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Course of Study:
(ATS1298) Professional Writing
Title of work:
Media writing; a practical introduction, Second edition. (2016)
Section:
Writing for magazines pp. 86--115
Author/editor of work:
Batty, Craig; Cain, Sandra
Author of section:
Craig Batty, Sandra Cain
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Palgrave
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A Practical Introduction
Second edition
Craig Batty
and
Sandra Cain
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Writing for Magazines
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stitched pages' (Davis, 1995: 3). There is a huge diversity today in
the range of magazines published around the world, especially since
online 'publishing' (including blogging or self-publishing) means
that anyone who can 'write' can find a space (even if it is virtual)
to share their news, views and interests. We find magazines catering
for every conceivable topic, from Zionism to zoology. The magazine
industry is constantly evolving: new titles spring up in response to
new trends; old titles get shelved or merged; and new technology
makes production cheaper, resulting in an expansion of titles, styles
and formats.
A 2014 UK survey on digital magazine readership carried out
by YouGov found that the expansion of the tablet (iPad, Android)
market had resulted in an increase in digital reading. The survey
found that the desirability of digital texts was based on their inter-
active and social natures. Much of the value from magazines - for
example, timely, directed editorial - is moving to web media,
including blogs and special interest sites. The issues of personali-
zation, socialization and recommendation have a consequence for
the practice of writing for digital magazines or e-zines. To write
the media now requires the writer to conceptualize in dimensions
other than pure text and the written word. Interactivity and multi-
media are now key concepts for any writer to add to their literary
palette.
By the end of this chapter you will have a better understanding of:
· Take two magazines, one trade and one consumer, ,md liSthowmany
djfferent types of feature {investigative, interview, .descriptive, service,
other) there. are. Note anything unusual or innovative about tt,em.
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interested in predictable, rehashed, stale ideas. All feature writers
should carry something around with them for jotting down those all-
important ideas. Interestingly, writers will often find that their ideas
reflect their interests, which is useful for freelancers wishing to write
for niche magazines. Many publications hold 'think tanks' where
staff writers are encouraged to brainstorm ideas, find links and add
value to stories. However, freelance writers will be dependent upon
themselves for ideas.
A common dilemma for the writer may be: should I get an idea
first and then find the market? Or should I find the market first and
then get an idea? Whereas many new writers tend to get an idea first,
more experienced ones should be able to source and research infor-
mation for any publication on demand. Staff writers should source
ideas from the news and features that their readers are currently
interested in. No matter what the experience of the writer may be,
it is always essential to keep up to date with current affairs, read the
news, watch television, listen to the radio, surf the internet, note
conversations, observe events, read reference books and use libraries.
The world is full of ideas, and writers should keep their eyes and ears
open. Dick offers the following advice for germinating ideas:
It's just a matter of being on automatic alert: noting all that hap-
pens, thinking backwards - and forwards, seeing and hearing
through new eyes and ears. What gladdens or saddens, interests
or reassures, consoles or explains, intrigues or inspires? To help
germination take place ask yourself searching questions: why?
who? what? where? when? and how? Twist the questions round
too: why didn't? when did? what if? (1996: 16)
• Begin with a lead that hooks the reader in, and keeps them.
• Choose the right word, but remember that precision takes time
and effort.
• Be simple and concise; simplicity is the key to all effective
messages.
• Use the familiar word rather than the unfamiliar, and avoid jar-
gon unless absolutely necessary.
• Use the concrete rather than the abstract, and create involvement
rather than theorizing. Be specific as well as general; give facts as
well as figures.
• Avoid using cliches. They are lazy journalism, and usually consist
of overworked metaphors.
• Be honest and positive but beware of giving a story more atten-
tion than it deserves by exaggerating events. Equally, avoid get-
ting bogged dow,n in euphemisms and political correctness.
• Write as you speak. Avoid pomposity, preachiness and ostentation .
• Vary the pace and rhythm by writing sentences of varying
lengths. This prevents monotony and reader boredom.
• Avoid unnecessary adjectives and adverbs - they are often the
first to be blue pencilled out by editors, and are the mark of an
amateur writer.
Storyline (theme)
This is the 'big idea', the driving force of the article. It should allude to
what the writer wants to say.
Lead
This is the opening paragraph, and should include the 'hook' to draw
the reader in effectively.
Main point 1
This is the most important subject of this article. It should explore
what is involved, by whom, where and when, along with questions of
how and why.
Sub-point(s)
Facts, figures, quotations, interviews, anecdotes and any other support-
ing evidence to back up the main point.
Main point 2
This evolves from main point 1. It is of secondary importance, yet
crucially develops the article's narrative. It may bring into question an
ancillary topic or subject (person).
Sub-point(s)
Facts, figures, quotations, interviews, anecdotes and any other support-
ing evidence to back up the main point.
Main point 3
This evolves from main point 2. It is of even less importance, yet
develops the article's narrative in a further direction. It may bring into
question yet another ancillary topic or subject (person).
Sub-point(s)
Facts, figures, quotations, interviews, anecdotes and any other support-
ing evidence to back up the main point.
The rules for the outline are not set in stone. They can be varied to
avoid conformity and add vigour, but any deviation must still lead
to an organized and flowing narrative. The article must sound as if it
grew organically, not a cobbled together set of points, views or instruc-
tions. Hamilton suggests that 'growth occurs naturally, without inter-
ruption: each element stems from the element preceding' (2005: 109).
