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A well written conclusion is like a well written paragraph. This means that the sentences need to be
written in a logical order of ideas with appropriate use of linking words. Here is a conclusion from
another report on the analysis of brittle material. The sentences have been jumbled so that they are not in
the correct order. Read through the sentences and number them in the order you think would be best.
Conclusion
The length of a brittle specimen under a load also affects its mechanical properties.
All in all, brittle materials exhibit a sensitivity to their surface conditions as well as their
physical dimensions.
Not only does the presence of a crack cause premature failure, but the width, depth, and
orientation of the crack also play an important part in determining just how much weaker the
material will be made.
It was also seen that cracks initiate at the atomic level of a material.
The short specimens were much more rigid than the longer specimens.
2 An initiated crack on the surface of a brittle material will cause the material to fail at a much
lower stress level than expected.
From Killingsworth, M. J. 1996. Information in Action – A guide to technical communication. Boston: Allyn and Bacon.
Now, recall the way you completed the task just now. What are the contextual clues that helped you
reorder the sentences? Did you rely only on the linking words? In other words, how are ideas connected?
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Session Eight: Functional Grammar and Related Pedagogies
As teachers, we need to help learners see that effective communication involves achieving harmony
between functional interpretation and formal appropriacy (Halliday, 1985) by giving them tasks that
dramatize the relationship between grammatical items and the discoursal contexts in which they occur. In
genuine communication beyond the classroom, grammar and context are often so closely related that
appropriate grammatical choices can only be made with reference to the context and purpose of the
communication. In addition, only a handful of grammatical rules are free from discoursal constraints.
This, by the way, is one of the reasons why it is often difficult to answer learners' questions about
grammatical appropriacy: in many instances, the answer is that it depends on the attitude or orientation
that the speaker wants to take towards the events he or she wishes to report.
If learners are not given opportunities to explore grammar in context, it will be difficult for them to see
how and why alternative forms exist to express different communicative meanings. For example, getting
learners to read a set of sentences in the active voice, and then transform these into passives following a
model, is a standard way of introducing the passive voice. However, it needs to be supplemented by tasks
which give learners opportunities to explore when it is communicatively appropriate to use the passive
rather than the active voice.
Now read the following text – guess who the target audience is:
When the compressive wave component reaches a free face, it reflects as a tensile wave and travel back
towards the source. Since rock has low tensile strength, it will be broken into pieces by the tension and
can be further enhanced by the stress concentration effect. This process is called spalling.
textbook language
definition
form and function
communicative purpose
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In short, in consciousness-raising, learners are required to notice a certain feature of language (that is,
sentence patterns), but there is no requirement to produce or communicate the certain sentence patterns
taught. Consciousness-raising activities differ from other types of explicit grammar teaching in that they
make no claim that the knowledge gained from such activities can become automatized and available for
immediate use.
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Metaphorical: information packed into Literal (or “congruent”): information unpacked into
one clause clauses
Furthermore, reliance on scripted spoken 1. 1. Furthermore, as students rely on scripted spoken texts,
texts retards students’ ability to interact 2. 2. they become less able to interact outside the classroom
in the unscripted world of 3. 3. where people in the world converse without a
conversation outside the classroom (Burns
script (Burns 2001).
2001).
Although both the literal and metaphorical instances mean the same, they serve different functions. The
literal instance portrays a sequence of concrete experience such as an observation, and narrates as a matter
of fact. Meanwhile, the metaphorical notion is the concentrated experience into “a general notion of
‘abstraction’” (Ravelli, 2004, p. 117), refined into an understanding of knowledge or ideas. In other
words, grammatical metaphor is the naming of processes and sequences, and “one of the most important
ways to technicalise” (ibid, p.117).
Apart from making the written text look sophisticated and technical, grammatical metaphor also acts as a
means to foreground and background the body of text. High lexical density in the form of grammatical
metaphor at the position of higher level Themes and News serves as a point of departure to further
develop the text and to accumulate and distil information.
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