Corruption is official malfeasance for personal gain. All forms of the government are susceptible to corruption.

It
has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three reasons
Firstly, Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many places. The
daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments
or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get
some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere
Furthermore, the actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end when
the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen
in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the
end of 2004, Probo Sutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung, which becomes the
highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture.
Do you like it?
Finally, he citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which people have
opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street
when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught
by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words,
the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the
rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon
by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this
country?
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 Corruption is official malfeasance for personal gain. All forms of the government are susceptible to corruption. It has
happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three reasons
Firstly, Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many places. The
daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments
or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get
some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere
Furthermore, the actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end when
the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen
in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the
end of 2004, Probo Sutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung, which becomes the
highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture.
Do you like it?
Finally, the citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which people have
opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street
when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught
by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words,
the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the
rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon
by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this
country?
 Corruption becomes bad cultures in Indonesia for
Thesis
three reasons

Corruption happen in The citizens have no

many places The actions to eliminate goodwill to fight against the Arguments
corruption are weak corruption

We can conclude that corruption

is becoming a bad culture in Conclusion
Indonesia if it is not ended soon
by all of us.
 Language Features
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example: About 50 thousands people die every year in Britain as direct result of smoking.
In my opinion elementary school teacher works hard.
English is the world’s most important language.

Using evaluative language

It is important to persuade people to agree with the writer's opinion
e.g. valuable, important, better, worst, true, important, obvious etc.

Using causal conjunction

e.g. : because, therefore, consequently, although, as a result, because,
consequently, despite, due to, by, for that reason, in order, otherwise, since, so, so
that, therefore, though, thus, unless, etc.
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In a word, … On the whole, … furthermore etc.
In brief, … Altogether, …
To sum up, …etc In all, …
 Corruption is official malfeasance for personal gain. All forms of the government are susceptible to corruption.
Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three reasons
Firstly, Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many places. The
daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments
or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get
some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere
Furthermore, the actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end when
the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen
in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the
end of 2004, Probo Sutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung, which becomes the
highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture.
Do you like it?
Finally, he citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which people have
opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street
when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught
by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words,
the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the
rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon
by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this
country?
 Corruption is official malfeasance for personal gain. All forms of the government are susceptible to corruption.
Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three reasons
Firstly, Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many places. The
daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments
or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get
some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere
Furthermore, the actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end when
the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen
in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the
end of 2004, Probo Sutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung, which becomes the
highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture.
Do you like it?
Finally, the citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which people have
opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street
when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught
by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words,
the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the
rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon
by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this
country?
 Analyze language feature of the text below.
There are many natural disasters caused by bad environment quality, like landslides and floods. Most of the
disasters are caused by our irresponsible activities towards our surrounding environments. For example, the practice of
illegal logging is still continuing and a few of us keep throwing garbage into rivers and lakes. Therefore, we need to
change our attitute towards the environment. Why should we care for the environment? Here are the reasons.
A clean environment is essential for healthy living. If we don’t care about the environment, it will become
polluted with contaminants and toxins, which may harmfully affect our health. We may suffer from asthma and
bronchitis due to poor air pollution, or gastrointestinal illness and neurological disorders due to water pollution.
Besides, the overall tempertature of Earth’s atmosphere is increasing. This can lead to frequent occurrences
of dangerous weather patterns and devastating storms. Global warming and climate change are real. The change in
greenhouse gas concentration causes global warming and affects the climate.
Thus, climate change may affect human health, agriculture, water resources, forests, wildlife, and coastal areas.
Third, biodiversity is important. For your information, biodiversity refers to the variety of plants, animals,
and other living things in our world. If something happens to certain organism, it may lead to a loss of biodiversity,
which may negativel affect our necessities. The greater the opportunity for discoveries that could make our world a
much better place. Let’s do what we can to prevent the loss of biodiversity.
Nature goes us so many things for free. It gives us clean air, clean water, beautiful landscape, breathtaking
views, and the list goes on. We take so much from nature, but what do we give in return? Protecting and preserve it
show our appreciation because Earth is where we live

Simple present Causal conjunction

Evaluative language Connector
 Analyze the structure of the text below.

There are many natural disasters caused by bad environment quality, like landslides and floods. Most of the
disasters are caused by our irresponsible activities towards our surrounding environments. For example, the practice of
illegal logging is still continuing and a few of us keep throwing garbage into rivers and lakes. Therefore, we need to
change our attitute towards the environment. Why should we care for the environment? Here are the reasons.
A clean environment is essential for healthy living. If we don’t care about the environment, it will become
polluted with contaminants and toxins, which may harmfully affect our health. We may suffer from asthma and
bronchitis due to poor air pollution, or gastrointestinal illness and neurological disorders due to water pollution.
Besides, the overall tempertature of Earth’s atmosphere is increasing. This can lead to frequent occurrences
of dangerous weather patterns and devastating storms. Global warming and climate change are real. The change in
greenhouse gas concentration causes global warming and affects the climate.
Thus, climate change may affect human health, agriculture, water resources, forests, wildlife, and coastal areas.
Third, biodiversity is important. For your information, biodiversity refers to the variety of plants, animals,
and other living things in our world. If something happens to certain organism, it may lead to a loss of biodiversity,
which may negativel affect our necessities. The greater the opportunity for discoveries that could make our world a
much better place. Let’s do what we can to prevent the loss of biodiversity.
Nature goes us so many things for free. It gives us clean air, clean water, beautiful landscape, breathtaking
views, and the list goes on. We take so much from nature, but what do we give in return? Protecting and preserve it
show our appreciation because Earth is where we live
There are many natural disasters caused by bad environment quality, like landslides and floods. Most of the disasters
are caused by our irresponsible activities towards our surrounding environments. For example, the practice of illegal
logging is still continuing and a few of us keep throwing garbage into rivers and lakes. Therefore, we need to change our
attitute towards the environment. Why should we care for the environment? Here are the reasons.
 
A clean environment is essential for healthy living. If we don’t care about the environment, it will become polluted
with contaminants and toxins, which may harmfully affect our health. We may suffer from asthma and bronchitis due to
poor air pollution, or gastrointestinal illness and neurological disorders due to water pollution.
 
Besides, the overall tempertature of Earth’s atmosphere is increasing. This can lead to frequent occurrences of
dangerous weather patterns and devastating storms. Global warming and climate change are real. The change in
greenhouse gas concentration causes global warming and affects the climate. Thus, climate change may affect human
health, agriculture, water resources, forests, wildlife, and coastal areas.
 
Third, biodiversity is important. For your information, biodiversity refers to the variety of plants, animals, and other
living things in our world. If something happens to certain organism, it may lead to a loss of biodiversity, which may
negatively affect our necessities. The greater the opportunity for discoveries that could make our world a much better
place. Let’s do what we can to prevent the loss of biodiversity.

Nature gives us so many things for free. It gives us clean air, clean water, beautiful landscape, breathtaking views, and
the list goes on. We take so much from nature, but what do we give in return? Protecting and preserve it show our
appreciation because Earth is where we live
 Why should we care for the environment? Thesis

A clean environment the overall tempertature of

is essential for biodiversity is important Earth’s atmosphere is Arguments
healthy living. increasing.

Protecting and preserve it show

our appreciation because Earth Conclusion
is where we live
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