Hi Simon.

I hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for your email, . It was great to hear from you. I Comentario [WU1]: NEW
SENTENCE
couldn’t write earlier because I’ve been feeling very unwell for the last few weeks.

Since A few days ago, I started with a very strong stomach ache. I didn’t know why I was
feeling so bad, until I realized that I had had a company dinner the day before. When I Comentario [WU2]: PAST PERFECT
arrived at home, I couldn’t stop vomiting. Worried, I went to the emergency room/A&E and
the doctor told me that I had food poisoning! He prescribed me some antibiotics and a Comentario [WU3]: SUPERFLUOUS
stomach protector.

I am I’m now getting over it and I’m sure I’ll be fine next weekend. How about a coffee at Comentario [WU4]: In informal
writing, you should use contractions
the new coffee shop in the centre?

I look forward to seeing you.

Take care,
Sara Comentario [WU5]: Missing part

R The writing is good  but remember that if you don’t write the
final goodbye and your name at the end, the writing is unfinished.

ORIGINAL WRITING:
Hi Simon.

I hope you feel better. Thanks for your email, it was great to hear from you. I couldn’t write
earlier because I ‘ve been feeling very unwell for the last few weeks.

Since a few days ago, I started with a very strong stomach ache. I didn’t know why I was
feeling so bad, until I realized that I had a company dinner the day before. When I arrived at
home, I couldn’t stop vomiting. Worried, I went to the emergency room and the doctor told
me that I had food poisoning! He prescribed me some antibiotics and a stomach protector.

I am now getting over it and I’m sure I’ll be fine next weeknd. How about a coffee at the new
coffee shop in the centre?

I look forward to seeing you.