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Examination Response Answering File

Dear Reviewer,

First of all, i want to thank to all the reviewers for giving me advice. I carefully
modified my paper regarding the suggestion give. The following is an introduction to
the revision of my paper.

(1) According to Reviewer A’s suggestion, the paper has been revised by the newest
submission rules and has been added the details and contents of the research methods.

(2) According to Reviewer B and C’s suggestion, the keywords format has been
already corrected, and the Korean spelling has been modified to make it more
standardized and academic.

(3) According to Reviewer B’s suggestion, “FIG. 2” has been replaced with a higher-
resolution version.

(4) According to Reviewer B’s suggestion, the information content of the 106
participants mentioned in Figure 3 has been supplemented. Table 2 was made to
display the information. (in Ⅳ. Needs analysis of the elderly section). At the same
time, the user interview details have been added to the research methods in the
abstract.

(5) According to Reviewer C’s suggestion and referenced descriptions of specialized


terminology from other KCI papers, the Korean expression of the title has been
revised.

(6) According to Reviewer C’s suggestion, in the “Ⅳ. Needs analysis of the elderly”
section, firstly, I have supplemented the information contents of the user interview
and made Table 2. Furthermore, I have refined the visual of Figure 4 to enhance its
readability. Finally, I have supplemented the reason for utilizing immersive
companion AR glasses systems to better explain the importance of the AR glasses
service system proposed later.

(7) According to Reviewer C’s suggestion, in the “Ⅴ.1. The conceptual framework of
Immersive Companionship AR Glasses System for the Elderly” section, I have enriched the
content of Figure 6 to enhance its clarity and ease of understanding. And this part of
the content will be my next step in research: Exploring and focusing on the feasibility
and innovation of AR technology in elderly-friendly design, more interactive modes
in virtual scenes can be enriched in the development of new technologies in the
future.

Thanks again for giving me this opportunity to revise my paper. I hope my revision
can meet the reviewers’ requirements. I hope this study could provide a reference for
using AR technology to help the elderly solve emotional companionship problems.
Finally, I sincerely hope that this paper will have the opportunity to be published in
the “Korean Society of Design Culture”.

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