Corrections

 Include candidate numbers

 Title page can include a small picture…remove the excess line spacing
 Where is the table of contents
 Pages should be numbered
 Make Headings bold
 Remove the excessive space between headings and information under each
 Check to ensure that each heading is on the appropriate page along with the
information under each heading.
 Remove the excess blank pages
 Remove the section titled presentation and analyse it is no longer needed. Select one
of the graphs or tables used in this section and place it in the interview report to
support one of the sections in the interview report.
TITLE
AIMS AND OBJECTIVES 6/6
 the topic says Paris Hairdresser but the Aim says Nadine Hairdresser
 restructure objective 2…why start with The
DATA COLLECTION METHOD/ METHODOLOGY 5/8
 make mention of the use of primary, secondary, qualitative and or quantitative data
used
 how many open ended and closed ended questions were used
 when was the interview done and where
 speak in past tense remove will be and use was

INTERVIEW REPORT
 Remember that the review of industry is a part of the interview report worth only 3
marks so summarize the review of industry and to the interview report.
 Check the mark scheme and ensure that each section of the interview report is in the
order as seen in the mark scheme.
IMPACT ON SELF
Put names in bold…adjust the spacing of Kelly’s reflection
5/5 Nichol
5/5 Kelly
5/5 Levenecia
5/5 Shenell
0/5 Shantal (missing)

Oral Presentation 9/10 Nichol

 8/10 Kelly
9/10 Levenecia
8/10 Shenell
8/10 Shantal
CONCLUSION 4/4
REFERENCE/BIBLIOGRAPHY 0/1
 missing
PRESENTATION OF PROJECT
 Information communicated using correct grammar 1/ 2
 Use of media other than text to present information (graph, tables, charts, diagrams)
1/1
 Information in project report presented logically and coherently 1/2
Good afternoon students I have only seen IA drafts from Akeylia, Terrise, Abigail, Owen-
Shanoii and Shawn J’s groups. Let me kindly remind you all that IA grades are due on
Monday which means I will need to see same to review and allow you to make corrections to
allot grades for submission before Monday.

If I don’t get the IAs for review by end of day anything received after will be marked as
is and submitted without corrections.