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Name: _________________________________

WRITING PRESENTATION: GROUP 3 - 11A4.2

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY - HANDOUT

Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when
they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?

(1) The notion of charging foreign visitors more than local residents when they visit
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cultural and historical sites in a country has been a subject of debate. (2) While some
- Hook:
argue that this approach is justified, I firmly disagree with the idea of implementing such a
pricing policy, as it may lead to negative consequences for both the tourism industry and
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the international perception of a country.

(3) One primary reason for my disagreement lies in the potential harm that differential
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pricing may cause to the tourism sector. (4) By imposing higher fees on foreign tourists, a
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country might inadvertently discourage potential visitors from exploring its cultural and
historical attractions. (5) As an example, travelers on a budget might opt to visit other

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destinations with more affordable access to attractions, leading to a decline in tourist - Supporting idea:
arrivals and a subsequent reduction in tourism revenue.
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(6) Additionally, the practice of charging foreign visitors more than local residents might
be perceived as discriminatory, leading to negative repercussions on a country's global 3. 2nd Body paragraph
image. (7) Discrimination in any form can result in negative publicity, which can deter - Topic sentence:
potential tourists and create a hostile environment for those who do visit. (8) For
example, a country known for its unequal pricing policies might suffer from a decline in - Supporting idea:
international reputation, which could affect not only tourism but also trade and
diplomatic relations. - Example:

(9) On the other hand, proponents of higher fees for foreign visitors argue that the
additional revenue generated can be used for the maintenance and preservation of 4. 3rd Body paragraph
cultural and historical sites. (10) However, alternative solutions can be explored to fund - Counter-argument:
the upkeep of these attractions without resorting to discriminatory pricing. (11) For
instance, a country could establish partnerships with international organizations, such as - Topic sentence:
UNESCO, to secure funding for the preservation of its heritage sites, or implement small,
reasonable price increases that apply to both local and foreign visitors. - Supporting idea:

(12) In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea of charging foreign tourists more than
local residents when visiting cultural and historical attractions, as it might lead to a decline
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in tourist arrivals, a damaged international reputation, and potential discrimination. (13)
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Instead, alternative solutions should be sought to ensure that these attractions remain
accessible to all while generating the necessary funds for their preservation and
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maintenance.

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