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Some believe that all individuals who break the law should be placed in prison as a form of

punishment. However, others hold the view that there are more effective alternatives to
deal with lawbreakers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, there is much debate about whether those individuals who break the
law should be placed in prison or having effective alternatives to dealing with ones. This essay, I
will address both perspectives, and I believe that the balanced strategy is the most effective and
persuasive approach.
Primarily, it is undeniable that imprisonment for individuals who have break law behaviors can
server as model to habitants focus into national regulations. By depriving individuals of their
freedom, a vast majority of habitants will have sense of fearing to enhance personal awareness
into law regulations and avoid illegal activities. Furthermore, imprisonment can help maintain of
public safety. By removing dangerous individuals from the community, reducing the risk of harm
to innocent citizens and improving overall public safety.
However, the effective alternative also plays a critical role in several occurrences. Firstly, it will
allow individuals can quickly reintegrate into society. For example, suffering fined or engaging
temporary rehabilitation center is efficiently ways for individuals who have addiction behaviors
and mental health, which have an opportunity to become more useful and responsibility person
in community. Moreover, effective alternatives can help alleviate the strain on the criminal
justice system and reduce the societal costs associated with incarceration.
In conclusion, while both imprisonment and effective alternatives have their merits, I firmly
believe that a balanced approach that incorporates both elements are the most effective and
persuasive way to address criminal behavior.

There is an ongoing debate in contemporary society regarding the most effective way to
handle individuals who engage in illegal behavior. While some argue that imprisonment is
the most suitable approach, others contend that there are alternative methods that can be
employed to deal with such individuals. In this essay, I will examine both viewpoints and
argue that a balanced strategy is the most effective and persuasive approach.
The use of imprisonment as a means of punishment can serve as a model for law-abiding
citizens. By depriving individuals of their freedom, the majority of citizens will be more
inclined to abide by the law, and they will develop a stronger sense of fear and awareness
regarding the significance of adhering to regulations and avoiding illegal activities.
Moreover, imprisonment can contribute to the maintenance of public safety by removing
dangerous individuals from the community, thereby reducing the risk of harm to innocent
citizens and improving overall public safety.
However, effective alternatives also play an essential role in certain circumstances. For
instance, such alternatives can enable individuals to quickly reintegrate into society.
Imposing fines or providing temporary rehabilitation centers can be an efficient way for
individuals with addiction or mental health issues to become more responsible and useful
members of society. Additionally, effective alternatives can help to alleviate the strain on
the criminal justice system and reduce the societal costs associated with incarceration.
In conclusion, while both imprisonment and effective alternatives have their merits, a
balanced approach that incorporates both elements is the most effective and persuasive
way to address criminal behavior. By striking a balance between imprisonment and
effective alternatives, we can create a system that better serves society as a whole.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and
cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of movies screened of the UK and Australia in the year 2001
while the line graph depicts films admission the different countries between 1976 and 2006.
Overall, US Fims was the most released market in Australia and UK in 2001while the converse
true for the figure of Australia films. Also UK was the highest in cinema admission during the
period.
As can be seen from chart, British was released US films highest with 75% in 2001, while this
figure of Australia was slightly lower around 65%. There was roughly 20% the percentage of UK
released internal films, while the proportion of UK films was screened in Australia 5%. Similar,
the percentage of UK released Australia and other films experienced smaller, roundly 10%.
Meanwhile, while Australia was released other films approximately 20%, but least in the figure
of internal films, just about 2%.
It is obvious that British preferred cinemas in the theatre than Australia during the period. in
1975 the ratio of movie admission stood at 100 million in UK and 30 million on Australia. In the
next 10 years, the figure of movie admission in UK was hit the lowest with 60 million and
reaching almost 160 million in last years. While the figure of Australia experience slightly 30%
and reaching 80 million in 2005.
The bar chart and line graph provide a detailed representation of the proportion of movies
screened in the UK and Australia in 2001 and the number of films admitted in different
countries between 1976 and 2006, respectively.
In general, the US film market had the highest number of releases in Australia and the UK
in 2001, while Australian films had fewer releases in the UK. Furthermore, the UK had the
highest cinema admission rate during the period.
As detailed by the chart, the UK released the highest number of US films, accounting for
75% of the total in 2001, while Australia's figure was slightly lower at around 65%. The
proportion of UK's internally produced films released was roughly 20%, while the
percentage of UK films released in Australia was only 5%. Similarly, the percentage of UK-
released Australian and other films was approximately 10%. Meanwhile, Australia released
other films at a rate of approximately 20%, but the figure for internally produced films was
much lower at just 2%.
The data indicates that the British preferred cinemas in theatres more than Australians
during the period. In 1975, the number of movie admissions was 100 million in the UK and
30 million in Australia. In the next 10 years, the number of movie admissions in the UK
reached its lowest point at 60 million, and it increased to almost 160 million in the last
years. Meanwhile, the number of admissions in Australia increased by approximately 30%,
reaching 80 million in 2005.
The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in
an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to
deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school
curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s society, an increasing number of health care system are grappling with how to handle
the health issues related among obesity issues. Many people advocate for the integration of
physical education into the school curriculum as the optimal solution to address the growing
issue of obesity. In this essay, I will argue in favor of this proposition, highlighting the benefits of
incorporating physical education into the school curriculum.
Primarily, it is undeniable that integrating physical education lessons into the school curriculum
offers numerous merits. Firstly, participating in physical activities is essential for maintaining a
healthy weight among students. By providing regularly exercise regimen, schools can create
instill positive habits in students, encouraging them to engage in regular exercise after stress
hours of learning. This will significantly enhance their awareness regarding health and
enjoyment of sports.
Moreover, participation in fitness pursuits allows students the opportunity to break the cycle of
sedentary lifestyle. As more children are often spending leisure time on technological devices
such as watching video and playing game, which results in a decrease in concentration on main
subjects. The implementation of diversified physical activities can improve students in overall
focus and academic performance.
In conclusion, integrating physical education into the school curriculum not only promotes
healthier lifestyles among students but also helps combat sedentary behaviors. By fostering a
culture of physical activity in schools, we can address the escalating issue of obesity and improve
overall student well-being. Therefore, I firmly support the inclusion of more physical education
lessons in the school curriculum.

