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Almost all of the really long sentences are under 1,000 words. The six longest
sentences (1,000+ words) are mostly a curiosity, just to see what is possible.
I hope students of writing can study these sentences to find inspiration. My advice
on how to learn from them? Try these three practices:
I also hope this list might be helpful for teachers and professors of writing, who
want more lengthy sentence examples to show their students. If you want to teach
short sentences, I’ve also compiled a list of those.
The longest sentence in English is also awesome. The longest sentence award goes
to:
And let’s end all this nonsense about how long sentences = run-on sentences. You
can have a six-word run-on sentence (“I went shopping I ate donuts.”), while most
of the sentences below are much, much longer than that and are not run-ons (except
for a few examples like Jose Saramago). But whether the sentence is grammatically
correct isn’t nearly as important as whether the sentence is fun or beautiful.
I hope that a study of very long sentences will arm you with strategies that are
almost as diverse as the sentences themselves, such as: starting each clause with
the same word, tilting with dependent clauses toward a revelation at the end,
padding with parentheticals, showing great latitude toward standard punctuation,
rabbit-trailing away from the initial subject, encapsulating an entire life, and
lastly, as this sentence is, celebrating the list.
What’s the definition of a long sentence? For my purposes, I’m defining it as more
than a 100 words. I’ve cheated with a few beautiful sentences a few words short,
because there is no sense in having an absolute and arbitrary rule, but more than
100 words was my guiding principle. I think any sentence more than 100 words is
almost guaranteed to be complex, complicated, and enormous.
If you like this list, please check out this other writing resource at Bookfox:
Also, if you have a sentence that you love from a particular author, and you think
it’s a better sentence than the one I’ve quoted, please, by all means, let’s have
the sentences do battle! Post it and we’ll see whether it’s better.
And also, if you’re studying sentences, you probably would like advice on how to
write a book.
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WILLIAM FAULKNER, “ABSOLOM, ABSOLOM.” 122 WORDS.
“From a little after two o’clock until almost sundown of the long still hot weary
dead September afternoon they sat in what Miss Coldfield still called the office
because her father had called it that–a dim hot airless room with the blinds all
closed and fastened for forty-three summers because when she was a girl someone had
believed that light and moving air carried heat and that dark was always cooler,
and which (as the sun shone fuller and fuller on that side of the house) became
latticed with yellow slashes full of dust motes which Qunetin thought of as being
flecks of the dead old dried paint itself blown inward from the scaling blinds as
wind might have blown them.”
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