P 14, Correct the paragraph

Seonjoo Kim
09/ /23

The human heart is an amazing organ. It is

responsible for pushing blood inside the circulatory
system. The left side of the heart pumps blood to the
entire body. The right side pumps blood to the lungs
to receive oxygen. Our lungs to do two things: they
receive oxygen when we inhaled and remove carbon
dioxide when we exhaled. Inside the lungs, the
respiratory system interacts with the circulatory
system. Then blood moves to the right side of the
heart into filling chamber, which is called the right
atrium. Which each individual heartbeat, blood moves
from the right atrium into a pumping chamber. After
that, the blood picks up oxygen. Once the blood picks
up oxygen, it pushes back to the heart, filling another
chamber, which is called the left atrium. Doctors want
to expand their research into the blood circulation of
the left heart in order to have a better understanding
of both the heart and the blood that pumps through
our veins. The functions of the heart are truly
amazing.
1.The human heart is probably the most amazing
organ.
2.Our heart is responsible for pushing blood inside
the circulatory system.
3.Our heart is responsible for pushing blood through
the circulatory system.
4.The left side of the heart pumps blood through our
entire body, while the right side pumps blood to the
lungs to receive oxygen.
5.Each lungs do two things: they receive oxygen when
we inhaled and remove carbon dioxide when we
exhale.
6.Inside the lungs, the individuals’ respiratory system
interacts with the circulatory system.
7.Then the blood flows to the right side of the heart
into a filling chamber, which is called the right atrium.
8.Once blood collects up oxygen, it pushes back to
the heart, filling another chamber, which is called the
left atrium.
9.In order to have better understanding of both t