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Which transportation has changed peoples’ lives the most: automobiles, bicycles, or airplanes?
Choose one and explain why.

Nowadays, diverse transportations have been invented. Throughout the history, almost every
time such factors advent, peoples’ lives changed dramatically.  general statement Out of the
numerous transportation system and devices, I find that the airplane contributes the most to the
change.  show my stance Airplanes have allowed people to travel to foreign places that are far
away, lessened the time used to get there, and formed the foundation of industry field regarding the
atmosphere.  show my two reasons

To start off, the airplane has let people get to places that are too far to reach by any other
transportation.  topic sentence To explain, whilst automobiles and bicycles are unable to go over
water and require roads on land, airplanes are free from such limitations.  supporting sentence
Since all an airplane needs to get its passengers to their destination is land to take off and settle, there
are much few obstacles to consider when traveling to foreign places.  supporting sentence For
instance, if one lived in Beijing but had to get to America in three days, one would have no choice but
to take an airplane because not only is it too far to reach by land, but there are also bodies of water on
the way.  example Since airplanes solve such problems, it brings the most change to peoples’ lives.
 remind my topic just slightly

Next, taking airplanes helped to reduce time to get to one’s destination. Although going to
the supermarket in front of one’s home would be more time efficient to walk or bike, places that might
be across a few states would be reached by airplane in a relatively shorter time. This causes quite a
change to peoples’ lives because people nowadays need to live a life that reduces the use of extra time
due to the developing society that requires a large number of tasks to get done in limited time sectors.
For example, an employee of a firm might need to get to Georgia for a work conference, but lives in
California. Even though getting to the conference is possible by car or bicycle, he would certainly
choose the airplane because it would be more time efficient. Since the employee would need to pour
his time on getting ready for his presentation at the conference, he would choose to take the airplane
so that he would be able to save time. Therefore, since planes are time efficient, I find them to cause
the most change.

Lastly, the airplane has formed the foundation of the industrial field that uses the atmosphere.
In detail, airplanes are the first things that enable the mankind to “float” above the ground. Ever since
then, people have invested more and more on similar products that let the humankind to reach the sky.
Due to the tendency of a human that triggers greed to what they have started to know, airplanes were
the kind of start button that was pressed to invest on the atmospherical industry. Thanks to the
invention, devices such as rockets, jet-planes, air balloons, helicopters and the like have been
invented. As a result, the airplane had flourished the novel industrial field that uses the atmosphere.
Thus, I think that they have brought the most changes to peoples’ lives.

Not only has the airplane solved the curiosity of the mankind about flying, but is has also led
significant churns in peoples’ lives. Such alterations may be found in the fact that airplanes let people
reach places that other transportations cannot, are more time efficient, and have taken the industrial
field of the atmosphere to flourish.