and tell her what happened
at Brandon’s room. Allison won’t decide for Phoebe, but she’ll remember
the trust she placed in her.
o B) Bar. After catching up with Phoebe, Josh asks her if she remembers
what day’s coming. Phoebe doesn’t seem to recall until Josh tells her:
Emma’s birthday. It's the first time Phoebe forgets it. Josh says their
parents have asked him to bring the family together again now that Josh
and Phoebe are back in touch. The four could go pay respects at Emma’s
grave and then enjoy a family lunch. Phoebe refuses initially, but finally
Josh convinces her to join, if not for her parents or Josh, for Emma.
• Hospital hallway. Mason’s waiting outside. He says that Brandon’s representatives
are starting to get nervous. They’re asking how come he entered the hospital with
heaving and weakness and suddenly he’s having heart blocks. A lot of investors
and promoters are worried about the costs of a tour cancellation. Mason
downplays the matter for now but asks Phoebe to inform him on anything that can
help the hospital overcome the process. Phoebe starts feeling guilty for what
happened. Oh, and he needs her to do some extra hours of more paperwork...
LOCATIONS
• Allison’s office.
• Donny’s (bar).
CHARACTERS
• Phoebe.
• Mason.
• Allison.
• Mac.
• Seth.
• Dr. Weir.
• Brandon.
• Ms. Herrera.
• Josh.
EPISODE 4 BREAKDOWN
• Hospital cafeteria. Phoebe seems very tired, she didn’t sleep a wink. She
approaches the waiter to order coffee.
o If Phoebe didn’t meet Josh in episode 3, she gets a text message again.
“Hey, you dumped me yesterday. Wanna try again at lunchtime?”.
o If Phoebe didn’t go to Allison's office in episode 3, she shows up to talk to
her. “You wanted to ask me something yesterday. Is something wrong?”.
Phoebe tells Allison about Ms. Herrera’s case, but she notices that isn’t
the only thing worrying her. Phoebe can use this opportunity to show her
confidence in Allison and tell her what happened at Brandon’s room.
Allison won’t decide for Phoebe, but she’ll remember the trust she placed
in her.
o Regardless of the above, Phoebe’s ready to work. Today Mac’s taking care
of Ms. Herrera, and Seth is with Brandon. Although you can choose to
start with any of them, eventually you’ll have to visit both.
o Option 1: “Start with Brandon” (go to beat A).
o Option 2: “Start with Ms. Herrera” (go to beat B).
• A) Brandon’s room. Seth is there to help Phoebe with the diagnosis. If Dr. Weir
doesn’t have time for him, she’ll take charge of the case! The main mystery here
is what’s causing the heart block. He’ll make a round of questions where the player
must choose the most appropriate answers. Right answer means Seth and Phoebe
think the same way (Seth +1). Wrong answer means they aren’t on the same page
(Seth -1). Regardless of the answers, they will order some tests. After the
diagnosis, Seth will use this opportunity to ask Phoebe about Mac. He wants to
know once and for all if there’s something between them, or if she’s (still?)
interested in him.
• B) Ms. Herrera’s room. Mac seems worried: “I have to show you something.” Mac
shows Phoebe the insurance policy of Ms. Herrera. He suggests asking her
straightaway. Thus, they finally find out that Ms. Herrera was diagnosed with her
illness while still living in Mexico. She hid that information when she got to
Snuggford; no insurer would have accepted her as a client. Mac thinks they
shouldn’t let Mason know this yet. Phoebe can promise to say nothing or tell
Mason. After the diagnosis, Mac will use this opportunity to ask Phoebe about
Seth. He wants to know once and for all if there’s something between them, or if
she’s (still?) interested in him.
• Hospital hallway. If A was the last scene, Seth asks Phoebe to join him and Mac at
the cafe for lunch. If B was the last scene, Mac asks Phoebe the same.
o If Phoebe got Josh’s second message this morning, she must meet Josh and
skip that scene (go to beat C). If not, she can join them (go to beat D).
• C) Bar. After catching up with Phoebe, Josh asks her if she remembers what day’s
coming. Phoebe doesn’t seem to recall until Josh tells her: Emma’s birthday. It's
the first time Phoebe forgets it. Josh says their parents have asked him to bring
the family together again now that Josh and Phoebe are back in touch. The four
could go pay respects at Emma’s grave and then enjoy a family lunch. Phoebe
refuses initially, but finally Josh convinces her to join, if not for her parents or Josh,
for Emma.
• D) Hospital cafeteria. Phoebe seems distracted. Mac and Seth notice. Phoebe
tries to ask for advice without mentioning Dr. Weir. She wants to know what the
consequences of medical malpractice are, both for doctors and patients. None of
this helps her to calm down. Phoebe needs some time alone.
• Locker room. Phoebe needs to think about the situation. Some staring at the
mirror moment. She then notices Dr. Weir’s locker isn’t locked.
o Option 1: “Take a quick look.” Dr. Weir shows up before Phoebe can see
anything. She catches her by surprise. Phoebe leaves embarrassed (Dr.
Weir -1).
o Option 2: “Better not.” Dr. Weir shows up, asking Phoebe what’s she’s
doing there. She leaves, giving Dr. Weir some silly excuse.
o PREMIUM CHOICE : “Lock the locker room door and take a quick
look.” Phoebe finds inside a boat of Olmifon (adrafinil) and a picture in
the locker door with Dr. Weir hugging two girls, presumably her daughters.
There was a fourth person in the photo, but it has been torn off. Someone
knocks at the door. It’s Dr. Weir. Phoebe returns everything to the locker
and leaves, giving Dr. Weir some silly excuse.
LOCATIONS
• Donny’s (bar).
• Locker room.
CHARACTERS
• Phoebe.
• Allison.
• Mac.
• Seth.
• Dr. Weir.
• Brandon.
• Ms. Herrera.
• Josh.
• Waiter.
EPISODE 5 BREAKDOWN
• Laboratory. An alarm clock rings. Phoebe wakes up suddenly, disoriented. Seth

comes in: “You spent the night at the lab?!” Phoebe couldn’t sleep and spent the
night running tests for Brandon. No satisfactory results so far. Seth offers to invite
Phoebe to a coffee, but he needs to check on Brandon first.
• Brandon’s room. When Phoebe arrives, Dr. Weir’s also there. Brandon’s being
discharged today on his own account. He’s feeling better now. Phoebe gets mad.
She’s been running tests all night for nothing. Phoebe can accuse Dr. Weir of
knowing she’s not right and still doing nothing. Maybe someone must intervene
to take her out of the room. Lots of drama here.
• Hospital cafeteria. Mac and Seth are there. Phoebe orders coffee and joins the
guys. It’s Friday. Mac suggests going out tonight. Regardless the answers, they all
agree to go to Donny’s tonight. Mason shows up. He says to be aware that Ms.
Herrera’s insurance doesn’t cover the assistance she needs. He expects the issue
to be solved immediately: “There are many patients waiting to use that room.”
Mac’s opposed to drop the patient. They’re doctors, not accountants. Their duty
is to proceed despite the expenses. Phoebe asks Seth for his opinion. However, he
disagrees with Mac this time. They should refer her to a safety net provider, such
as a public clinic. The coldness of his friend drives Mac mad. He runs away.
o Option 1: “Run after Mac.” (Mac +1) (go to beat A)
o Option 2: “Run after Seth.” (Seth +1) (go to beat B)
• A) Hospital hallway. Phoebe tries to calm Mac. He apologizes for reacting like
that. Here we can hint at Mac’s mother problems in season 1, when she had a
strange condition that needed an expensive treatment. He knows better than no
one that money is the dividing line between healthy and poor.
o Option 1: “I know what you're going through.” (Mac +1)
o Option 2: “You can’t let emotions control you always.” (Mac -1)
• B) Hospital cafeteria. Seth apologizes for being so straightforward, but he believes
it’s the best way to survive in this career.
o Option 1: “I understand. Part of me wants to be like that.” (Seth +1)
o Option 2: “How can you still be so cold?” (Seth -1)
• Brandon’s room. Phoebe apologizes to Brandon for what happened before. He
plays it down, and thanks her for all her concerns. He jokes about the artist way of
life and knowing he won’t live long anyway. He gives her two tickets for his band’s
show tonight and leaves.
• Phoebe’s bedroom. Later that day, Phoebe is lying in bed. She notices the two
tickets. She can choose to go to the show alone, with Mac or Seth. You can change
her outfit to something suggestive to increase the chances of making out with any
of them.
• Concert hall. Brandon’s band starts playing. The crowd yells with the sound of the
first chords. Things run smoothly. Phoebe starts dancing to the thunderous music.
o If you’re with either Seth or Mac, you can unlock some kissing options.
• Brandon seems to be going all-out. He starts climbing one of the scaffolds
supporting the lighting truss. He’s like three meters above the crowd. Something
goes wrong. Brandon isn’t singing. He looks weak, shivery, and disoriented. And
he falls off the scaffold with the sound of thousands of people screaming.
LOCATIONS
• Laboratory.
• Phoebe’s bedroom.
• Concert hall.
CHARACTERS
• Phoebe.
• Mason.
• Mac.
• Seth.
• Brandon.
• Waiter.
3. NARRATIVE DESIGN
EPISODE 1 NARRATIVE DESIGN
EPISODE BRANCHING TREE
SCENE 1
PURPOSE
“Introducing a story in media res, to generate several questions in the player: What
happened? How has this situation been reached? Where are the other characters? The
story begins with a clear conflict.”
LOCATION
Meeting room.
BEATS
• Black screen. Phoebe: “It's time...” Sound of doors opening.

• Meeting room: Phoebe is in front of Little Creek Hospital’s board, leaded by
Mason. The tone of the situation is severe (bg music can help). Mason informs
Phoebe that she’s in front of the hospital committee to testify (about what exactly
isn’t revealed yet). Mason makes sure that Phoebe understands the seriousness of
the situation. Not only her career but the prestige of the entire hospital will
depend on what she decides to say.
• Phoebe can’t believe it: “How did all end up like this...?” Fade to white, flashback
effect.
• Superimposed: “THREE WEEKS EARLIER...”
SCENE 2
PURPOSE
“Happy reencounter with the main characters of the series, contrasting the ominous tone
of the first scene with a more cheerful and optimistic mood.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
• First day of the internship’s second semester. Phoebe returns to Little Creek
Hospital full of hope for getting back to work. She can express her enthusiasm out
loud, how she can’t wait to meet all the team again, etc.
• She comes across Allison, who’s also happy to have her back. Allison asks her to
go to room no. 22 on the second floor for something very important. She doesn’t
tell her why exactly but asks her not to be late.
• After Allison leaves, 1 of 3 options can be triggered:
o 1) If Phoebe decided not to stay with either Mac or Seth at the end of the
first season —or if the player didn’t play season 1—, both will show up.
We can read a line said by Mac (off-screen), something funny that catches
her by surprise. She “turns around,” then both Mac and Seth show up.
Choice 2.1:
Hug Mac first Hug Seth first Hug both

(choice 1) (choice 2) (choice 3)
• +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Seth • +1 to $Mac

• Phoebe gives Mac a • Phoebe gives Seth a • +1 to $Seth
tight hug. tight hug. • Phoebe exclaims
• Mac mentions that • Seth blushes a little how much she’s
he hasn’t heard from when receiving the missed them, giving
her since the first hug. “Wow! Easy tiger, both a tight hug.
semester finished. or I’ll be your first • Mac mentions that
Phoebe apologises; patient.” he hasn’t heard from
she’s been very busy • Phoebe hugs Mac too. her since the first
lately. He mentions how he semester finished.
• Phoebe hugs Seth hasn’t heard from her Phoebe apologises;

too, who also smiles, since the first semester she’s been very busy
less effusive, and finished. lately.
replies with a brief • Phoebe apologises;
“it’s great to have you she’s been very busy
back.” lately.
• Phoebe tells them she is looking forward to catching up with them, but she has
arranged a meeting with Allison. Seth’s surprised by that. Phoebe rushes out.
• Seth wonders why she’ll have to meet with Allison so urgently.
o 2) If Phoebe and Mac ended up the first season together, he shows up first.
We can read a line said by Mac (off-screen), something funny that catches
her by surprise. She “turns around,” then Mac shows up. Choice 2.2:
Kiss Mac Hug Mac

