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Name: Iago Medina

Should governments ban shops from selling food that is bad for your health?

1) Outline

I Thesis Statement: Banning shops from selling unhealthy food is a controversial


topic. While some argue that it infringes on personal freedom, others believe it's
necessary to protect public health. This essay will explore both sides of the
argument.

II Topic sentence: Banning unhealthy food can improve public health.

A Support argument for II: It can encourage healthier eating habits.

1 example for A: In many countries, people consume too much sugar,


leading to health problems like obesity and diabetes. Banning sugary
drinks and snacks can help reduce sugar intake.

2 example for A: In some places, people eat too much processed food,
which is high in unhealthy fats and salt. Banning these foods can
encourage people to cook more at home, using fresh ingredients.

B support argument for II: It can reduce the burden on healthcare systems.

1 example for B: In many countries, healthcare costs are rising


because of diet-related diseases. Banning unhealthy food can reduce
the number of people who need medical treatment for these diseases.

2 example for B: In some countries, the government pays for


healthcare. Banning unhealthy food can save money by reducing the
number of people who need medical treatment.

III Topic sentence: Banning unhealthy food can promote social justice.

A Support argument for III: It can help reduce health disparities.

1 example for A: In many countries, poor people are more likely to eat
unhealthy food because it's cheaper. Banning unhealthy food can help
reduce this inequality.

2 example for A: In some countries, poor neighbourhoods have more


fast food restaurants than rich neighbourhoods. Banning unhealthy
food can help reduce this inequality.
B support argument for III: It can help protect vulnerable groups.

1 example for B: In many countries, children are exposed to a lot of


advertising for unhealthy food. Banning unhealthy food can protect
children from this advertising.

2 example for B: In some countries, people with mental health


problems are more likely to eat unhealthy food. Banning unhealthy food
can help protect these people.

IV conclusion: Banning shops from selling unhealthy food is a complex issue. While
it can improve public health, reduce healthcare costs, and promote social justice, it
also raises questions about personal freedom. It's important for governments to
consider all these factors when making decisions about food policy.

2) Introduction

In recent years, there has been an increasing concern about the impact of
unhealthy food on public health. This has led to debates about whether
governments should intervene and ban shops from selling food that is
considered bad for health. While some argue that such a ban would infringe
on individual freedom and choice, others believe that it is necessary to protect
public health. This essay will explore both sides of the argument and provide
examples to support each perspective.

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