Professional Documents
Culture Documents
20UC1101
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Lesson Name
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VIDEO LINKS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NBuw9YNP_6A
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y50xhHQ8Qf0
Lesson Name
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DOs and DON’Ts in Professional Emails
DOs
Have a professional email id
ammulovely@gmail.com
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Four Basic Points in Email
1.Subject line
2.Greeting
3.Email-text
4.Closing
Subject Line
Poor
Examples
Subje Hello
ct:
Subje Dear Garry
ct:
Good
Examples
Requesting a Meeting
Subje
ct: Cancelling My Order
Subje
Greetings
•Formal
•Professional
• Dear Sir/Madam,
• Dear Chris,
• Dear Professor/CEO/Director
• Dear Sales Team/Marketing Team
Email Text
•Main Message
•All necessary details
•Remain Brief
•One or Two paragraphs (Each
paragraph-3 to 4 sentences)
Closing
• Keep it Short and Simple
• Regards,
• Best Regards,
• Followed by Signature:
Name
Fax/Phone no
Organization & Style
•Use Your Own Words
•Use Your Own Message
•Say Only what is Needed
•Avoid excess use of Adjectives and
Adverbs
•Avoid Passive Voice
•Be Precise
Words to Avoid
•Must
•Should
•Demand
•Require
•Necessity
Well what is “Bcc” & “Cc”?
Bcc: Cc:
•Is short for Blind Carbon Copy •Is short for Carbon Copy
•Blind Carbon copied recipients are •More than 1 addressees can be in
NOT visible to anyone but the this field (separate them with
sender commas)
•Use this to send mails to a backup •Carbon copied recipients ARE visible
mail repository to all other recipients
•Should not be used as a spying •Usually used when others are
device but only to protect the referenced in the email or for those
privacy of email addresses (ethical you want included in the
violation?) conversation
Example of CC vs. BCC
Dear Ashley,
Thank you for your support with the meeting. I will inform you of the results
as soon as the files get posted.
Tomorrow’s agenda will be available first thing Monday morning. Please
review the details with Janet and Nina.
Thank you,
Jonathan Grove
Assistant Manager
Summer Fun Company
23087 Meli Road
North Park, IL 62545
630-989-5224
Punctuation
• Apostrophe • Exclamation Mark
Don’t use can’t and Only once in an
wouldn’t
email
Use cannot and would • Quotation Marks
not Only for direct
• Comma speech
Use only when there is
a pause while reading
• Emoticon
Capitalization
•Proper Nouns
•People & Titles
•Media Titles
Business Email Rules – During Assessment
Spend 10 minutes to Write an Email
Respond to all the points mentioned in the Question
Will not be evaluated if Email hasless than 70 words
Use 70 to 80 words
Name of the sender and receiver should be given.
Use the points to be mentioned in the given sequence.
Tense should not change.
Use 7 minutes for writing and 3 minutes for proofreading.
Write XYZ if no name is given for Sender.
AVOID USING ‘AND’ .
USE SMALL SENTENCES.
Sending emails
Opening phrases Closing Phrases
1. This email is in reply to your 1. Please contact me again if you need
email any further information.
2. Thank you for your letter dated 2. Do let me know if I can be of any
May 14th concerning … . further assistance.
3. Thanks for your email ... . 3. I look forward to hearing from you.
4. Following our telephonic
conversation ... .
Reason for writing...
This letter/ email is to ... .
I am writing to ... .
I am pleased to ... .
Could you please ... .
Would you please ... .
Please email me ... .
Just a quick note to ... .
I am sorry to inform you ... .
Unfortunately ... .
I’m sorry about ... .
I apologize for ... .
Be Polite
Close your message with "Regards," "Yours sincerely,
Sample Email
Dear Mr. Blankship ,
The invoice we received yesterday from your office was dated 25
February. The date mentioned is incorrect .The original invoice is
attached herewith which bears the date as 28 February. Please correct
the date and resend the invoice. This will help us to send the funds
promptly by the end of the day.
Regards,
Isabelle
Use the given hints and write an email