(premium choice 1) (choice 2)
• +3 to $Mac • +1 to $Mac
• -1 to $Seth • Phoebe gives Mac a tight hug.
• Phoebe kisses Mac effusively. • Mac reacts enthusiastically. However,
• Mac’s surprised, but also pleased to he mentions that he hasn’t heard
see Phoebe has missed him (indeed!). from her since the first semester
However, he mentions that he hasn’t finished.
heard from her since the first • Phoebe replies that she’s been very
semester finished. busy. Mac insists: “You haven’t
• Phoebe replies that she’s been very texted me back...” Phoebe apologises
busy. Mac insists: “You haven’t texted and promises to talk about it later.
me back...” Phoebe apologises and • Seth shows up. She hugs him too.
promises to talk about it later. Seth smiles, less effusive, and replies
• Seth shows up: “Ahem...” Phoebe with a brief “it’s great to have you
pushes Mac aside, blushed. She says back.”
hi to Seth, asking how he’s been. The
situation is a little awkward, though.
• Phoebe breaks the ice announcing that she has arranged a meeting with Allison.
Seth’s surprised by that. Phoebe rushes out.
o 3) If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together, he shows up

alone first. We can read a line said by Seth (off-screen), something old-
fashioned, like “are you lost, young lady?” She “turns around,” then Seth
shows up. Choice 2.3:
Kiss Seth Hug Seth

• +3 to $Seth • +1 to $Seth
• -1 to $Mac • Phoebe gives Seth a tight hug.
• Phoebe kisses Seth effusively, • Seth blushes a little: “Wow! Easy
showing how much she’s missed him. tiger, or I’ll be your first patient.”
• Seth blushes a lot- he wasn’t • Seth seems like he wants to ask
expecting this! something but doesn’t want to sound
• Seth seems like he wants to ask nosy. He wants to know where
something but doesn’t want to sound Phoebe’s been. She apologises and
nosy. He wants to know where promises to talk about it later.
Phoebe’s been. She apologises and • Mac shows up. She hugs him too. He
promises to talk about it later. mentions how he hasn’t heard from
• Mac shows up- it’s an awkward her since the first semester finished:
moment. Phoebe pushes Seth aside, “Wow, I thought you wouldn’t
blushed. She says hi to Mac, asking recognize me!”
how he’s been. He tries to downplay
the situation, forcing a big smile, but
can’t help feeling like the third wheel.
• Phoebe breaks the ice announcing that she has arranged a meeting with Allison.
Seth’s surprised by that. Phoebe rushes out.
SCENE 3
PURPOSE
“Introducing Dr. Weir and showing her skills as a diagnostician. We also introduce
Brandon as the patient of the main case of the season.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Allison isn’t in the room. Instead, there is a doctor who, without introducing
herself, starts talking about a patient in an unexpected way. “The name’s Brandon
Buchanan. Age, 27. He's afflicted by sporadic lightheadedness, imbalance, fatigue,
headaches, insomnia, and fainting episodes. You only have three questions to ask
him. Go!”
• Phoebe’s puzzled. She asks something like “excuse me, who are you?” Then the
doctor asks “is that your first question already?” Phoebe reacts. Brandon shows
up as the patient and we start questioning him. Choice 3.1:
“How are you feeling “What did you eat last “Are you wearing eyeliner?”
today?” night?” (choice 3)
(choice 1) (choice 2)
• +1 to $DrWeir • Brandon, confused, • -1 to $DrWeir

• Brandon explains answers that he had • Brandon laughs.
that he feels hot, some vegetables with “Yeah! Do you like it?
shivery, nauseous, mashed potatoes. I can get you some.”
and weak. “I’m vegan, if that’s • The doctor
• The doctor approves relevant.” disapproves the
the question. • The doctor neither question. “I expect
“Medical Diagnosis approves nor more from you, Ms.
101. Go on, Ms. disapproves the Rise.”
Rise.” question. “Food
poisoning? Not bad...
but too premature.”
• Choice 3.2:
“Where were you the night “When was the last time you “Are you married?”
of December 19?” felt the symptoms?” (choice 3)
• Brandon, confused, • +1 to $DrWeir • -1 to $DrWeir

asks if that’s relevant. • Brandon explains • Brandon laughs.
Anyway, he was that two days ago he “Actually, I’m-- No,
probably rehearsing was in the middle of a I’m not.”
with his band for a rehearsal with his • The doctor
show on December band when BAM!, he disapproves the
21. started to feel really question. “Is this a
• The doctor neither dizzy. game for you, Ms.
approves nor • The doctor approves Rise?”.
disapproves the the question. “Good.
question. “It could be We must trace a
relevant... for a TV chronology of the
crime drama.” disease.”
• Choice 3.3:
“Any known allergies?” “Should I turn on the A/C?” “Do you want some coffee?”
• +1 to $DrWeir • Brandon hesitates for • -1 to $DrWeir

• Brandon answers one second. • “No thanks, I already
that he isn’t aware of “Actually, that’d be had two coffees
any... then he great. I’m sweating today.”
remembers one: pine like a [writer: feel free • The doctor
trees, but if only he to finish it].” disapproves the
touches them. • The doctor neither question. “That would
• The doctor approves approves nor be great, Ms. Rise...
the question. disapproves the for a waitress!”
“Excellent! No question. “It’s good to
checkup is care about the
completed without patient’s comfort, but
this question.” don’t miss the point
of the diagnosis.”
• The doctor collects all the symptoms —lightheadedness, imbalance, fatigue,

headaches, insomnia, faints, shivers, nausea, and generalized weakness— and asks
Phoebe for her opinion. “It’s too soon to know, but it might be...” Choice 3.4:
Migraines Psychosis Meniere’s disease

• +1 to $DrWeir • -1 to $DrWeir • +2 to $DrWeir

• The doctor’s glad • The doctor • The doctor’s
she says that because facepalms. “Are you astonished. She
it’s a very reasonable naming diseases or congratulates Phoebe.
diagnosis. However, movie titles?” Meniere’s disease is
the shivers and the most similar
nausea are flu-like condition to
symptoms that point Brandon’s, but it isn’t
to an infection of 100% accurate,
some kind. because the patient
isn’t complaining
about hearing
problems and
disorientation, which
are inherent to
Meniere’s.
• The doctor tells Phoebe that she asked interesting questions, but she has missed
one of the most important ones: What the patient does for a living. Brandon is a
rock singer. Extreme stress, smoking and drinking alcohol, fatigue... are variables
that may increase the risk of developing certain conditions. There’s one disease
that can get worse with things such as crowded areas, loud sounds, and dark places.
• To prove it, she’s running an improvised caloric stimulation test. She asks Phoebe
if she knows what it is. Choice 3.5:
(Lie) “Of course.” (True) “Not really…”

• The doctor then asks her for the • The doctor says it’s okay, it’s not a test
instrument she needs to run the that many people know, and asks her
test. Go to Choice 3.6. for a syringe. Go to next beat.
• Choice 3.6 (only if you lied).

Pass a stethoscope Pass a syringe Pass a scalpel

• -1 to $DrWeir • +1 to $DrWeir • -1 to $DrWeir

• The doctor • Go to next beat. • The doctor facepalms
facepalms again. again. “What exactly
“What exactly do you do you want me to do
want me to do with with this?” Then asks
this?” Then asks her her for a syringe. (Go
for a syringe. (Go to to next beat).
next beat).
• Phoebe hands over a syringe to the doctor. She introduces some cold water into
Brandon’s left ear and asks Phoebe to look closely at the reaction in his eyes. “They
don’t react...”
• The doctor explains that the cold water changes the temperature of the inner ear,
and this should cause rapid, side-to-side eye movements called nystagmus. The
absence of these movements indicates a viral ear infection called labyrinthitis.
• Medical prescription: corticosteroids to reduce inflammation, drinking a lot of
water, and resting as much as possible to avoid episodes of vertigo.
SCENE 4
PURPOSE
“To give the player the chance to build a good relationship with Dr. Weir, something
that’ll contrast with the conflict that will happen later. To leave an impression of Dr. Weir
as someone infallible so that her “fall” is harder. To hint at Dr. Weir’s inner conflict.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
• After leaving the room, Phoebe seems impressed and praises the doctor, who
kindly thanks Phoebe for her help.
• Dr. Weir reminds Phoebe that in medicine, you don’t always have all the time in
the world to dedicate to the patients, so you must learn to think and act fast. With
time, she’ll learn to read the symptoms and diagnose quickly. That’s why she made
this little test, to start preparing her for the “real” medicine.
• The two are chatting when Allison shows up: “So you two have met already.” Then
Allison tells Phoebe that she’s in front of Dr. Weir. Choice 4.1:
“Dr. Weir? You mean “It’s a pleasure.” “Dr. who?”

Samantha Weir?!” (choice 2) (choice 3)
(choice 1)
• +1 to $DrWeir • Dr. Weir replies with • -1 to $DrWeir

• Dr. Weir smiles: a polite “the pleasure • Allison apologizes for
“The very same.” is mine.” Phoebe. Then she
• Phoebe says that she • Allison talks about talks about Dr. Weir’s
has read all her Dr. Weir’s reputation reputation and how
papers and research, and how much she much she has
and she’s a great fan has contributed to contributed to
of her. medicine in the medicine in the
country. country.
• Allison informs that this semester, Dr. Weir will be Phoebe’s direct supervisor.
Choice 4.2:
“Thank you! I’ll do my best!” “I don’t think I need this.”

• +1 to $DrWeir • -1 to $DrWeir
• Dr. Weir says something about how • Dr. Weir replies something like:
much she misses the energy of the “Believe me, you DO.”
youth.
• Dr. Weir gets a phone call and excuses to attend it.

