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1(f) on this question paper. Question 1

(f) According to Text B, what are the problems with air travel and what can reasonably be done to help
solve them?

You must use continuous writing (not note form) and use your own words as far as possible.

Your summary should not be more than 120 words.

Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 5 marks for the
quality of your writing.

Air travel presents several significant challenges, ranging from its high cost to its
substantial environmental impact. One of the foremost concerns is the financial burden
it places on travellers. Flying has become almost habitual for many, despite its hefty
price tag. Additionally, it's no secret that air travel ranks among the top contributors to
CO2 pollution, posing a grave threat to the environment.

To address these issues, several reasonable solutions can be implemented. Firstly,

individuals can opt for greener modes of transportation, such as solar-powered yachts,
whenever feasible. Furthermore, selecting direct flights and carefully considering routes
rather than solely prioritizing cost or convenience can help minimize environmental
impact. Investing in more efficient aircraft, like those employed by modern airlines, is
another step towards mitigating pollution.

Additionally, travellers can opt for less frequent, longer trips rather than multiple shorter
ones to reduce overall carbon emissions. Choosing airlines that consistently fill their
planes helps maximize efficiency and minimize environmental impact per passenger.
Moreover, packing lighter reduces the weight onboard, thus decreasing fuel
consumption.

Effective regulation is essential in ensuring airlines adhere to environmentally conscious

practices. Collaboration among airlines to develop innovative solutions and explore new
technologies, such as biofuels, can accelerate progress. Leveraging AI to analyse data
and optimize operations can further enhance efficiency and sustainability.

A globally connected network for seat allocation could help optimize flight routes and
minimize empty seats, thereby reducing wasted resources. However, the exploration and
implementation of these solutions need to expedite, with a greater emphasis on the
adoption of biofuels and the integration of AI technologies into air travel operations. By
collectively addressing these challenges and embracing sustainable practices, we can
work towards a more eco-friendly future for air travel.

Re-read paragraphs 7 and 9.

 Paragraph 7 begins ‘We left Cape Town ...’ and is about the first part of the
journey, crossing the Atlantic.

 Paragraph 9 begins ‘We went to bed early ...’ and describes events during the
storm in IIhabela.

Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in
these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each
paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of
imagery.

Write about 200 to 300 words.

In Paragraph 7, the writer crafts a vivid and captivating narrative that immerses the
reader in the powerful and magical experience of sailing across the Atlantic. Through the
use of rich and evocative language, the writer skillfully conveys both the physical
sensations of the journey and the profound emotional impact it has on the narrator.

The journey begins with the description of a "stiff breeze that whipped," suggesting a
strong wind urging the boat forward with determination and vigor. This sets the tone for
the exhilarating adventure that lies ahead, hinting at the challenges and triumphs to
come.

As the boat sails across the Atlantic, the writer paints a breathtaking picture of the sea,
describing "glittering swells" that evoke a sense of fullness, power, and beauty. The
waves are likened to sparkling jewels, hinting at the awe-inspiring spectacle of nature's
grandeur.

The imagery of "dazzling fragments of crystal" further enhances the beauty of the scene,
portraying the sunlight reflecting off the waves with such intensity that it is almost
blinding. This imagery not only captures the sheer brilliance of the sea but also suggests
a sense of danger, adding depth and complexity to the narrative.
Amidst this dazzling display of nature's beauty, the writer describes sea creatures
"leaping and dancing on our bow wave in celebration," personifying the ocean and
highlighting the harmony between the sailors and their environment. This imagery
reflects the writer's sense of freedom and connection to the natural world.

Throughout the journey, the writer conveys a sense of mastery and control, describing
the sailors "guiding the yacht" with wisdom and skill. The boat "thunders over the
ocean," moving with immense power and dominance, evoking the image of a
conquering hero triumphantly conquering the seas.

As the journey progresses, the experience becomes etched forever into the narrator's
memory, leaving a vivid and permanent impression. The boat seems to "fly over the
crests of the waves," soaring with a sense of freedom and exhilaration that is truly
transformative.

Finally, the writer describes an "exultant sense of liberation" that is absolute, conveying a
feeling of triumph and joy that is all-encompassing. This language captures the
unshakable optimism of the moment, leaving the reader with a sense of awe and
wonder at the beauty and power of the natural world.