The prevalence of obesity-related health issues has become a concerning challenge for
healthcare systems worldwide. In response to this challenge, numerous stakeholders
propose the integration of physical education into the school curriculum as an effective
means of addressing the growing issue of obesity. This essay argues in favor of this
proposition and highlights the benefits of incorporating physical education into the school
curriculum.
Primarily, integrating physical education lessons into the school curriculum offers several
merits. Firstly, participation in physical activities is critical to maintaining a healthy weight
among students. By providing students with a regular exercise regimen, schools can instill
positive habits that encourage regular exercise, thereby fostering awareness of health and
enjoyment of sports.
Moreover, participation in physical activities allows students to break the cycle of
sedentary lifestyles. As more children spend their leisure time on technological devices,
such as watching videos and playing games, their focus on core subjects tends to decrease.
By implementing diversified physical activities, schools can improve students' overall focus
and academic performance.
In conclusion, integrating physical education into the school curriculum not only promotes
healthier lifestyles among students but also helps combat sedentary behaviors. By fostering
a culture of physical activity in schools, the escalating issue of obesity can be addressed, and
overall student well-being can be improved. Therefore, this essay firmly supports the
inclusion of more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.

The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all
full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female
members of this health club.
The bar chart illustrates the average monthly exercise in fitness center of permanent members
among Miami and Florida in the year 2017 while the pie graph depicts the ratio of age in both
genders among this fitness center.
Overall, the number of female using fitness center in Miami and Florida experienced higher than
the figure of Male during this year. Also, the figure of male and female fall into 21-45 age was
largest in age groups.
As can be seen in the chart, almost 500 female using fitness center in January 2017 in both
Miami and Florida, while the figure of male slightly higher with approximately 600 members.
Similar, the number of both genders just gradually increase until June to September have relative
similar with 800 male members and roughly 700 female members. From October to the end of
the year, there was slightly decrease over 500 and 700 members.
Regarding to the pie chart, more than half of the male members of these fitness clubs fall into 21-
45 age group while the figure of female members smaller with 50%. In contrast, over 65 years
old, the percentage of male accounted 25% compared with 31% of the female members.
Meanwhile, the proportion of other age groups generated one-fifth.

The presented bar chart demonstrates the average monthly exercise patterns of permanent
members in fitness centers located in Miami and Florida during the year 2017. Meanwhile,
the pie graph showcases the age distribution in both genders among the members of these
fitness centers.
Overall, the data indicates that more females utilized the fitness centers in Miami and
Florida compared to their male counterparts in the same year. Additionally, the age group
of 21-45 had the highest number of male and female members.
The chart reveals that in January 2017, the number of female members utilizing fitness
centers in Miami and Florida was approximately 500, while the number of male members
was marginally higher, with around 600 members. From June to September, the number of
male and female members gradually increased and remained relatively stable, with about
800 male members and roughly 700 female members. Conversely, from October to the end
of the year, the number of members decreased slightly, with just over 500 male members
and approximately 700 female members.
In terms of the pie chart, it is noteworthy that more than half of the male members of these
fitness centers belonged to the age group of 21-45 years, while the percentage of female
members in the same age group was slightly lower, at 50%. In contrast, for members who
were over 65 years old, the percentage of male members was 25%, compared to 31% of the
female members. The proportion of other age groups was about one-fifth.

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