• Allison apologizes for the little “trap,” but Dr. Weir insisted on testing her new
resident/assistant.
• Phoebe asks whether she really is that good, and Allison answers “the best.” She
hasn’t misdiagnosed anyone in the last ten years. It’s a blessing that she’s working
at Little Creek Hospital.
• Allison says Mac and Seth are already taking care of their next patient. She should
join them now.
• Phoebe wants to know one last thing: why didn’t Allison count on Mac and Seth
to work with Dr. Weir too? Allison’s glad that Phoebe cares about her friends, as
always, but Weir only agreed to work with one resident, so this is an extra award
for winning the Mark of Excellence last semester.
• Phoebe says she doesn’t know how the others, especially Seth, will take it, but
Allison says she’s sure she’ll know how to handle it.
• Before leaving, Phoebe notices Dr. Weir having a tense phone call.
SCENE 5
PURPOSE
“Introducing Ms. Herrera’s case, bringing back the team together, and letting the player
choose between hiding or revealing Brandon’s case to Mac and Seth.”
LOCATION
Ms. Herrera’s room
BEATS
• Phoebe arrives at the room of her second patient, apologising for the delay. Mac
asks where she has been. Choice 5.1:
Tell the truth “Just catching up with “Can’t I just leave you alone
(premium choice 1) Allison.” for one second?”
• +1 to $Mac • Mac seems • -1 to $Mac

• +1 to $Seth convinced, but Seth • Mac apologizes for
• Set $tellTruth to true suspects. We see in intruding.
his face that he
• She says she’ll be doesn’t entirely • Phoebe feels terrible

working on a different believe Phoebe. She and apologizes to
case with Dr. Weir. notices. Mac.
• Mac takes it in good • Seth intervenes:
part, but Seth doesn’t “Have you stopped
seem that excited. apologising already?
We have a patient to
take care of.”
• Phoebe asks her colleagues to bring her up to date on the case. She’s introduced
to Ms. Herrera, a retired professor hospitalized because of muscle cramps and
trouble catching her breath. Ms. Herrera says hi politely.
• Seth asks Phoebe for her medical opinion. Choice 5.2:
Let Mac start the diagnosis Let Seth start the diagnosis Start the diagnosis
• +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Seth • Phoebe suggests

• Phoebe gives the floor • Phoebe gives the ordering a full blood
to Mac. floor to Seth. test and a thoracic
• He suggests looking • He suggests looking radiograph to
into the domestic and into the patient’s discard a case of
work environment of medical history to see pneumonia.
the patient to see if whether the pain • Mac says “alright,
she’s been subject to traces back more let’s start with that”.
repeated inhalation of than three months. In Seth says nothing.
airborne pollutants. addition, they should He doesn’t seem
They may also know if study the exact points satisfied. (Go to next
she’s a normal smoker, where the patient beat.)
to discard a case of feels pain to rule out
acute bronchitis. a possible
• Seth disagrees, fibromyalgia.
claiming that she • Mac disagrees,
worked as a professor, claiming it’s too soon
not as a bus driver. It’s to diagnose such a
unlikely that she’s severe condition.
been exposed to such Fibromyalgia is only
many airborne diagnosed when no

pollutants. Then he other reason for the
explains his diagnosis symptoms is found.
(see choice 2). Then he explains his
• Go to Choice 5.3. diagnosis (see choice
1).
• Go to Choice 5.3.
• Choice 5.3:
Agree with Mac Agree with Seth Agree with both

• -1 to $Seth • -1 to $Mac • Phoebe suggests

• Phoebe intervenes to • Phoebe intervenes to running tests for
admit that Mac’s right. admit that Seth’s both diagnoses and
She suggests adding a right. She suggests add a full blood test
full blood test to rule adding a full blood to rule out other
out other conditions. test to rule out other conditions. Both
• Seth grumbles. conditions. agree, partly
• Mac plays down the convinced.
issue, pretending it
doesn’t affect him.
• Allison shows up, asking Phoebe how it is to be back to business. Choice 5.4:
“I missed it so much!” “It will take time to pick up “Exhausting.”

(choice 1) the pace.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Go to next beat. • Go to next beat. • Go to next beat.
• Allison then asks Phoebe why she doesn’t go back to Brandon’s room and assist
Dr. Weir in the check-up. Allison reminds her that Dr. Weir is her supervisor now,
so she should try and learn as much as possible from her guidance during the
semester.
SCENE 1
PURPOSE
“Phoebe treats Brandon’s nerve pain attack.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Brandon is having a severe nerve pain attack! Choice 1.1:
Perform a tracheostomy Administer anticonvulsants Tie Brandon to the bed

(choice 1) painkillers (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Why exactly? The • +1 to $DrWeir • -1 to $DrWeir

patient isn’t choking! • “Good, painkillers • “Someone has seen
• Dr. Weir stands in are the first step to too many horror
for Phoebe and stop pain attacks.” movies.”
administers Brandon • Dr. Weir stands in for
some painkillers. Phoebe and
administers Brandon
some painkillers.
• What should they prescribe Brandon to prevent future attacks? Choice 1.2:
Antibiotics Lime blossom tea Antidepressants

• That doesn’t make • -1 to $DrWeir • +1 to $DrWeir

any sense. There are • Not a bad idea... for • Excellent! Certain
no signs of bacterial an old lady with sleep types of
infection. problems. antidepressants can
• Dr. Weir stands in • Dr. Weir stands in for help with nerve pain.
for Phoebe and Phoebe and Studies have even
prescribes Brandon prescribes Brandon shown that using them
some some along with
antidepressants. antidepressants. anticonvulsants may
have bigger benefits
than using them alone.
• Finally, what kind of lifestyle changes should Brandon make to prevent further
nerve pain attacks? Choice 1.3:
Smoking Practicing relaxation Stop singing

(choice 1) techniques (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Actually, it’s quite • +1 to $DrWeir • Isn’t that a little too

the opposite! • Awesome! While drastic? We don’t
• Dr. Weir stands in they won't cure nerve want to cross that line
for Phoebe and pain, making some yet.
recommends changes to your • Dr. Weir stands in for
Brandon to make habits can help you Phoebe and
some changes to his feel better and ease recommends Brandon
habits, like practicing some of your to make some changes
relaxation techniques discomfort. to his habits, like
and quitting practicing relaxation

smoking. techniques and
quitting smoking.
SCENE 2
PURPOSE
“This is the scene where the medical malpractice takes place. Phoebe tries to prevent it,
but she feels pressured by Dr. Weir and Brandon.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• A few minutes later, Dr. Weir informs that the patient is stable, so he’ll be
discharged with the prescription they have agreed. Just after, Phoebe asks if it’s
not too soon to make that decision, and Dr. Weir asks why. Choice 2.1:
“There might be an underlying “What about the fainting “I want to spend more time
disease.” episodes?” with him.”
• Phoebe argues that • “What about them?”, • This argument is

they still don’t know if Dr. Weir asks, clearly not enough
there’s an underlying making clear that for Dr. Weir! (Skip
disease behind the they treated that next beats and go to
nerve pain attack. symptom before, and Choice 2.4.)
• Dr. Weir says it’s a concluded that it was
good argument, but an ear infection. (No
not good enough: most surprise: sometimes
likely the patient’s labyrinthitis can
experiencing chronic come up with a
fatigue, result of his chronic fatigue
fast-paced lifestyle, syndrome. It’s called

and aggravated by the the “downward
stress of the last spiral.”) (Skip next
months. beat and go to
Choice 2.4.)
• Dr. Weir asks if there’s another reason for not discharging him. Choice 2.2:
“He might have another nerve “We need to run every “I haven’t asked him for an
pain attack.” possible test.” autograph.”
• Dr. Weir argues that’s • Good point. In a • This argument is

why they prescribed perfect world, they’d clearly not enough
everything before, to have all the time they for Dr. Weir! (Skip
prevent them from need to do all kinds of next beat and go to
happening. Anyway, tests on every Choice 2.4.)
they can’t hospitalize patient.
people forever. If he Unfortunately, there
has another attack, ER are many people
will handle. (Skip next waiting, and
beat and go to Choice Brandon's case is
2.4.) clear enough.
• Dr. Weir asks if there’s anything else you want to add. Choice 2.3:
Try to convince Brandon “...” (Give up)

• -1 to $DrWeir • +1 to $DrWeir
• Set $convinceBrandon to true • Dr. Weir appreciates that Phoebe
• Phoebe explains that, for his own good, hasn’t forgotten how a hospital
Brandon should demand more tests, works and is maintained. (Go to
but Brandon thinks the same as Dr. Scene 3.)
Weir. Besides, his promoters would
pressure him to resume rehearsals as
soon as possible, so he can’t waste more

days at the hospital. He sincerely
thanks Phoebe for his concern (he says
he won’t forget that gesture), but he
wants to be discharged. (Go to Scene
3.)
• Dr. Weir asks if there’s anything else you want to add (only if you failed any of the
questions from 2.1 and/or 2.2). Choice 2.4:
Try to convince Brandon “...” (Give up)

• -1 to $DrWeir • +1 to $DrWeir
• Set $convinceBrandon to true • Dr. Weir appreciates that Phoebe
• Phoebe explains that, for his own good, hasn’t forgotten how a hospital
Brandon should demand more tests, works and is maintained. (Go to
but Brandon thinks the same as Dr. Scene 3.)
Weir. Besides, his promoters would
pressure him to resume rehearsals as
soon as possible, so he can’t waste more
days at the hospital. He sincerely
thanks Phoebe for his concern (he says
he won’t forget that gesture), but he
wants to be discharged. (Go to Scene
3.)
SCENE 3
PURPOSE
“Just a short scene where Phoebe and Dr. Weir discuss the decision of discharging
Brandon once again, this time privately. We want to be sure that the player feels Phoebe
has tried to prevent it from happening.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
o If $convinceBrandon == true, Dr. Weir says that’s not very smart for a
resident to go against a senior clinician’s diagnosis in front of a patient. She
asks her to please not do it again.
o If $convinceBrandon == false, Dr. Weir thanks her for her maturity as a doctor.
“We need more cool heads and less passionate hearts in this job.”
• Phoebe apologises for having doubts about her diagnosis, but she can’t help
wondering if they’re doing the right thing. Dr. Weir replies: “I’ve seen many
Brandons in my career. You don’t have to look too much into the causes of their
conditions. It’s all there, in plain sight. Believe me, this case won’t be something
to remember.”
• Dr. Weir must take care of a lot of other patients, so she rushes out.
• Phoebe sighs. She should go back with Mac and Seth.
SCENE 4
PURPOSE
“To give the player the chance to investigate Ms. Herrera’s backstory and get to know her
better. Also, to hint at Mac and Seth’s current feelings for Phoebe.”
LOCATION
Ms. Herrera’s room.
BEATS
• Phoebe goes back to Ms. Herrera’s room, but they aren’t there. She tells her that
her friends left a while ago to order the tests. Phoebe thinks they might be at the
laboratory. Choice 4.1:
Head for the lab Speak with Ms. Herrera

• Before she leaves, Ms. Herrera • Phoebe asks Ms. Herrera how she’s
mentions Mac and Seth. She tells feeling. She says she’s better now,
Phoebe that she's lucky to have thanks to the attention of her
friends like them. “You don’t have the colleagues.
luck to meet many people like them in • Ms. Herrera tells Phoebe that she's
one lifetime.” lucky to have friends like them. “You
don’t have the luck to meet many
people like them in one lifetime.”
• Phoebe says that she knows they’re great, and she’s lucky for having them as
friends. She just wishes things were easier sometimes.
• Ms. Herrera replies that feelings are something out of control. You just must give
in to them.
• She asks her to stay a bit longer and keep her some company.
• Before Phoebe can answer, the beeper sounds. It’s Mason. He asks her to go the
file room on the third floor asap. Ms. Herrera asks if something is wrong. Choice
4.2:
“No, nothing.” [Continue talking] “I should be going.” [Leave]

• Set $MsHerreraTrust to true • Phoebe says she must go somewhere.

