Comp I – Personal Essay

Rubric: This I Believe

Name: Comments

Content:
Includes a central focus, a clear thesis
statement, and well-articulated ideas.
Includes information with interpretation and
analysis.
/20
Organization:
Includes an intro, a conclusion, and strong
body paragraphs. Paragraphs begin with
clear topic sentences that transition into the
par.’s main idea.
/20
Development:
Ideas are discussed and explored thoroughly
and in depth. Analysis demonstrates
thoughtful consideration of the arguments.
/10
Stance/Point of View:
Presents the author’s opinion and
perspective clearly and coherently.
/10
Sentence fluency:
Sentences flow logically from one idea to the
next, using a variety of constructions and
good “chunking.”
/10
Diction and style (Voice):
Author’s voice is strong and clear. Writing
demonstrates vivid word choices and
effective use of language.
/10
Conventions/Mechanics (incl. formatting):
Demonstrates attention to proper formatting
and GPS (grammar, spelling, and
punctuation). Has been edited and cleaned
up as needed.
/10
Process/Revision incl. BS submit:
Evidence of editing and revision. Draft
submitted to Brightspace.
/10
Total Grade Second Draft: /100 =