INTRODUCTION:

- Today= nowadays = these days

- Televised Talent shows= talent programs on TV
- Have become popular =
Massively grow in popularity =
Modern/ contemporary Societies

There are many talent programs on TV which have

grown in popularity.

- Good Method = great/effective way – means

- Find= look for = find out=seek = discover = uncover
- Talented people = gifted people= people who have
real talents and natural abilities

Besides, / also, / in addition, / additionally, /…it is

obvious/clear that…
These shows are really entertaining for audience/
viewers.  These shows really entertain audience.
 People/ audience finds these shows + adj
(interesting and entertaining)

BODY
1. FINDING TALENTED PEOPLE
- On the one hand,
- Firstly,
- To begin with,

 Various talent shows are proven to be a great

way for identifying/V-ing authentic talent. = for
talent discovery.
- Provide good opportunities/ chances/ a good
platform for people/ individuals to showcase their
talents in many fields.  build up confidence/
talent/ career path.
- Judges (celebrities): play an important/vital/crucial
role in evaluating/recognizing and nurturing talents
of people.
- Example: for example,/ for instance, / a typical/
notable/ good example is ABC …..
2. ENTERTAINMENT
 - On the other hand, …
- However, ….
 These shows also offer significant entertainment
value. / brings audience/us a lot of fun/
entertainment.
- Relax- relieve stress/ have happy moods and
relaxing moments  great performances/ unusual
and shocking factors seem to be
fascinated/excited -> enhance emotional
connection between viewers and contestants/
candidates
- Famous people (idols): judges/ coaches ->
contribute to attracting a lot of fans/ viewers/ a
broader audience
- Example:

CONCLUSION:
 TV talent shows are considered as a great/effective
method for discovering remarkable talents and as a
source of entertainment. Depending on
individual/personal hobbies/ interests/ preferences,
people at different ages can choose to watch their
most suitable/proper/ appropriate programs.