• Phoebe ignores the message and asks, She apologises and leaves. (Go to
“what about you...?” (Go to Choice next scene.)
4.3.)
• Choice 4.3:
Ask about her career Ask about her family Ask about her hobbies
• Ms. Herrera studied • Ms. Herrera has an • Ms. Herrera is

Literature at the artist daughter who devoted to literature.
National Autonomous lives in Europe. She She reads an average
University of Mexico met her husband in of five books per
(UNAM). She later college, and they week. Not all is non-
specialized in Latin were happily married fiction, though. She

American Studies, all life. He was an reads short and easy-
obtaining a position as anthropologist who to-read romance
an assistant professor dedicated his whole novels too. She also
at the University of life to travel and watches soap operas
Snuggford, where she research the life and and car repair shows.
has become an customs of world
eminence in this field tribes. He died three
of research. years ago in a small
plane crash in the
Amazon.
• Ms. Herrera thanks Phoebe for keeping her company. She’s not surprised that her
friends couldn’t stop talking about her! Choice 4.4:
“You must have misheard.” “I’m not surprised either.” “What did they talk about?”
• This option doesn’t • This option doesn’t • If Phoebe and Mac

reveal what Seth and reveal what Seth and ended up the first
Mac were talking Mac were talking season together, Mac
about. about. openly told Seth how
much he missed her
this last month.
• If Phoebe and Seth
ended up the first
season together, he
tried to worm info
about Phoebe out of
Mac, like whether
they met or if she
texted him back.
• If Phoebe ended up
single, they just
recalled some funny
moments from
season 1, like that
time Phoebe helped

Mac spy on the
mysterious doctor,
or all the times
Phoebe and Seth
argued over the
diagnoses.
• Finally, Phoebe says she must go somewhere, but promises to come back soon to
keep her more company.
SCENE 5
PURPOSE
“We want to hint at the ‘overwork’ theme of the season, since Phoebe will have to handle
paperwork more times in next episodes, and that will burn her out too. This will make her
realize that being a doctor is way more than just taking care of people. Besides, this also
hints at the future conflict with Ms. Herrera’s case, with the whole ‘health is business’
thing.”
LOCATION
File room.
BEATS
• Phoebe arrives at the file room. Mason’s waiting for her:

o If $MsHerreraTrust == true, Phoebe will be late, and Mason will
reprimand her.
o Else, she left after getting the text message, so Mason just goes straight to
the point.
• Mason tells the team about “the most exciting part” of being a doctor: issuing bills!
There are a lot of overdue bills and Mason needs two of them to handle the
paperwork. He also stresses the idea that health is business and that they need to
learn some basic accounting to help keeping the hospital afloat.
• Who’s going to handle the paperwork? Choice 5.1:
All together [Fast] Phoebe alone [Slow]

• +1 to $Mac • -1 to $Mac
• +1 to $Seth • -1 to $Seth
• Mac exclaims something like: “Yay! • Mason is like: “Fine, whatever... as
The old team back together!” long as you finish the paperwork by
• Mason is fine with the decision. The the end of the day.”
more, the faster! • Mac and Seth are like: “What the hell,
• Go to premium beat 5.1. why does she want to do all alone?”
But they can’t but respect her
decision.
• Go to beat 5.2.
Phoebe and Mac [Normal] Phoebe and Seth [Normal]

• +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Seth
• -1 to $Seth • -1 to $Mac
• Mac is happy to have been “chosen.” • Seth can’t help smiling like a kid with
• Seth just mentions that he’ll be at the a balloon.
lab waiting for Ms. Herrera’s test • Mac, as usual, tries to hide his
results. feelings, and with a big smile
• Go to beat 5.3. announces that he’ll be at the lab
waiting for Ms. Herrera’s test results.
• Go to beat 5.4.
• Premium beat 5.1. Superimposed: “TWO HOURS LATER...” The team

celebrates having finished so fast, and they decide to go for a drink to the cafe.
(Go to Premium scene).
• Beat 5.2. Superimposed: “TWO HOURS LATER...” Phoebe’s in the middle of the
paperwork when Allison shows up. She says Mason told her that Phoebe was
handling the work all by herself. She offers to help. Choice 5.2:
Accept Decline
• Allison’s glad to help Phoebe and • Allison asks if something is wrong.

joins her with the paperwork. She Phoebe seems very worried, and she’s
then asks her how things are going acting like she doesn’t want to be with
with Dr. Weir. (Go to Choice 5.3.) anyone. (Go to Choice 5.3.)
• Choice 5.3:
“Everything’s fine, don’t worry.” “Actually, something happened...”

• -1 to $Allison • +1 to $Allison
o If Choice 5.2 == Accept, • Phoebe doesn’t go into detail (we
Allison prefers not to insist on don’t want this to happen yet), but
the issue, and they keep she hints at something she’s
working for the next hour. struggling with, a decision she made
o If Choice 5.2 == Decline, that might lead to severe
Allison prefers not to insist on consequences.
the issue, and then she leaves, • Allison just says that whenever she
just after telling Phoebe that needs a friend, she’ll be there to help.
whenever she needs a friend, Phoebe thanks the gesture.
she’ll be there to help. We see o If Choice 5.2 == Accept, they
Phoebe sad about the whole keep working for the next
situation. hour.
o If Choice 5.2 == Decline,
Allison cheers Phoebe up and
leaves.
• If Choice 5.2 == Accept: Superimposed: “ONE HOUR LATER...” Phoebe thanks

Allison for the help, then she gets a text message from Mac, asking her to go to
the lab.
• If Choice 5.2 == Decline: Superimposed: “ONE HOUR LATER...” Phoebe
finishes the paperwork, huffing and puffing. Then she gets a text message from
Mac, asking her to go to the lab.
• Beat 5.3. Superimposed: “THREE HOURS LATER...” Mac breathes a big sigh of
relief after finishing the work. He’s happy to have spent some time with Phoebe,
even under these circumstances. Choice 5.4:
“I’m happy too.” “Yeah, it could have been “I’d rather not go through this
(choice 1) worse!” again.”
• +1 to $Mac • Mac is unsure about • -1 to $Mac

• Mac shows off a big what Phoebe means • Mac says there’s no
smile: “That’s the but forces a smile. need to be rude!
Phoebe I
remember!”
• The beepers sound. Seth has the results and needs them to go to the lab asap.
• Beat 5.4. Superimposed: “THREE HOURS LATER...” Phoebe breathes a big sigh
of relief after finishing the work. Seth says he wouldn’t mind doing this again if
that means spending more time together. Choice 5.5:
“I wouldn’t mind either.” “Yeah, it could have been “I’d rather not go through this
(choice 1) worse!” again.”
• +1 to $Seth • “Thank you...?” Seth • -1 to $Seth

• He jokes about can’t help feeling a • Seth apologises “for
having a lot of little embarrassed. being kind.”
paperwork of his own
to handle too, so...
anytime!
• The beepers sound. Mac has the results and needs them to go to the lab asap.
SCENE 6 (PREMIUM)
PURPOSE
“We reward the player with this team-building scene where also Phoebe and Mac or Seth
can finally talk about their feelings, if they ended up season 1 together.”
LOCATION
Hospital cafeteria
BEATS
• The three friends celebrate having worked as a team with a soda at the hospital’s
cafe. Seth asks what should they toast to. Choice 6.1:
“Friendship!” “Success!” “True love!”

• Mac exclaims: “Yeah, • Seth adds: “I like that • Mac and Seth look at
to friendship!” and one,” and the team each other, a little
the team clink their clink their glasses. embarrassed by
glasses. Phoebe’s weird
choice, but they clink
their glasses anyway.
• After some happy chit-chat about how great is getting the team back together,
Phoebe suggests someone should go check Ms. Herrera’s test results:
o If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together: Mac will offer to
go. She and Seth will have some spare time to resume their conversation.
Seth basically wants to know where Phoebe’s been this last month, and
how come she didn’t text him back more often. Choice 6.2:
“I’ve been thinking about my “I’ve been traveling.” “I just needed some time
specialty.” (choice 2) alone.”
• Phoebe’s been • Phoebe explains that • After all that

thinking about the as soon as she finishes happened with
specialty track that the residency, she’ll Angus, Louisa, Josh,
comes after the barely have time to and the memories of
regular medical travel, so she wanted her sister Emma, she

residency. She to use that month to just needed some time
needed time to do some sightseeing. for herself. She’s been
consider all the • Seth says he would going to meditation
options she likes. have joined her if she classes and doing
• Seth is surprised that asked, but totally some exercise.
she doesn’t know it respects her decision. • Seth understands, and
yet. He’s sure about ask her to recommend
pursuing a career as a him some activities,
medical or maybe practicing
microbiologist. He together. He hasn’t
knows that he just done any exercise
lacks social skills, so since high school!
he’d be more useful
working at a research
lab.
• Seth isn’t fully satisfied. He asks Phoebe straight away what feelings she has for
him. Choice 6.3:
“I still love you...” “Right now, I’m not sure.” “Things aren’t the same as
(choice 1) (choice 2) before.”
(choice 3)
• +1 to $Seth • She feels that she • -1 to $Seth

• “But?”, Seth asks. might have hurried • Too many things have
• But Phoebe needs her decision. She changed inside of her
more time to resume barely knows him, during this last month.
their relationship. and they’re She just doesn’t look
Everything happened workmates, so she’s at him the same way as
in the middle of a unsure about what to before.
very turbulent do. • Seth looks clearly
situation, and things • Seth understands but disappointed. “You
need to settle down a disagrees: “When don’t need to beat
bit. you love someone, around the bush. Just
you just know it, and tell me you don’t love
do whatever you can me.”
• Seth understands to be with that

and caresses her person. That’s all I
hand softly. know.”
• The beepers sound. Mac has the results and needs them to go to the lab asap.
o Else if Phoebe and Mac ended up the first season together: Seth will offer
to go. She and Mac will have some spare time to resume their conversation.
Just like Seth, Mac wants to know where Phoebe’s been this last month,
and how come she didn’t text him back more often. Choice 6.4:
“I’ve been thinking about my “I’ve been traveling.” “I just needed some time
specialty.” (choice 2) alone.”
• Phoebe’s been • Phoebe explains that • After all that

thinking about the as soon as she happened with Angus,
specialty track that finishes the Louisa, Josh, and the
comes after the residency, she’ll memories of her sister
regular medical barely have time to Emma, she just
residency. She travel, so she wanted needed some time for
needed time to to use that month to herself. She’s been
consider all the do some sightseeing. going to meditation
options she likes. • Mac feels so jealous. classes and doing
• Mac confesses that It’s been ages since some exercise.
he hasn’t thought he last traveled! He • Mac recommends a
about it yet, but he kindly asks Phoebe to brand-new gym
has sometimes tell him next time. nearby and offers to
considered train with Phoebe
psychiatry, to help anytime she feels like!
people like her
mother.
• And just like Seth, Mac isn’t fully satisfied either. He asks Phoebe straight away
what feelings she has for him. Choice 6.5:
“I still love you...” “Right now, I’m not sure.” “Things aren’t the same as
(choice 1) (choice 2) before.”
(choice 3)
• +1 to $Mac • She feels that she • -1 to $Mac

• “But?”, Mac asks. might have hurried • Too many things have
• But Phoebe needs her decision. They’ve changed inside of her
more time to resume been friends for such during this last month.
their relationship. a long time, that She just doesn’t look
Everything happened dating just doesn’t at him the same way as
in the middle of a feel right. They’re before.
very turbulent also workmates, so • Mac can’t help looking
situation, and things she’s unsure about sad for the first time.
need to settle down a what to do. “I know... you’ve never
bit. • Mac understands but loved me, Phoebe. In
• Mac understands her disagrees: the end, we’re just
feelings. “Hey, “Friendship is the friends.”
whatever you need. most honest way of
I’ll be here for you, love. I couldn’t think
like I always have,” of dating someone
he says kindly. who isn’t my best
friend.”
• The beepers sound. Seth has the results and needs them to go to the lab asap.
o Else: the three of them will go check the results.
SCENE 7
PURPOSE
“A very short scene that serves as a cliffhanger for the next episode.”
LOCATION
Laboratory.
BEATS
• We see the first reaction to Ms. Herrera’s test results:

o If Phoebe came alone from the file room, she arrives at the lab and asks
Mac about the test results. Mac seems worried: “We got a problem here.”
o If Phoebe came with Seth, either from the file room or the cafeteria, she
arrives at the lab and asks Mac about the test results. Mac seems worried:
“We got a problem here.”
o If Phoebe came with Mac, either from the file room or the cafeteria, she
arrives at the lab and asks Seth about the tests results: “You aren’t going
to like them...”.
o If the three of them came from the cafeteria, Mac grabs the test results.
Phoebe asks about them. Mac seems worried: “We got a problem here.”
SCENE 1
PURPOSE
“To reveal Ms. Herrera’s condition and hint at the fact that she, for some reason, might
already know about it.”
LOCATION
BEATS
• The team discusses who should give the news to Ms. Herrera. Choice 1.1:
• Phoebe • Mac • Seth

