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Paper One - Poetry - Bob Orr - Tyre Shop - Full Response
Paper One - Poetry - Bob Orr - Tyre Shop - Full Response
the relationship between the speaker and the tyre shop man?
Introduction
In Bob Orr’s free verse poem “The Tyre Shop” the speaker, a poet, reveals his affinity for his
neighborhood tyre shop man and compares the man’s efforts to balance tyres with his own efforts to
balance words. The speaker’s tone is both admiring of the tyre shop man but also frustrated with his own
challenges to write an effective poem. Taking place over a single day from morning to night, the speaker
shows the emerging creativity and passion as he creates this poem for an unknown stranger. Orr’s use of
imagery and figurative language helps to develop the connection between the speaker and the tyre shop
man. In turn, this conveys the challenges of writing poetry and the importance of poetic inspiration.
Motif of Writing
In the beginning of the poem, the speaker alludes to the repetitive nature of writing poetry and
struggling to find inspiration. With the phrase “It begins every morning” Orr conveys that this is nothing
new and that the speaker’s routine is to “tap into inspiration.” The ambiguity of the pronoun “it” makes the
reader wonder what it is that starts every morning. It’s almost as if the speaker cannot put it in words. The
connotation of “tap into” is that of a well or spring that will give him something to write about. In line 3, he
admits that “really” he’s “just waiting for the tyre shop man to show up” and admits that his arrival is
something to anticipate and look forward to. The dash at the end of this line connects the next line but also
leaves the reader anticipating what is coming next, perhaps figuratively representing his writer’s block or
the unknown of where the inspiration will come from.
In the next section of the poem from lines 13 to 17 convey the speaker’s difficulty with
writing poetry as he compares balancing the tyres with balancing words in a poem. The speaker
uses vivid visual imagery as he describes the man as “lumbering bear-like in the cavernous dark.”
This simile comparing him to a bear in a dark cave helps to create a visual image of a large man in a
dark shop but more importantly connects to the metaphorical meaning of a poet “lumbering” in
the dark and unknown places in his subconscious mind. In line 16, ironically, he maintains perfect
balance the aid of the caesura with 5 words coming before and after the pause. Both phrases also
end with the words “align” and “balance” show he indeed show his ability to align words in a poem.
This symmetry in line 16 is clearly important and shows how he has actually grown as a writer
through the poem itself. He then remarks that “one day” he’ll tell the man of his struggles. The fact
that he will do this “one day” perhaps shows his desire but also his hesitation as he is not actually
connecting to this man at the moment and they remain strangers. He considers the “weight” of
words and the “balance” and the “measure of their rhyme” all essential components of poetry and
tyres.
Conclusion
This poem takes a neighborhood scene and invests it with magic and power. Bob Orr shows how
one can find inspiration in the smallest of things and that balancing tyres can even be compared with
balancing words in prose. The eloquent imagery and figurative language shows Orr’s mastery of his craft
but also shows how words can powerfully portray the human condition and the challenges but eventual
victory of poetic expression!