Writers can achieve this by linking paragraphs with transitions, those
words and phrases that alert the reader to a linkage. Examples include
'meanwhile', 'at the same time', 'in addition', 'also', 'but', 'firstly', 'sec-
ondly', 'finally', 'however', 'consequently' and 'subsequently'. These
transitory words allow the article to read as a succession of related
thoughts packaged into paragraphs, each paragraph expressing and
expanding on a single thought: 'the transitions from one thought to
another, one [paragraph] to another, signal shifts in time, space, place,
speakers and action, making the story understandable because the
connections among the [paragraphs] are clear' (Hamilton, 2005: 111).
Using the same article, highlight all the transitional words and phrases
linking points and paragraphs. How successful do you think these
transitions are?
There are many different types of lead to choose from, but writers must
select the one most appropriate to their story and its purpose. They
should put themselves in their readers' shoes and consider which type
of lead they will most appreciate, and which type of lead is most appro-
priate for the story's theme and tone. Common types of lead include:
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Unlike news stories, which can just stop, feature articles usually have
a definite ending. It is useful to consider the idea of a circular nar-
rative, where the article can begin and end with the same idea or
indeed the same question - what has moved on is the reader's under-
standing of the subject. As such, the ending can be just as important
as the lead. As Hamilton tells us, 'the ending serves a definite pur-
pose. It closes the story loop, tying up all the loose ends and leaving
the reader emotionally satisfied' (2005: 124).
When considering the practicalities of writing the ending, Bugeja
(1998: 149) suggests that the following basic requirements should be
considered:
For the articles previously selected, identify the types of ending used.
Rewrite these endings using a different type and evaluate their effectiveness.
Choose a topic that interests you and write a one thousand-word
feature article. Craft a suitable lead, body and ending .
Writer:
Why do you recommend books by Sandra Cain and Craig Batty?
Interviewee:
Because they are interesting and well written.
Writer:
You say they are interesting and well written . . . in what way do you
think this will be helpful to students wishing to study media writing?
There are three types of question that the writer of feature interviews
should avoid. These are:
Conversely, the narrative interview reads far more like a story and
uses some of the techniques of traditional storytelling. No words
should be wasted and each word used should move the story along,
interspersed with quotations and interesting insights on the subject.
These insights may be the result of the environment, the subjects
themselves, their body language, dress or behaviour. When writing
up the narrative interview, the writer does not need to tag every
question with 'I asked' or 'he said', or even place his or her own ques-
tions in speech marks.
When the same editors were asked what they thought made a good
freelance feature writer, their common responses were:
• Ideas.
• Well-researched articles.
• The ability to write well and deliver on time.
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• How does it compare with other works by this creator/producer/
director? What about with contemporaries' work? What about
work of a similar kind in the past?
• How far does the creator succeed in achieving what he or she set
out to do?
• How well has the work been served by the interpreters involved:
actors, directors, set designers, musicians and so on?
• If known - how did the audience react to the work?
• Decide who your readers are and find your focus. Hone in on
your niche category and become the 'expert'.
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• What sets bloggers apart from regular magazine writers is their
'voice'. Content should draw the reader in, but the writer's 'voice'
should encourage them to carry on reading. Be relatable and be
yourself.
• Use links to other websites and blogs. This will increase your
clicks and the blog's search engine ranking.
• Include images to make your posts visually appealing.
• Break up the text to make it less daunting.
• Be ethical.
• Respond to blog comments. This is your opportunity to connect
directly with your readers.
• Keep your posts positive and upbeat, your paragraphs short, and
avoid grammatical mistakes and typos. Your blog posts should
be as professionally written and presented as any other form of
media writing.
• Check your facts.
• Edit, edit, edit!
• Update your blog regularly and consistently. Post it to social
media sites such as Facebook, Twitter, Google+, and anywhere
else you can.
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and the National Council for the Training of Journalists (NCTJ). The
NCTJ also runs distance-learning courses, including Writing for the
Periodical Press, which gives a basic understanding of the magazine
industry. Currently, Australian magazine writers have no profes-
sional accreditation and no common enforceable standards by which
to monitor and protect their interests. However, most belong to
the Media, Entertainment & Arts Alliance and stand by its Code of
Ethics. Magazine writers in the United States tend to belong to the
Public Relations Society of America. Advice on careers and courses
can be sought from the US Press Association.
Whatever your entry route to magazine writing, be proactive and
persistent. Consider unpaid work internships, as the key to a staff
post is practical experience. Other ways to gain experience and build
up a portfolio of published work include contacting editors directly
with ideas for relevant articles, writing reviews for film, plays, books
and products, working as a correspondent on a local paper, writing
for a student magazine or newspaper, or volunteering to work on the
newsletter of a not-for-profit organization.
Web resources
www.awmonline.com.au
The Australian Writer's Marketplace.
www.blogger.com
A free blog tool from Google.
www.nctj.com
Official website for the National Council for the Training of journalists.
www.nuj.org.uk
Official website for the National Union of journalists.
www.nujtraining.org.uk
Official website for the National Union of journalists (Training).
www.ppa.co.uk
A magazine-specific resource for journalists.
www.wordpress.org
A website where biogs and other types of 'citizen' spaces can be set up and hosted.
www.writermag.com
Website for US magazine, The Writer.
www.writers-online.co.uk
Website for UK publication, Writing Magazine.