• (choice 1) • (choice 2) • (choice 3)
• Phoebe offers to talk to • Mac asks why him. • Seth asks why him.
her. The other two (Go to Choice 1.2.) (Go to Choice 1.4.)
agree. (Go to next
beat.)
• “Because...” Choice 1.2:
“... you’re good with people.” “... you’re the funny doctor.” “..., you know, you’re both...
(choice 1) (choice 2) different.”
(choice 3)
• +1 to $Mac • Mac asks if that’s • -1 to $Mac

• Mac thanks Phoebe for what he’s after all... • “EXCUSE ME?”
her kind words and “the funny guy.” Mac can’t believe
agrees to talk to Ms. Sorry, not enough to what Phoebe’s
Herrera. (Go to next convince him. suggesting. Playing
beat.) • If Seth already the race card... Not
rejected to talk, cool, man.
Phoebe just gives up • If Seth already
and agrees to talk to rejected to talk,
her. (Go to next Phoebe just gives up
beat.) and agrees to talk to
• If Seth didn’t reject her. (Go to next
to talk yet: Go to beat.)
Choice 1.3. • If Seth didn’t reject
to talk yet: Go to
Choice 1.3.
• Choice 1.3:
Phoebe Seth
• Phoebe offers to talk to her. The other • Seth asks why him. (Go to Choice
two agree. (Go to next beat.) 1.4.)
• “Because...” Choice 1.4:
“... she needs someone that “... you’re the serious “... you’re cold as ice.”
gets to the point.” doctor.” (choice 3)
• +1 to $Seth • Seth asks if that’s • -1 to $Seth

• Seth guesses that’s what he’s after all... • Seth feels insulted: “I
she’s right and agrees “the serious guy.” have feelings too,
to talk to Ms. Herrera. Sorry, not enough to you know?” You
(Go to next beat.) convince him. can’t talk to friends
• If Mac already like that.
rejected to talk, • If Seth already
Phoebe just gives up rejected to talk,
and agrees to talk to Phoebe just gives up
her. (Go to next and agrees to talk to
beat.) her. (Go to next
• If Mac didn’t reject to beat.)
talk yet: Go to Choice • If Mac didn’t reject
1.5. to talk yet: Go to
Choice 1.5.
• Choice 1.5:
Phoebe Mac
• Phoebe offers to talk to her. The other • Mac asks why him. (Go to Choice
two agree. (Go to next beat.) 1.2.)
• Phoebe, Mac, or Seth tells Ms. Herrera that the blood test has revealed a chronic
kidney disease in a very advanced state. She should start preparing for dialysis or
a kidney transplant immediately. For some reason, however, Ms. Herrera doesn’t
seem very surprised by the news. It’s like she knew already but pretends to be
shocked.
• Phoebe says he’ll go ask Allison about the procedure to request a transplant.
SCENE 2
PURPOSE
“Just a short scene where Brandon faints when he’s about to leave the hospital and Phoebe
assists him. It connects with the next scene.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
• Outside the room, Phoebe bumps into Brandon, who’s about to leave the hospital.
He looks confident. Phoebe asks him once again how he feels and tells him to
come immediately if he feels something’s wrong. Brandon thanks her for the
concerns and invites her to attend the rehearsals of his band.
• Brandon feels dizzy suddenly. He can’t talk clearly. He feels a shortness of breath
and eventually faints. Choice 2.1:
Call for help Assist him Lift him up

• Phoebe calls for help • Phoebe checks for • Phoebe tries to lift
and a nurse shows up. Brandon’s breathing. Brandon up alone,
She calms Phoebe and He’s breathing, so but she fails. A nurse
checks for breathing. there’s no need for a shows up, exclaiming
• Brandon’s breathing, CPR. that you can’t do that
so there’s no need for • Then she checks his without help!
a CPR. She then pulse to find out an • The nurse checks for
checks his pulse to irregular heartbeat. Brandon’s
find out an irregular • A nurse shows up, and breathing.
heartbeat. Phoebe asks her for
• The nurse asks help lifting Brandon • He’s breathing, so

Phoebe for help up to carry him back there’s no need for a
lifting Brandon up to to his room. CPR. Then she
carry him back to his checks his pulse to
room. find out an irregular
heartbeat.
• The nurse asks
Phoebe for help
lifting Brandon up to
carry him back to his
room.
SCENE 3
PURPOSE
“To start showing the first consequences of Dr. Weir’s negligence.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Dr. Weir enters the room, asking what’s going on. Phoebe says that she’s
performing an EKG and she’s just found out an aberrant heart rhythm in Brandon.
Dr. Weir looks at the electrocardiogram and confirms the diagnosis. Phoebe asks
if that isn’t still enough to cancel Brandon’s discharge.
• However, Dr. Weir stands her ground, and says that it’s a second-degree heart
block. It may cause some dizziness and/or other symptoms, but this condition is
rarely treated. Choice 3.1:
“I’m afraid you’re right.” “That’s not enough of a “Are you out of your mind?”
(choice 1) reason.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• +1 to $DrWeir • Phoebe points out • -1 to $DrWeir

• Dr. Weir’s glad to see that it can evolve to a • Phoebe asks her how
Phoebe listens to third-degree heart many times she’s
reason. block. In that case, going to deny that
• However, Phoebe Brandon would need something’s wrong
points out that it can a permanent with Brandon.
evolve to a third- pacemaker.
degree heart block. In
that case, Brandon
would need a
permanent
pacemaker.
• Dr. Weir explains that she ordered a drug test and hands over the results to
Phoebe. They show positive for amphetamines.
• Phoebe feels defeated. Dr. Weir insists: She has seen many patients like this
before. Phoebe should stop chasing ghosts and instead stick to the most common
procedures.
• “Still...”, Phoebe says, then she begs for extra time to run some tests. She tells her
that she won’t waste any of her time. She will take charge of everything until
Brandon is discharged. Dr. Weir reluctantly agrees.
• Phoebe asks for three days, Dr. Weir replies that only one, finally they agree on
two days. Then Dr. Weir leaves.
• Phoebe gets a text message. It’s Josh’s: “Hey, I just left work. Can we meet at
Donny’s in 20 minutes? There’s something I need to talk to you about.”
• Phoebe must talk to Brandon, but he’s still resting, so she’s meeting with Josh.
SCENE 4
PURPOSE
“To resume the relationship between Phoebe and Josh, and to introduce Josh’s storyline
in this season.”
LOCATION
Donny’s (bar).
BEATS
• When Phoebe arrives at the bar, Josh’s waiting for her already. He says hi to his
little sister. Choice 5.1:
Hug Josh Say hi back

• +1 to $Josh • Skip next beat.

• Go to next beat.
Ask about him Ask about his wife Ask about his son
• Josh says that he’s been • Josh says that his • Phoebe asks how
overworked lately, wife’s looking little Ben is. Josh
can’t barely stop at forward to him little talks proudly about
home, but wants to Ben going to school, him, telling how he’s
travel to Europe with so she can spend starting to climb on
his family for a close more time with him the furniture and to
friend’s wedding, a in class. Josh play finger painting.
Spanish guy he met reminds Phoebe that Josh reminds Phoebe
while studying abroad. she’s still waiting for that he’s looking
her to come visit forward to meeting
them. his aunt.
• Josh asks Phoebe how things are going. Choice 5.2:
Talk about work Talk about personal life Talk about aspirations
• Phoebe talks about • This will depend on • Right now, she just
how glad she’s to how she ended up wants to finish her
resume the residency season 1. If she ended residency and get a
and meet her friends up single (or player good scholarship,
again, and how has just started with but before that she’d
exciting the two cases season 2), she will say like to spend some
she’s working on are, that right now she months traveling the
but-- wants to be 100% world. You never
• “But?”, Josh asks. focused on her work know when you’ll
“Nothing, forget it,” and doesn’t find time have free time again
she replies quickly. or interest in dating. to do that. Josh
• If she ended up with totally agrees: “You
either Mac or Seth, tell me!”
she’ll explain that she
has feelings for a
workmate, but she
needs more time to
resume their
relationship.
Everything happened
in the middle of a
very turbulent
situation, and things
need to settle down a
bit.
• After catching up, Phoebe asks straightaway why Josh really wanted to meet. Josh
admits having another reason. He asks her if she remembers what date is coming.
Choice 5.3:
“Easter?” “Spring Break?” “The harvest festival?”

• Josh must tell her: Emma’s birthday. It's the first time Phoebe forgets the date.
• Josh says their parents have asked him to bring the family together again now that
he and Phoebe are back in touch. The four could go pay respects at Emma’s grave
and then enjoy a family meal. Choice 5.4:
“I would do it, but only for “I don’t know, Josh...” “YOU MUST BE JOKING!”
Emma.” (choice 2) (choice 3)
(choice 1)
• Although of course • She hasn’t had much • Phoebe asks why

she remembers contact with them for their parents come
Emma with affection, years, almost since out of nowhere and
she no longer feels Emma died. And suddenly want to
the pain her parents when they meet, all have a happy family
still have inside. they talk about is time, when they
They seem to live Emma. She doesn’t haven’t been there in
anchored to the past, want to go again the most important
paying more through all the moments of the
attention to the dead feelings she left recent years. She just
than to the living, behind. can’t believe it.
and that hurts
Phoebe.
• Josh understands, but still asks Phoebe to reconsider it, at least for him. He will
text her again in a couple days, so she has some time to think about.
SCENE 5
PURPOSE
“To add some extra details to Brandon’s background and to show Phoebe’s determination
to help him regardless Dr. Weir’s decision.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Choice 6.1:
“Is there something “Why didn’t you say Throw the drug test results to
important I need to know?” anything about the drugs?” Brandon.
• Brandon plays dumb. • Brandon plays dumb: • Brandon pales (even

He’s convinced to “I don’t know what more). He just doesn’t
have told them you’re talking about.” know what to say.
everything relevant (Go to Choice 6.3.) Phoebe asks why he
about the case. didn’t say anything
about this, and
Brandon apologizes.
(Go to Choice 6.4.)
• Choice 6.2:
“Are you completely sure?” “Why didn’t you say Throw the drug test results to
(choice 1) anything about the drugs?” Brandon.
• Brandon knows • Brandon plays dumb: • Brandon pales (even

where she’s going “I don’t know what more). He just doesn’t
with this. Phoebe just you’re talking about.” know what to say.
must pressure a little Phoebe asks why he
more to make didn’t say anything
Brandon apologize about this, and
for not having told Brandon apologizes.
her about the drugs. (Go to Choice 6.4.)
(Go to Choice 6.4.)
• Choice 6.3:
“Are you completely sure?” Throw the drug test results to Brandon.
• Brandon knows where she’s going • Brandon pales (even more). He just
with this. Phoebe just must pressure a doesn’t know what to say. Phoebe
little more to make Brandon apologize
for not having told her about the asks why he didn’t say anything
drugs. about this, and Brandon apologizes.
• Choice 6.4:
“There must be a good “In the end, Dr. Weir was “I tried to help you!”
reason.” right.” (choice 3)
• Brandon says that • Brandon says that • Brandon just can

there’s always a she probably is. After apologize and thank
reason for making all, he’s just another her for believing there
stupid decisions. messed up artist. was something wrong
What a cliché! in him.
• Phoebe asks when did this start, and Brandon briefly explains that he began
experimenting with drugs and alcohol a long time ago, almost since he started
touring with the band. “That’s when I lost all contact with my parents,” he adds.
Choice 6.5:
Ask him about his parents Try to draw out the Avoid the topic
(premium choice 1) information (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Brandon feels he can • If $convinceBrandon • Phoebe prefers not to

trust her, so he == true, Brandon investigate family
agrees to talk about won’t tell the whole issues.
his parents. story. He just says
• Basically, they have that their parents
never accepted him have never accepted
because of his sexual him as he really is.
orientation. He had They don’t talk to
an unfortunate each other since he
incident when he was left home at 16, so
16. He was playing he’s grown up
the first concert with without a real family.
his band at the high Phoebe wonders if

school. Their parents she should pressure
came to see him. He him a little more. (Go
was so excited and to Choice 6.6.)
happy that he kissed
the guitar player (his
current partner) in • Else, Brandon will
the middle of the feel interrogated by a
show. That’s how he stranger and won’t
officially came out. talk about it.
Nobody in the
audience seemed to
care, except his
parents. They never
talked to him again.
Soon after he started
to tour with the band,
and they lost all
contact.
• Choice 6.6:
Ask him to tell more Avoid the topic