 Paragraph 9 begins ‘We went to bed early ...’ and describes events during the
storm in IIhabela.

In Paragraph 9, the writer masterfully employs language to depict the brave struggle of
the boat against the ferocity and brutality of the storm in Ilhabela. Through vivid
descriptions and evocative imagery, the writer immerses the reader in the chaos and
danger of the situation, capturing both the physical and emotional intensity of the
moment.

The paragraph begins with the boat's mooring line snapping, described as if done on
purpose, wilfully breaking free in the face of the storm's onslaught. This sets the stage
for the mayhem that ensues, as chaos and havoc grip the boat amidst the relentless fury
of the storm.

The storm is vividly portrayed as "flogging violently," with whipping winds and driving
rain creating a scene of punishment and danger. The air seethes with driven rain and
spray, evoking a sense of anger and aggression as nature unleashes its full force.
Amidst the chaos, the screaming winds and alarming listing of the boat hint at the
imminent danger of capsizing, as each wave threatens to engulf it. The desperate
struggle to save the boat becomes increasingly dire, with any chance of survival
diminishing with each crashing wave.

Yet, amidst the turmoil, there are moments of relief and hope, as the engine roars into
life and the boat's crew fights back against the storm. The use of technical terms like
"gunning the throttle" adds a sense of expertise and skill, highlighting the crew's
determination to overcome the odds.

As the boat battles against the waves, it heaves its bow across, bravely taking on the
elements head-on. The imagery of shattering waves and pellets of spray evokes a sense
of direct combat, with the boat emerging victorious against the forces of nature.

Finally, as the boat drags itself from the sand, there is a sense of exhaustion and fatigue,
yet also of triumph and resilience. The use of language effectively conveys the intense
physical and emotional journey of the boat and its crew, leaving the reader with a
profound appreciation for their bravery and perseverance in the face of adversity.

You are Dael. Having decided to stay on with Abi and Andy longer than planned to help
them as they begin to sail around South America, you write a letter to a friend at home.

In your letter you should:

  explain where you have been for the past couple of months and what

have been the positive highlights of the journey for you so far

  discuss how suited and prepared Andy, Abi and Josephine were to

undertake such a journey

  comment on what Andy and Abi were hoping to achieve and what you

think they will have learned by the end of their South American trip. Write the
letter.

Base your letter on what you have read in Text C, but be careful to use your own
words.

Write about 250 to 350 words.

Address each of the three bullet points.
Dear [Friend],

I hope this letter finds you well. It's been a whirlwind couple of months since I last wrote
to you. I've been on quite the adventure with Andy, Abi, and Josephine, sailing around
South America. Let me tell you about some of the highlights so far.

We kicked off our journey by crossing the Atlantic from Cape Town to Rio, which was
quite the feat! Despite a few tense moments, we made it across successfully, and the
feeling of accomplishment was exhilarating. Along the coast near Ilhabela, where Abi's
mother lived, we had the chance to explore picturesque coves and enjoy the beauty of
the Brazilian coastline. One unforgettable experience was when a pod of dolphins swam
alongside our boat, almost as if they were trying to communicate with us. And there's
nothing quite like sailing under the moonlight, with the sea shimmering all around us.

As for Andy, Abi, and Josephine's suitability for this journey, I must admit, they were
somewhat unprepared. The trip was poorly planned, with only a basic sense of the route
at best. Andy and Abi seemed to view it more as a road trip, underestimating the
challenges of sailing and the risks involved. They've given up their former lives, with no
income or permanent home, which could pose financial challenges down the line. And
while they're enthusiastic, nerves are starting to show, especially with an aging boat like
Josephine and limited equipment onboard.

Despite these challenges, Andy and Abi are hoping to achieve freedom, adventure, and
perhaps even a bit of fame and fortune through filming their journey. However, I believe
they'll learn valuable lessons along the way, particularly about the power of nature and
the importance of careful planning and preparation. Already, they've had to rely on
emergency procedures, like gunning the throttle to get off a sandbank, which shows the
need for further skills and expertise as sailors.

Overall, while the journey has had its ups and downs, I'm grateful for the experience and
the opportunity to share it with friends. I'll keep you updated on our adventures as we
continue our voyage around South America.

Warm regards, Dael