Zoe Etheridge

Question 1

Thesis Statement: The way that the celebrities contributed it, the timing of its creation, the

financial benefit and the support through ads all are the reasons why it is known today.

The thesis statement focuses on causes of youtube being popular.

Question 2 – on the draft

Question 3- on the draft

Question 4

I would like you to add more information on how social media has transformed people’s lives.

The information should be added to the second paragraph.

Question 5

The sources used in the essay are credible. For instance, the authors’ credentials and information

is provided. The information is also current and up to date.

Question 6

The essay does not provide an alternative opinion as to the failures of social media (youtube).

More concentration was put on the positive aspect of social media.

Question 7

The essay is organized in terms of causal chain. It provides a systematic arrangement of the

positive aspects of social media (youtube).

Question 8

The logical fallacy that can be detected in the essay is the post hoc fallacy. The essay is based on

the conclusion that social media has gained a lot of popularity due to the millions of people using

it.