• Brandon feels he can trust her, so he • Phoebe prefers not to investigate

agrees to talk about his parents. family issues.
(Same information as before.)
• Phoebe takes a moment to consider all the information, then she says: “I trust you.”
Brandon’s surprised. Phoebe says that even though he lied about the drugs, she
has a feeling that there’s more than meets the eye. She says that she won’t give up
on him so easily.
• Brandon is reluctant to believe that. “But this is who I am,” he says. Choice 6.7:
“You’re more than that.” “You’re my patient.” “I know, I just don’t want to
(choice 1) (choice 2) agree with Dr. Weir.”
(choice 3)
• Set • Phoebe says that she • Brandon doesn’t feel

$believeInBrandon doesn't care who he is very supported by
to true. or was. He’s her Phoebe, but better
• Phoebe encourages patient now and will this than nothing.
Brandon to not do everything in her
believe that hands to help him.
everything is his
fault, something he’s
thankful for.
SCENE 6
PURPOSE
“To give meaning to the first scene of the season, where we got a glimpse of the trial that
will take place between the hospital and Brandon’s representatives. To add more weight
to Phoebe’s inner conflict.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
• Mason’s waiting outside Brandon’s room. He approaches Phoebe to tell her that
Brandon’s representatives are starting to get nervous. They’re asking how come
he entered the hospital with heaving and weakness and suddenly he’s having heart
blocks. Choice 7.1:
“Everything is under “We’re trying our best.” “Well, that’s life!”

control.” (choice 2) (choice 3)
(choice 1)
• Phoebe tries to calm • Mason doesn’t seem • Mason doesn’t like

Mason, who really convinced. He asks to this answer. Doctors
hopes she’s right. try harder and solve are supposed to
this case as soon as minimize the threats,
possible. not to give up on the
patient just because
“that’s life”. If she
really thinks like that,
she better hang up her
lab coat and go home.
Phoebe apologises.
• Mason explains that many investors and promoters are worried about the costs of
a tour cancellation. He downplays the matter for now but asks Phoebe to inform
him on anything that can help the hospital overcome a hypothetical process. Then
he leaves.
• We see Phoebe feeling more and more guilty. Mason comes back. He almost
forgets: He needs her to do more extra hours of paperwork.
SCENE 1
PURPOSE
“To show the first signs of burnout in Phoebe and to let the player make the always
exciting choice of ordering their own coffee.”
LOCATION
Hospital cafeteria.
BEATS
• Phoebe seems very tired; she didn’t sleep a wink. She approaches the waiter to
order coffee. Choice 1.1:
“Can I have a coffee, “Coffee. Now. Please.” Mumble something

please?” (choice 2) unintelligible
• The waiter asks • The waiter laughs. • Phoebe mumbles

Phoebe how she likes He can tell that something the waiter
it. (Go to Choice Phoebe had a very can’t understand.
1.3.) tough night and asks • He laughs and guesses
her how she likes the Phoebe needs some
coffee. (Go to Choice coffee, so he asks her
1.3.) how she likes it. (Go to
Choice 1.3.)
• Choice 1.2:
“Black as midnight on a “A latte will do.” “I would kill for a mocha.”

moonless night.” (choice 2) (choice 3)
(choice 1)
• “Right away, • “Right away, ma'am!” • “Right away, ma'am!”

ma'am!”
• The coffee finally wakes her up, so she gets ready for work. Although she can
choose to start with either Brandon or Ms. Herrera, eventually she’ll have to visit
both. Choice 1.3:
Start with Brandon Start with Ms. Herrera

• Set $BrandonFirst to true. • Go to Scene 3.

• Go to Scene 2.
SCENE 2
PURPOSE
“To give Phoebe/the player control over the case, so they feel they can take part in the
diagnosis. Also, to remind the player the state of Brandon’s disease, so they don’t lose the
thread of the story.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Phoebe enters Brandon’s room and finds Seth.

o If $tellTruth == true, Seth says he asked Allison for permission to help
Phoebe with the case. Go to Choice 2.1.
o Else, Phoebe asks what he’s doing there, and Seth answers that he noticed
she was hiding something. He insisted asked Allison and she told him. He
says Phoebe should have trusted them. Go to Choice 2.2.
• Choice 2.1:
“Thank you, Seth.” “Let’s get down to work “I didn’t need your help.”
(choice 1) then.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• +1 to $Seth • Go to the next beat. • -1 to $Seth

• Go to the next beat. • Go to the next beat.
• Choice 2.2:
“I’m so sorry I didn’t tell “Let’s get down to work “You can’t stand being
you.” then.” secondary, can you?”
• +1 to $Seth • Go to the next beat. • -1 to $Seth

• Seth says it’s okay. • Go to the next beat.
The most important
thing now is to cure
the patient.
• Go to the next beat.
• According to Phoebe, the main mystery here is what’s causing Brandon’s sudden
heart block. Therefore, they need to trace the chronology of the condition back to
its origins. Seth will use this opportunity to fill out Brandon’s medical report,
which isn’t complete, so he’ll basically ask her questions.
• Seth starts with the differential diagnosis. First, a heart block is basically an
abnormal heart rhythm. It can be congenital or acquired, so which one do you
think it is? Choice 2.3:
Congenital Acquired Both

• Seth disagrees with • +1 to • Seth disagrees with

Phoebe. His heart $diagnosisBrandon Phoebe. That’s simply
block has occurred • Seth agrees with impossible! Focus,
suddenly, and there’s Phoebe. His heart Phoebe, focus.
no record of a block has occurred
previous one in his suddenly, and there’s
medical history. no record of a
previous one in his
medical history.
• Right now, whether you like it or not, the most plausible reason for his arrhythmia
is the one Dr. Weir gave. Which one was it? Choice 2.4:
Drugs Nerve pain Singing

• +1 to • Seth disagrees. No, • Seth facepalms. Is that

$diagnosisBrandon nerve pain happened even possible? Come
• Seth agrees with before the heart on, Phoebe, I need you
Phoebe. That’s right. block, so either in top form!
Drug abuse, along they’re independent
with his frenetic conditions, or both
lifestyle, can lead to are symptoms of the
severe heart same disease.
conditions.
• Then we have the nerve pain attack, which occurred a couple of hours before. Seth
can’t find the prescription in the medical history, so he asks Phoebe to tell him so
he can write it down. Choice 2.5:
Antibiotics Lime blossom tea Antidepressants

• Seth doubts. He • Seth doubts. He • +1 to

supposes that most supposes that most $diagnosisBrandon
likely Dr. Weir likely Dr. Weir • Seth agrees with
prescribed some prescribed some Phoebe. Certain types
antidepressants. antidepressants. of antidepressants can
How can’t Phoebe How can’t Phoebe help with nerve pain.
remember?! remember?! Studies have even
shown that using them
along with
anticonvulsants may
have bigger benefits
than using them alone.
• And what was the conclusion they reached for this condition? Choice 2.6:
Meniere’s disease Migraines Chronic fatigue syndrome

• Seth doesn’t think so. • Seth doesn’t think so. • +1 to

He checks the He checks the $diagnosisBrandon
medical history and medical history and • Makes much sense. It
finds the diagnosis: finds the diagnosis: also has to do with
chronic fatigue chronic fatigue Brandon’s fast-paced
syndrome. syndrome. lifestyle and might
have been aggravated
by the stress of the last
months.
• So, Seth sums up, both the heart block and the nerve pain can be seen as symptoms
from the same condition: a cocktail made with drugs, alcohol, chronic fatigue,
stress, and a frenetic lifestyle that Brandon has been leading for the last seven
years. At least that’s what they can conclude for now.
o If $diagnosisBrandon ≤ 1, Seth apologises, but he’s stuck in there. He can’t
see a new path to follow. Phoebe thanks him for the assistance, and says
she’ll let him know if something comes to mind. (Go to next beat.)
o If $diagnosisBrandon ≥ 2, Phoebe suggests that they have something more
to look at: The actual reason why Brandon came to the hospital in the first
place. He came with fainting episodes, imbalance, fatigue, headaches... but
what was the first diagnosis? Choice 2.7:
Any clues? Lightheadedness Insomnia Ear infection

(premium choice 1) (choice 2) (choice 3) (choice 4)
• Seth reminds • (Go to Choice • (Go to • Set

Phoebe that, 2.6.) Choice 2.6.) $earInfection
according to to true
the report, • (Go to
Dr. Weir Choice 2.6.)
performed a
caloric
stimulation
test, which
consists of
introducing
water at
different
temperatures
in the ear of
the patient.
(Reload
Choice 2.7
but with
Premium
option
locked.)
• Seth asks Phoebe if she’s sure about this. Choice 2.8:
“Yes, I’m sure.” “No, let me think about it again.”

• If $earInfection == true, set • If $earInfection == true, set

$rightAnswer1 to true. $earInfection to false.
• Seth writes down the diagnosis. • Go back to Choice 2.5.
o If $rightAnswer1 == true, Seth wonders if the ear infection isn’t just

another side effect of the chronic fatigue. What if the cause is different?
Phoebe says he’s right, so they should start ordering more tests before
Brandon is discharged. They’re happy to have worked as a team again and
high five.
o Else, Seth apologises, but he’s stuck in there. He can’t see a new path to
follow. Phoebe thanks him for the assistance, and says she’ll let him know
if something comes to mind.
• Either way, move on to the next beat.
o If $BrandonFirst == false, Seth asks Phoebe to join him and Mac at the
cafe for lunch. (Go to Scene 4.)
o Else (If $BrandonFirst == true), Phoebe thinks that she should now go
and check on Ms. Herrera. (Go to Scene 3.)
SCENE 3
PURPOSE
“To reveal the main conflict of Ms. Herrera’s storyline.”
LOCATION
BEATS
• Phoebe enters Ms. Herrera’s room and finds Mac. He seems worried and shows
Phoebe the insurance policy of Ms. Herrera. Judging by it, she doesn’t seem to
have an insurance that covers her disease. Mac asks what they should do. Choice
3.1:
Ask Ms. Herrera Tell Mason Call the insurance company

• +1 to $Mac • Mac wonders if • Mac wonders if that’s

• Mac thinks the same. that’s necessary. necessary. Wouldn’t it
There’s no need to Wouldn’t it be better be better if they talk to
draw hasty if they talk to her her first? Phoebe
conclusions. first? Phoebe agrees. agrees.
• Mac and Phoebe approach Ms. Herrera, who says hi politely, as usual. Mac
whispers Phoebe that they should have tact asking. Choice 3.2:
“Your insurance won’t cover “Are you an “For how long have you had
the surgery.” undocumented?” this insurance?”
• -1 to $Mac • -1 to $Mac • +1 to $Mac

