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1. People are debating whether to keep sports in schools or focus more on other subjects.

2. Sports help kids stay healthy and strong.


3.Also, sports teach kids important lessons about themselves.
4. But some say we should spend more time on reading and math instead of sports.
5. They think sports are really important for students.

Rewritten beginning: Using a quote from John Fitzgerald Kennedy, the essay highlights the importance of sport and
its inclusion in school activities.
Rewritten ending: In conclusion, despite differing opinions, the essay asserts the necessity of sports in school,
emphasizing their role in fostering fitness, health, and essential life skills.

1.I'm going to write an essay expressing my opinion on whether it's better to read a book or watch a film adaptation
of a story. This essay is for my English class.
2.I should include points about entertainment value, portability, and one additional idea of my own.
3.I should write in a formal, presenting logical arguments to support my opinion.
4.The essay should be between 140-190 words.
5.I should write two paragraphs to support my opinion, discussing the advantages of reading books over watching
films. Then, I should include one paragraph expressing the opposing viewpoint.
In deciding whether it's better to read a book or watch a movie based on it, it's clear that both have their
benefits. However, I believe reading a book gives a richer experience for a few reasons.
Firstly, books let you understand characters better. Unlike movies, they can show what characters are
thinking and feeling inside. This makes the story feel deeper and more real.
Secondly, books are super easy to take with you anywhere. You don't need a screen or batteries, just the
book itself. This makes reading more convenient and practical.
Now, some people say movies are fun because of the cool visuals and sounds. While that's true, watching a
movie can be kind of passive. You just sit and watch, not really thinking much.
In the end, books offer a deeper connection to the story and are more convenient to enjoy anywhere. So,
while movies can be fun, books are the better choice for a truly engaging experience.

I'm going to write an essay expressing my opinion on whether it's beneficial to lengthen the standard school day.
The readers will likely be educators, parents, and students interested in educational policies and school
improvement strategies.
I should include points discussing the potential benefits and drawbacks of longer school days, supported by
reasons and examples.
I should write in a persuasive and informative style, presenting logical arguments to support my viewpoint.
The essay should be of an appropriate length to thoroughly discuss the topic, likely between 150-250 words.
I should write three paragraphs to support my opinion, discussing the advantages of longer school days, potential
drawbacks, and addressing opposing viewpoints.

In today's busy world, students have less time after school, potentially missing out on fun and relaxation.
However, teachers covering more topics can broaden education. Still, students may get tired, affecting their
enjoyment and grades.Having less time after school means missing out on hobbies and relaxation, leading to
stress. Finding balance is crucial.Yet, teachers covering more topics exposes students to a wider range of
subjects, enhancing understanding and critical thinking.But, increased workload can tire students, reducing
enjoyment and grades. Balancing self-care and academics is essential for success.In conclusion, finding a balance
between school and personal well-being is key. Prioritizing self-care and managing workload help maintain a
healthy academic journey.
In today's schools, some people say we should switch from using textbooks to using notebook computers. I think
this is a good idea for a few reasons.Firstly, using computers in class would make learning more fun and
interesting. With computers, we can watch videos, listen to news, and read articles online. It would bring learning
to life!Also, schools would save a lot of money by using computers instead of buying new textbooks every year.
This extra money could go towards other important things like sports equipment.However, some people worry that
students would get distracted by playing games or surfing the internet during class. This could affect their
schoolwork negatively.Overall, I believe using notebook computers instead of textbooks would be a great idea.
They make learning more exciting, save money, and prepare students for the future.

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