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The bar chart presents the participation rates of Australian children aged 5 to 14 in five pastime activities, highlighting a preference for sedentary entertainment among both genders. All respondents reported watching TV and films, with approximately 80% of boys and 60% of girls playing video games. While around 70% of boys cycle, more than half of girls prefer arts and crafts, with skateboarding being the least popular among girls.

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Writing Task 1 Practice 2

The bar chart presents the participation rates of Australian children aged 5 to 14 in five pastime activities, highlighting a preference for sedentary entertainment among both genders. All respondents reported watching TV and films, with approximately 80% of boys and 60% of girls playing video games. While around 70% of boys cycle, more than half of girls prefer arts and crafts, with skateboarding being the least popular among girls.

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The bar chart illustrates what proportions of Australian youngsters aged from 5 to

14 years in both genders participate in five pastime activities. In an overall view,


most of boys and girls tend to spend time on sedentary entainment activities beside
physical or creative activivities.
First come the sedentary pastimes, surprisingly, all of the respondents confirm they
watch TV and films. Moreover, more boys are reported to be involved in playing
video or computer games. These young gamers account for a large proportion,
approximately 80% in boys and about 60% in girls.
In the other activities, some 70% of boys join in cycling while less than half of
them join in skateboarding or rollerblading and artcraft. Cycling is also a popular
choice for girls’ leisure activities. However, in contrast to boys’ preference, more
than half of girls enjoy doing arts or crafts. Skateboarding is also the least popular
activity for girls.

Correction:
The provided bar chart illustrates the participation percentages of Australian
children aged 5 to 14, categorized by gender, in five different pastime activities.
Overall, it is evident that the majority of both boys and girls engage in sedentary
entertainment activities, rather than physical or creative pursuits.

To begin with, it is surprising to note that all respondents confirmed their


involvement in watching TV and films. Additionally, a larger proportion of boys
reported playing video games or using computers. These young gamers represent
approximately 80% of boys and around 60% of girls.

Turning to the other activities, around 70% of boys participate in cycling, while
less than half of them engage in skateboarding or rollerblading, as well as arts and
crafts. Cycling is also a popular choice among girls for leisure activities. However,
unlike boys, more than half of girls enjoy arts and crafts, making it their
preferred pastime. Notably, skateboarding is the least favored activity for girls.

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