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Secondary Education

Grade 12
Eng. 302
New Language Leader 3
Unit 11: Cultures
Lesson 5
Formal Correspondence
Objectives

By the end of these two lessons, you should be able to…


• review the key features of a formal letter.
• write a formal letter (applying for a job) based on a given
advertisement.
What is a formal correspondence?
A letter
that is written in official situations or
to senior people.
Classify the purposes of writing letters:
-stating personal views/ experiences -inviting a friend to your birthday party.
(at work).
-Complaining about something. -asking your friend for a favour.

-Requesting / asking for information. -applying for something.

Formal Purposes Informal Purposes

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Check your answers
Formal Purposes Informal Purposes

-stating personal views / -Stating personal views /


experiences (at work). experiences.

-complaining about -Asking your friend for a


something. favour.
-Requesting / asking for
-requesting / asking for
information.
information.
-Applying for a job. -Inviting a friend to your
birthday party.

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Choose the correct writing style for each type of writing:
(formal/informal)
• Avoid contractions, e.g. I’m formal

• Use phrasal verbs, e.g. call back informal

• Longer words instead of shorter, e.g. information (not facts) formal

• Abbreviations, e.g. thx (= thanks) informal


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Complete the expressions below with words from the box.

writing enclosed worked forward contacted reference future

forward to hearing from you in the near ………….


1- I look …………… future .
Conclusion
writing
2- I am ………….. with ….……..
reference to (your advertisement). Introduction

3- Please find enclosed


………. a copy of my CV.
Introduction
contacted Conclusion
4- I can be ……………. on the above phone number at any time.

5- In fact, I have …………….


worked as an administrative assistant at Bank for the past

five years. Body


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The layout of a formal letter

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Heading
Your Address

The Date

The company’s
address

Greeting

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Introduction

Purpose of writing

Why am I interested
to get the job?

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Body

Qualifications/
certificates and work
experience(s).

Personal
qualities

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Conclusion

Closing remarks

Signing off

Signature

Your name

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Greeting
Dear Sir/Madam,

For example:

Dear Sir,
Dear Madam,

Dear Mr./Mrs./Miss./Ms./Dr. + full name,

For example:

Dear Ms. Mariam Adnan Ahmed,


Dear Dr. Adnan Ahmed,
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Introduction
1- Purpose of writing: (Main message)

For example:

I am writing this letter in connection with your


advertisement in Instagram to apply for the position of a
teacher.

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Introduction

2- Why am I interested to get the job?

For example:
I am interested in this job because:
• you offer higher chances of personal and
professional growth.
• of the reputation of your company.
• I have always dreamt to work in an educational
sector.

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Body

3- Qualifications/ certificates, practical skills and work


experience(s).

For example:

• I have a diploma in Teaching. Qualifications/ certificates


• In fact, I have worked as an administrative assistant at a Bank
for the past five years. work experience(s)
• I have computer and communication skills as well. practical skills

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Body

4- personal qualities. (personality adjectives.)

For example:
• well-organised
• patient
• fast learner
• hard-worker
• flexible
• I can work for a long period of time.
• I can work under pressure.
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Conclusion

5- Closing remarks: (future contact.)

For example:

• I look forward to hearing from you.


• I would appreciate a reply as soon as possible.
• I hope my application will be taken into consideration.
• I am available for an interview at your convenience.

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Conclusion
* Signing off

For example:

• Yours sincerely,
If you know the name of the person you are writing to.
• Yours faithfully,
If you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.

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Conclusion
* Signature
* Your name and contact information

For example:

Ms. Mariam Adnan Ahmed


T: 1212121
E: MAA@gmail.com
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A writing sample

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Heading
Your Address

The Date

The company’s Al-Salam Secondary School


address Manama, Bahrain

Greeting Dear Ms. Mariam Adnan Ahmed,

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Introduction

I am writing this letter with reference to your


Purpose of writing
advertisement in Instagram to apply for the
position of a teacher.

Why am I interested I am interested in this job because I have always


to get the job? dreamt to work in an educational sector.

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Body
I have a Bachelor in Math. In fact, I have worked as an
assistant teacher at a school for the past five years.
Qualifications/certificates,
Actually, I have learnt several things like being patient
practical skills and punctual. My role is to provide support for the
and work experience(s). teacher I was working with and my colleagues as well.
That is why I think I am a good match for this job.
I have computer and communication skills as well.

I am well-organised and patient. I am also a fast


learner, I can work for a long period of time and
Personal qualities
under pressure.
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Conclusion
Closing remarks I look forward to hearing
from you.

Signing off

Signature

Your name Ms. Nada Hassan


Email: NH@gmail.com
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A writing question: Holiday job

Write a letter of application, Do you want to earn some extra


money?
based on the advertisement,
Do you speak another language?
applying for this job. Are you confident and easy-going?
We need French, German and Spanish
Your name Noor Ali. speakers to work for us in
The City Museum Shop.
From Tuesday to Thursday

Send your application letters to


CityMuseum@bh.com

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Thank you for your
perseverance and hard work

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