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From: CEO

(Reader) To: MEMBERS

(Purpose) Why: GIVE INFORMATION

From: BOSS

(Reader) To: EMPLOYEES

(Purpose) Why: MAKE AN INVITATION

From: FRIEND

(Reader) To: FRIEND

(Purpose) Why: MAKE AN INVITATION


Example
Who will you write to?

What will you write about?

1- READER? Purpose? (Reading the email)


2- Notes (important points):
- Congratulations!
- Problem: can’t decide between comp. Game or
clothes.
- Comparison games and clothes.
- Specifc advice on a game or clothing (description)
3- organize ideas in paragraphs.
4- writing.
•How’s it going? •Oh, by the way, 
•How are you doing?  •Hey, did you hear about…?
•How are things? •One more thing, 
•How are things going? •As for
•It’s great to hear from you! •By the way, tell me about
•Long time, no see!
•Sorry I haven’t written for ages, but •Well, I gotta go now. 
•I’m really sorry it’s taken me so long to get back to you.  •Anyway, I should get going. 
•I’ve got to leave you now. 
•I’d better get going. 
•I’m glad to hear that •Well, it’s time to go
•I’m so happy that •Make sure you write soon
•Great news about your •Don’t forget to drop me a line soon. 
•I’m very happy to hear about •Look after yourself.
•It’s so great that  •Take care of your self.

•I’m so sorry to hear about


•Sorry to read about
•I can’t tell you how sad I am that
•I’m extremely sorry to hear about
•It’s just awful to hear that
•All my love, 
•Love,
•Lots of love,
•All the best,
•Take care,
•Best wishes, 
•Best, 
•Regards,
•Kind regards,  
Work on 3.

Fully informed (covered all the points in the writing)


Con Relevant information

Com Style
Effectiveness

Paragraphs
Org
(punctuation, linkers, simple and complex senteces)

Comparatives, superlatives
Phrasal verbs
Lan Tenses
Specific vocabulary ( clothes and videogames)
Bad example
Example Who? What?
Hi

CON:

COM:

ORG:

LAN:

TOTAL:

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