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CARMELA COCCIMIGLIO
KJA ISAACSON
NEWTON ON HOW HE DISCOVERED TRUTH
1. Ambiguity
2. Vagueness
3. Wordiness
TODAY’S DOCUMENTS
Emails
Letters
(B&M 61)
AMBIGUOUS: WHAT DOES “IT” REFER TO?
(B&M 61)
AMBIGUITY RESOLVED
The microprocessor interfaced directly with
the 7055 RAM chip. The 7055 runs at 5 MHz.
What is confusing?
DANGLING MODIFIERS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSoUf8hFxP0
WHO IS THE FATHER?
QUEEN
Hamlet, thou hast thy father much offended.
HAMLET
Mother, you have my father much offended.
BUT IN TECHNICAL WRITING . . .
HIV Treatments
AIDS denial
VAGUENESS IN SUMMER JOB APPLICATIONS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dHHYZupZd
K8&feature=related
STOPPING BY WOODS ON A SNOWY EVENING
Not so brilliant . . .
WORDINESS
Cluttering your writing with unnecessary
words.
For example:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7eR7AqvUk
I
Is/are
Was/were
Has/have/has
(Buckley 380)
HOW TO GET RID OF A WEAK VERB?
Hey there professor Jolie,
Hi Professor Jolie,
Hello Professor Jolie,
Dear Professor Jolie,
Professor Jolie,
SIGNATURES
Sincerely,
Best regards,
Thanks,
Many thanks,
All the best,
Cheers,
AN ANGRY EMAIL
6 shut-off valves with reverse thread, No. 21360-2A
IMPROVED (CONTINUED)
However, on October 7 I receive the following (see you shop order
No. 39273):
6 spigshots, No. 34116-3B
8 shut-off valves, No. 21300-2A
Please ship two additional spigshots to us, and inform us how you
want us to return the two extra shut-off valves.
Jim Hatley
LETTERS: PYRAMID WRITING STRUCTURE
http://www.rgilearning.com/pyramid_writing.htm
THE HERO SPEAKS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IvTT29cavKo
With reference to . .
In answer to . . .
Due to . . .
DO NOT
start with redundant expressions
I am writing . . .
My name is . . .
AN ENGAGING BEGINNING: CONVEYS INTEREST AND CARE
Dear Ben,
I read your report with interest and agree with
all but one of your recommendations.
AVOID WORDS THAT ANTAGONISE