• Ms. Herrera regrets • Surprisingly, Ms. • Ms. Herrera answers
hearing that and asks Herrera doesn’t take that since she started
if something’s wrong offence. She just working as a professor,
laughs.
with the insurance “Unfortunately, more than 30 years

company. you’re not the first ago.
doctor asking me that
question”. She
confirms that she’s
not an
undocumented,
having worked for
the last 35 years.
• Phoebe then explains that the insurance she hired doesn’t cover chronic diseases
like hers, meaning that they can’t perform the kind of surgery she needs.
• Mac intervenes to explain that there are 5 stages of chronic kidney disease, the 1st
one meaning that she can live a normal life, and the 5th meaning that the kidneys
have failed and either dialysis or a transplant are urgently needed.
• Ms. Herrera asks which stage is hers.
• Mac answers: “4”.
• Ms. Herrera seems devastated. She claims she didn’t know anything about this,
but Phoebe suspects. Choice 3.3:
Ask about her past “You can trust me, Say nothing “I’m sorry, but I
(premium choice 1) Ms. Herrera.” (choice 3) don’t fall for that.”
• Ms. Herrera • If • Mac asks if • -1 to Mac

gives a deep $MsHerreraT that’s what it • Ms. Herrera
sigh and rust == true, is, if there’s replies that
agrees to tell Ms. Herrera nothing they she’s very
the whole gives a deep can do. sorry, but
story. sigh and • Phoebe that’s the
agrees to tell replies that, truth. There
the whole for now, she’s must be
story. run out of something
• Else, Ms. ideas. wrong with
Herrera • Ms. Herrera the insurance
replies that says she’s company.
she’s very very sorry,
sorry, but but that’s the • Phoebe

there’s truth. There regrets
nothing else must be having been
to tell. There something so
must be wrong with bigmouth...
something the insurance (Go to
wrong with company. Choice 3.4.)
the insurance
company.
• Choice 3.4:
Ask about her past “You can trust me, Ms. Say nothing
(premium choice 1) Herrera.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Ms. Herrera gives a • If $MsHerreraTrust • Mac asks if that’s what

deep sigh and agrees == true, Ms. Herrera it is, if there’s nothing
to tell the whole gives a deep sigh and they can do.
story. agrees to tell the • Phoebe replies that,
whole story. for now, she’s run out
• Else, Ms. Herrera of ideas.
says she’s very sorry, • Ms. Herrera says she’s
but there’s nothing very sorry, but that’s
else to tell. There the truth. There must
must be something be something wrong
wrong with the with the insurance
insurance company. company.
• Ms. Herrera was diagnosed with her illness while still living in Mexico. She hid
that information when she got to Snuggford; no insurer would have accepted her
as a client. She apologises for having concealed the truth, but she was very afraid
of being dropped or referred to a safety net provider, where most likely she
wouldn’t be treated either.
• Mac and Phoebe promise they’ll do everything possible to help her.
• Mac asks Phoebe to hide this information from Mason, for now. Choice 3.5:
“Count on me.” “I can’t promise you “We must inform Mason.”

(choice 1) anything.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• +1 to $Mac • Mac understands, • -1 to $Mac

• Mac thanks Phoebe. but he hopes she • Mac disagrees. She
makes the right can do whatever she
choice. wants, but he’s not
going to tell him.
o If $BrandonFirst == true, Mac asks Phoebe to join him and Seth at the
cafe for lunch. (Go to Scene 4.)
o If $BrandonFirst == false, Phoebe thinks she should now go and check on
Brandon. (Go to Scene 2.)
SCENE 4
PURPOSE
“To give the player the choice to trust in Mac and Seth and make them feel part of the
main storyline.”
LOCATION
Hospital cafeteria.
BEATS
• The team is enjoying their meal at the cafeteria. All except for Phoebe. She seems
so distracted and hasn’t had a bite. Mac throws some food at Phoebe to get her
out of this self-absorption. They ask what’s she thinking about so deeply. Choice
5.1:
Josh Ms. Herrera Pizza

• She talks about Josh • She says that she • She says how bad she
and what he asked can’t stop thinking misses her favourite
her for. about Ms. Herrera’s pizza in Snuggford.
issue with the
insurance company.
• Seth asks her to cut the crap. He’s had enough of her pretending everything’s fine.
If Phoebe doesn’t feel part of the team anymore, she better have lunch at a
different table. Choice 5.2:
“You’re right.” “It’s not that easy.” “Fine.” [Leave]

• +1 to $Seth • Things aren’t always • -1 to $Seth

• +1 to $Mac black or white. You • -1 to $Mac
• Phoebe apologizes need time to • Phoebe just wakes up
and agrees to tell the understand your and leaves without
story in detail. Again, feelings and make the saying a thing. (Go to
we should use a right choice. Not Scene 6.)
visual ellipsis here. everyone is so
(Go to next beat.) rational as Seth.
• Seth takes it
personally, wakes up
and leaves.
• Mac wonders if she
wasn’t too harsh.
• Phoebe regrets
having said that and
tells Mac that she
needs some time
alone. Then she
leaves too. (Go to
Scene 6.)
• After a moment of silent, Seth slams the table: “Bullshit!” Everyone’s stunned.
He’s so out of character right now. He exclaims that Phoebe didn’t do anything
wrong. That doctor is trying to cover up her mistake by making things worse
instead of taking a step back.
• Phoebe understands it, but she says Dr. Weir isn’t going to take a step back ever.
She’s too proud for that.
• Mac adds something. He understands that it’s a tough situation, but there’s only
one thing she must think about: Evidence. She gets the evidence, she wins.
There’s no other way.
• Phoebe thanks them, visibly touched. But now she needs some time alone to think
about the situation. She leaves, thanking them again for their help. (Go to Scene
6.)
SCENE 6
PURPOSE
“To give the player the chance to find out some extra details about Dr. Weir’s personal
background.”
LOCATION
Locker room.
BEATS
• Phoebe’s having a moment for herself. Some deep staring at the mirror can work.
She then notices Dr. Weir’s locker is ajar. Choice 6.1:
Lock the locker room Sneak a peek Ignore it

(premium choice 1) (choice 2) (choice 3)
• Phoebe locks the • Just before Phoebe • Dr. Weir enters the
locker room first and can look, Dr. Weir locker room. She gets
then sneaks a peek enters, catching her a little startled, she
inside Dr. Weir’s by surprise. didn’t hear anyone
locker. • If $DrWeir ≥ 10, she inside. Phoebe says
• Inside she finds a accepts Phoebe’s she was about to get
boat of Olmifon
(adrafinil) and a apologies. (Go to back to work. (Go to

picture in the locker Choice 6.2.) Choice 6.2.)
door with Dr. Weir • Else, she doesn’t
hugging two girls, accept her apologies,
presumably her and Phoebe rushes
daughters. There was out embarrassed.
a fourth person in the
photo, but it has been
torn off.
• Someone knocks at
the door. Phoebe
puts everything back
inside and opens the
door. It’s Dr. Weir.
• She asks why the
door was locked, and
Phoebe makes up
something silly. (Go
to Choice 6.2.)
• Dr. Weir tries to address Brandon’s case. She says she understands that Phoebe
might not agree on her methods, and she doesn’t even have to, but eventually,
she’ll find out that being a doctor is much harder than it seems. It demands
sacrifices that not everyone is willing to make. She asks what she would sacrifice
to become a real doctor. Choice 6.2:
“Not a patient.” “Everything.” “I don’t have to sacrifice

(choice 1) (choice 2) anything.”
(choice 3)
• Phoebe leaves the • “Then prove it,” Dr. • Phoebe leaves the
locker room in Weir says. locker room in silence.
silence. • Phoebe leaves the • “We’ll see...”, Dr.
locker room in Weir says.
silence.

SCENE 1
PURPOSE
“To show another level of burnout in Phoebe and if there’s any advance in Brandon’s
case.”
LOCATION
Laboratory.
BEATS
• Black screen. Someone’s calling Phoebe. Choice 5.1:
“Mac...?” “Seth...?” “Just five more minutes,

(choice 1) (choice 2) mom...”
• -1 to $Seth • +1 to $Seth • Go to next beat.

• Go to next beat. • Go to next beat.
• They call her again, this time louder. Phoebe wakes up suddenly, disoriented. It
was Seth who was calling her.
• He asks Phoebe if she spent the night at the lab. She couldn’t sleep and spent the
night running tests for Brandon, but... no satisfactory results so far. Seth offers to
invite Phoebe to a coffee, but she needs to check on Brandon first. Choice 5.2:
“Hell yes!” “I need to check on Brandon “I don’t have time to laze

(choice 1) first.” around!”
• +1 to $Seth • Seth says sure, duty • -1 to $Seth

• Phoebe would love to comes first, and • Seth indicates that it’s
go right now but invites her to come barely 7am, but
needs to check on later for a good cup whatever. She needs to
Brandon first. of coffee. slow down a little bit
• Seth understands, on this case.
and with a smile tells • Phoebe apologizes and
her to come later to says she’ll be there in a
enjoy a good cup of minute.
coffee.
SCENE 2
PURPOSE
“A breakdown between Phoebe and Dr. Weir.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Phoebe comes in. Dr. Weir’s also there. Phoebe starts saying that she has the latest
test results but-- Dr. Weir interrupts. It’s too late. The patient will be discharged
this morning! Choice 2.1:
“I understand, but...” “You promised me two “YOU CAN’T BE

(choice 1) days!” SERIOUS!”
• Dr. Weir says she’s • Dr. Weir says this is • -1 to $DrWeir

sorry, and praises how hospitals work.
Phoebe’s efforts, but Other patients have • Dr. Weir says she’s
the patient is ready to the same right to be very serious and
leave. looked after. having enough of her
broadsides. She better
start respecting
orders.
• Phoebe EXPLODES. She’s been running tests all night for nothing! Allison comes
in, asking what’s going on. She asks Phoebe to calm down immediately. Choice
2.2:
Accuse Dr. Weir Breathe deeply Ask Allison to side with her
• -1 to $Allison • +1 to $Allison • Allison says this is not

• Set $accuseDrWeir • Phoebe takes a deep how things are tackled
to true breath and calms at Little Creek
• Phoebe just can’t down. Allison’s glad Hospital. This is not a
bite her tongue. She to see this and asks two-front war.
accuses Dr. Weir of Phoebe to please take They’re all part of the
negligence. She’s the day off. same team. She orders
been trying cover up Phoebe to take the day
her mistakes by off.
making things worse
instead of taking a
step back. She’s too
proud to accept that
and the patient’s
paying the
consequences.
• Allison orders her to
take the day off and
tells her to expect a
disciplinary enquiry.
• Choice 2.3:
“I’m sorry. This is not me.” Say nothing and leave “Well thank you for your
(choice 1) (choice 2) support.”
(choice 3)
• Allison sighs. “I • Go to next scene. • Allison is sorry that

know, but... Just go she still doesn’t get it
home, okay? We’ll and asks her to go
talk later.” home.
SCENE 3
PURPOSE
“A breakdown between Mac and Seth.”
LOCATION
Hospital cafeteria.
BEATS
• The waiter says hi to Phoebe, noticing she’s having a bad day, and asks what he
can serve. Choice 3.1:
“Give me your best coffee.” “Lime tea. Extra strong.” “Something that knocks me
(choice 1) (choice 2) down.”
(choice 3)
• “Right away, • “Right away, • The waiter laughs and

