topic or idea. • The sentences in the paragraph explain and develop the main topic. • It contains (3) three basic parts: • topic sentence, supporting details, and concluding statement. Topic Sentence • refers to the main point of the writer. Also called the main idea. • It should be clear and specific. • Vague or general words should be avoided. 1. That was a good movie. 2. I felt bad when I woke up. 3. They say that both of the party candidates will lose if they do not stop inlting one another. 4. She is really smart. 1.at this point 1.now
2.due to the fact that 2.because
3. in spite of the fact 3. even though
that 4. with regard to 4. regarding, about Two parts of Topic Sentence • Topic • Controlling idea. • Identify the topic and the controlling idea.
Common holiday practices have negative
impacts on the environment. Topic: impact of common holiday practices on the environment. Study the following sentences below. Write the topic in the first column and the controlling ideas in the second column. Topic Controlling idea 1. Recycling paper lessen can lessen Recycling deforestation deforestation paper 2. People spend People during spend unreasonably during the holiday unreasonably the holiday season. season SUPPORTING DETAILS
Refer to the sentences that develop the main idea of
the paragraph.
The supporting details make up the most part of the
paragraph. Conclusion • The purpose is to summarize the ideas, provide comments or suggestions, and give the paragraph proper closure. • The writer reiterates the topic sentence by rephrasing it or rewording some of its parts. Conclusion
• Indeed, common holiday practices can lead to
negative environmental impacts. It is important to become aware of these consequences to enjoy the holidays without compromising the environment. Complete the topic sentence by adding controlling idea to the given topic.
1. using gift wrappers
2. electric Christmas lights and lanterns 3. travelling during holidays 4. Christmas decorations made of recycled materials 5. eco-friendly celebration PROPERTIES OF WELL-WRITTEN TEXT ACCEPT-EXCEPT ANY ONE-ANYONE
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3. COHERENCE - a paragraph should comprise ideas or details that are logically arranged.
- The presentation of ideas should be
clear order and makes sense to the readers. Compare the two paragraphs • For me, the worst thing about waiting tables is the uniform. All the waitresses had to wear brown stripped jumper. The shirts were polyester. Sometimes someone you know comes in. Now I have a job in the office. For me, the worst thing about waiting tables was the uniform. At the last place I worked, all the waitresses had to wear an ugly brown stripped jumper. Underneath it we had to wear an even uglier polyester shirt. Sometimes someone I knew would come in and I'd feel embarrased by my outfit. Now I have a job in an office, where I can wear my own clothes. 4. COHESION - Refers to the smooth flow of ideas in the paragraph. - it is achieved when the writer can smoothly transition one sentence to another. COHESION and COHERENCE
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