Outline

Some people believe that parents should be responsible for

encouraging their children to take regular exercise. Others argue that
the main responsibility for encouraging students to do so should lie
with schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is said by some people that family should be responsible for

stimulating their kids to take regular work-out while others argue that
encouraging pupils to do so should be mainly responsible for school.
There are valid arguments on both sides, which will be discussed below.
Body 1
Topic sentence:
On the one hand, there are justifiable reasons why some people
think that parents need to be responsible for inspiring their children to
take frequently activities.
Body 2
Topic sentence:
On the other hand, other people suppose that schools are the
main responsibility for stimulating pupils to do so.
In conclusion, the main responsibility for encouraging students to do so
should lie with schools, but I think family play a curial role to encourage
their children to take usual exercise.