ma’am!” ma’am!” says they don’t serve
alcohol at the hospital.
• Phoebe just orders a
coffee instead.
• Back to the table, she joins Seth and Mac. The conversation indicates that Phoebe
has already told them what happened. To cheer her up, and since it’s Friday, Mac
suggests going out tonight. Choice 3.2:
“I don’t know, Mac...” “I’d rather shut myself up “Worst. Idea. Ever.”
(choice 1) and eat chocolate ice cream.” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Mac tries to persuade • Mac admits that plan • Mac asks Seth for
her. She has the day doesn’t sound too help.
off after all! bad, but it’s their • Seth admits she’s
duty as friends to not right.
let her fall into a • Mac doesn’t care.
spiral of self- They will go out
destruction. tonight whether they
like it or not.
• Phoebe can’t help laughing a little. Mac comforts her, stating that at least she has
them. Phoebe thanks them for their support.
• Mason interrupts the conversation. He says to be aware of everything related to
Ms. Herrera’s case, that her insurance company won’t cover her chronic kidney
disease. He doesn’t know how come she hid that condition to the insurer, but he
asks them to do what they must and drop her, as hard as it sounds. Choice 3.3:
“But we can’t do that.” “Can’t you give us more “I guess it’s the only solution.”
(choice 1) time?” (choice 3)
(choice 2)
• Mason replies that • Mason asks, more • Mason’s glad to see

not only they can but time for what. It’s not Phoebe’s listening to
must do it. a question of time, reason.
but responsibility.
• However, Mac’s opposed to drop Ms. Herrera, stating that they’re doctors, not
accountants. Their duty is to proceed despite the expenses. Not only is it a
question of ethics, but as doctors, they owe to the patients. Always.
• Surprisingly for Mac, Seth disagrees with him this time. Seth believes they should
refer her to a safety net provider, such as a public clinic.
• Mac can’t believe it! He asks, how can he talk like that about an old woman,
wondering if he’d like her to be treated that way if she was a relative.
• “Who’s going to cover the expenses of the surgery. You?”, Seth asks. They can’t
act outside the law.
• Mason’s glad to see someone learnt something during his speech the other day.
• Mac stands up and gets out. Choice 3.4:
Go after Mac Stay with Seth

• -2 to $Seth • -2 to $Mac
• Go to Scene 4. • Seth apologizes for being so
straightforward, but he believes it’s
the best way to survive in this career.
(Go to Choice 3.5.)
• Choice 3.5:
“You’re right.” “We can’t let this divide us.” “How can you still be so
(choice 1) (choice 2) cold?”
(choice 3)
• +1 to $Seth • Seth agrees to talk to • -1 to $Seth

• “Part of me wants to Mac later.
be like you,” she
adds.
• Phoebe thinks she should now go and talk to Brandon for the last time before he
leaves the hospital. (Go to Scene 5.)
SCENE 4
PURPOSE
“Just a short scene following the previous one if Phoebe/the player chooses to go after
Mac.”
LOCATION
Hospital hallway.
BEATS
• Phoebe reaches Mac at the hallway, and he apologizes for overreacting. Here we
can hint at Mac’s mother problems in the first season, when she had a strange
condition that needed an expensive treatment. He knows better than no one that
money is the dividing line between healthy and poor. Choice 4.1:
“I know what you're going “We can’t let this divide us.” “You can’t let emotions
through”. (choice 2) control you always.”
• +1 to $Mac • Mac agrees to talk to • -1 to $Mac

• Phoebe reminds him Seth later. • Phoebe says doctors
that she saw how they need to be colder.
live, and how bad is Otherwise, he’ll be
the situation with his always bearing other
mother, so she people’s burdens, and
understands better he won’t survive this
than anyone. career.
• Phoebe thinks she should now go and talk to Brandon for the last time before he
leaves the hospital.
SCENE 5
PURPOSE
“To strengthen the friendship between Brandon and Phoebe.”
LOCATION
Brandon’s room.
BEATS
• Brandon is about to leave the hospital. Phoebe talks to him to apologize for what
happened before, but he plays it down and thanks her for all her concerns as usual.
Choice 5.1:
“What are you planning to “Did Dr. Weir say “Are you sure you feel okay?”
do now?” something?” (choice 3)
• Brandon explains • Brandon says that • He jokes about the

that they won’t she doesn’t talk artist way of life and
cancel tonight’s much. He likes her as knowing he won’t live
show. There’s no a doctor, but long anyway. He’s 27
time for rehearsals, honestly, he prefers now, so he’ll be glad if
but he’s ready to kick Phoebe. She’s so he survives the 27
ass at the Snuggford optimistic and Club.
Arena. devoted, that she
reminds him of:
• If the player unlocked
premium choice 6.5
from Episode 3,
Brandon says she
reminds him of his
partner, Joel.
• If the player didn’t
unlock this option, he
just says she reminds
him of someone very
important.
• Before leaving, Brandon gives Phoebe two tickets for his band’s show, saying he
would love her to come. Choice 5.2:
“Actually, I have the day off.” “I have too much paperwork “You can’t be serious about
(choice 1) to deal with.” playing!”
• Brandon’s glad to • Brandon asks, didn’t • Phoebe says playing

hear that. He will try Allison give her the tonight is very risky.
to sneak her into the day off? Phoebe has He’s just been
VIP area! no excuses... discharged! Brandon
says it’s fine, they’ll
play a shorter setlist,
and they have agreed
to stop the show at the
first sign of trouble.
• Brandon’s agents are here to pick him up. He says goodbye and leaves.
SCENE 6
PURPOSE
“To give the player the chance to invite Mac or Seth to the show.”
LOCATION
Phoebe’s apartment.
BEATS
• Later that day, Phoebe is lying in bed. She’s lost in her thoughts when she notices
the two tickets. She grabs them and then takes her phone. Choice 6.1:
Text Seth Text Mac Go alone

• Set $inviteSeth to • Set $inviteMac to • Go to next beat.

true true
• Phoebe texts Seth to • Phoebe texts Mac to
invite him to the invite him to the
show. He show. He
immediately texts immediately texts

back to confirm. back to confirm.
• She stands up and walks to the wardrobe. The player can now choose an outfit for
the show. Choice 6.2:
Night outfit Casual outfit 1 Casual outfit 2

• A nice night outfit, • (Go to Scene 7.) • (Go to Scene 7.)

maybe some dark
short dress,
something cool for a
party.
• (Go to Scene 7.)
SCENE 7
PURPOSE
“To give the player a chance to make out with Mac or Seth and to end the midseason with
a cliffhanger.”
LOCATION
Snuggford Arena (concert hall).
BEATS
• Phoebe arrives at the arena. The place is crowded, tons of people yelling.
• If $inviteSeth == true, Seth shows up.
o If Phoebe is wearing the night outfit, Seth flatters her appearance. Go to
Choice 7.1.
o Else, he just thanks her for inviting him.
• If $inviteMac == true, Mac shows up.
o If Phoebe is wearing the night outfit, Mac flatters her appearance. Go to

Choice 7.2.
o Else, he just thanks her for inviting him.
• If $inviteSeth && $inviteMac == false, Phoebe arrives alone and makes some
comment about how crowded the place is (or whatever people say when they go
alone to concerts.)
• Choice 7.1:
“Thank you! You’re very “Thank you! You look great “This? It’s the first thing I
gentle.” too.” found in the closet.”
• +1 to $Seth • +1 to $Seth • +1 to $Seth

• Choice 7.2:
“Thank you! You’re very “Thank you! You look great “This? It’s the first thing I
gentle.” too.” found in the closet.”
• +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Mac

• The show begins. Brandon’s band starts playing. The crowd yells with the sound
of the first chords. Things run smoothly. Phoebe starts dancing to the thunderous
music.
• If $inviteSeth == true, both start to cuddle.
o If Phoebe is wearing the night outfit, go to Choice 7.3.
o Else,
▪ If $Seth ≥ 31, go to Choice 7.3.
▪ Else, go to Choice 7.4.
• If $inviteMac == true, both start to cuddle.
o If Phoebe is wearing the night outfit, go to Choice 7.5.
o Else,
▪ If $Mac ≥ 31, go to Choice 7.5.
▪ Else, go to Choice 7.6.

• If $inviteSeth && $inviteMac == false, go to next beat.
• Choice 7.3:
Kiss Seth Hug Seth High five Seth

• +3 to $Seth • +1 to $Seth • -1 to $Seth
• Choice 7.4:
Hug Seth High five Seth

• +1 to $Seth • -1 to $Seth
• Choice 7.5:
Kiss Mac Hug Mac High five Mac

• +3 to $Mac • +1 to $Mac • -1 to $Mac
• Choice 7.6:
Hug Mac High five Mac

• +1 to $Mac • -1 to $Mac
• The night is perfect. Brandon seems to be going all-out. He starts climbing one of
the scaffolds supporting the lighting truss. He’s like three meters above the
crowd.
• Something goes wrong. Brandon isn’t singing. He looks weak, shivery, and
disoriented. He falls off the scaffold with the sound of thousands of people
screaming.

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Heart’s Medicine: New Blood’s season 2 Narrative Design

Carlos Ramírez Moreno (2019)

THE NARRATIVE DESIGN WORK FOR ALL MY ORIGINAL STORIES

“Against All Odds.”

“Sometimes the hardest thing to do is the right one.”

Medical Drama, Romance, Soap Opera.

1.4. SERIES LEARNING/MESSAGE

1.6. SEASON OVERVIEW

Three weeks earlier...

1.7. SEASON CONFLICT

1.8. POSSIBLE SEASON OUTCOMES

1.9. MAIN CHARACTERS

PHOEBE (PLAYER CHARACTER)

1. Become the best physician.

Name Phoebe Rise

Personality Brilliant, energetic, ambitious and a bit reckless.

Look (Default) Blonde, red blouse and jeans.

Traits Crafty, strong.

Flaws Can be a bit straightforward sometimes.

MALCOLM (MAC) (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)

RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER

RELATIONSHIP WITH NON-PLAYER CHARACTERS

Character name: Seth.

Name Malcolm “Mac” Burton

Personality Warm, caring, friendly and impulsive. Sometimes he is too

Backstory Mac’s family is not particularly wealthy. His father

Look (Default) Tall, bulky, brown, and short hair.

Traits Strong, charming.

SETH (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)

RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER

RELATIONSHIP WITH NON-PLAYER CHARACTERS

Character name: Mac.

Name Seth Chambers

Look (Default) Slim, wears glasses, blonde hair.

Traits Smart, good at almost everything he does.

DR. WEIR (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)

RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER

Name Samantha Weir

Age Late forties

Samantha is overworked. She is very close to a burn-out and doesn't want

MS. HERRERA (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)

RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER

• At the beginning: Doctor-patient relationship. Nothing special.

Name Laura Herrera

Age Late sixties

Personality Reasonable, serious. She’s a well-read person who sometimes takes

Backstory Ms. Herrera studied Literature at the National Autonomous University

Ethnicity Latin American

Traits Educated, passionate about literature.

BRANDON (NON-PLAYER CHARACTER)

RELATIONSHIP WITH PLAYER CHARACTER

• At the beginning: Doctor-patient relationship. Nothing special.

Name Brandon Buchanan

Backstory Brandon was a whiz kid. Grown up in a family of musicians, he learned

Traits Singer, musician, artist.

• Laboratory. An alarm clock rings. Phoebe wakes up suddenly, disoriented. Seth

EPISODE 1 NARRATIVE DESIGN

EPISODE BRANCHING TREE

• Black screen. Phoebe: “It's time...” Sound of doors opening.

Hug Mac first Hug Seth first Hug both

• +1 to $Mac • +1 to $Seth • +1 to $Mac

• Phoebe hugs Seth hasn’t heard from her Phoebe apologises;

Kiss Mac Hug Mac

o 3) If Phoebe and Seth ended up the first season together, he shows up

Kiss Seth Hug Seth

• +1 to $DrWeir • Brandon, confused, • -1 to $DrWeir

Heart's Medicine: New Blood (Season 2) Narrative Design Document

Heart's Medicine: New Blood (Season 2) Narrative Design Document