EFFECT ESSAY ANALYSIS

WHAT ARE THE EFFECTS OF ENERGY DRINKS?

 INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH

Nobody can deny the fact that young people need to have
1. Does the more energy for their activities. This is because young
paragraph start people live faster than old people. Sometimes, they think
with general that their energy is inadequate. Therefore, they can use
statements? If
yes, what
various methods to boost their energy such as energy
strategy is used drinks. Energy drinks have some negative effects on
to write general young people, two of which are addiction and financial
statements? stress.
 INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH

Nobody can deny the fact that young people need

to have more energy for their activities. This is
because young people live faster than old people.
General
Statements Sometimes, they think that their energy is
inadequate. Therefore, they can use various
methods to boost their energy such as energy
drinks. Energy drinks have some negative effects
Reasons for on young people, two of which are addiction and
energy need
financial stress.
 INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH

Nobody can deny the fact that young people need to have
more energy for their activities. This is because young
people live faster than old people. Sometimes, they think
2. Does the that their energy is inadequate. Therefore, they can use
paragraph have various methods to boost their energy such as energy
a clear thesis drinks. Energy drinks have some negative effects on
statement with young people, two of which are addiction and financial
subtopics? stress.
 INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH

Nobody can deny the fact that young people need

to have more energy for their activities. This is
(1) addiction
because young people live faster than old people.
(2) financial Sometimes, they think that their energy is
stress inadequate. Therefore, they can use various
methods to boost their energy such as energy
drinks. Energy drinks have some negative effects
Thesis on young people, two of which are addiction and
Statement
financial stress.
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PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy drinks on young
people. Young people who drink them want to have more doses. To
illustrate, most of the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes people addicted.
Another point is that this addiction can cause some negative feelings in
3. Is there a
clear topic their lives. Young people think that they do not do anything without
sentence in this
energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction could be the most
paragraph?
devastating effect of energy drinks on young people.
 1st BODY
PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy
drinks on young people. Young people who drink
them want to have more doses. To illustrate, most of
the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes
people addicted. Another point is that this addiction
can cause some negative feelings in their lives.
Young people think that they do not do anything
without energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction
could be the most devastating effect of energy drinks
on young people.
 1st BODY
PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy drinks on young
people. Young people who drink them want to have more doses. To
illustrate, most of the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes people addicted.
4. Are there at Another point is that this addiction can cause some negative feelings in
least two
their lives. Young people think that they do not do anything without
supporting
ideas? If yes, energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction could be the most
what are they?
devastating effect of energy drinks on young people.
 1st BODY
PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy drinks on young
people. Young people who drink them want to have more doses. To
illustrate, most of the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes people addicted.
Another point is that this addiction can cause some negative feelings in
1- craving for
more their lives. Young people think that they do not do anything without
2- negative
energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction could be the most
feelings
devastating effect of energy drinks on young people.
 1st BODY
PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy drinks on young
people. Young people who drink them want to have more doses. To
illustrate, most of the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes people addicted.
5. Are there
supporting Another point is that this addiction can cause some negative feelings in
details and
their lives. Young people think that they do not do anything without
examples for
each supporting energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction could be the most
idea? If yes,
devastating effect of energy drinks on young people.
what are they?
 1st BODY
PA R A G R A P H
Addiction is regarded to be the first effect of energy drinks on young
people. Young people who drink them want to have more doses. To
illustrate, most of the energy drinks have caffeine in their content.
details
Caffeine is accepted as a substance that makes people addicted.
Another point is that this addiction can cause some negative feelings in
their lives. Young people think that they do not do anything without
details energy drinks and feel nervous. Addiction could be the most
devastating effect of energy drinks on young people.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
6. Is there a which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
clear topic
sentence in this lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
paragraph? quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
7. Are there at
least two which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
supporting lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
ideas? If yes,
what are they? quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
- difficulty energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
buying these
drinks which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
- family
problems quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
8. Are there energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
supporting
details and which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
examples for lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
each supporting
idea? If yes, quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
what are they? For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 2nd BODY
PA R A G R A P H

Financial stress is another effect of energy drinks on young people.

People generally have a small budget for their basic needs. The price of
detail energy drinks is high, so they may have difficulty buying these drinks,
which might lead to financial stress. Another fact is that this stress may
lead to other family problems. This is because money affects the
detail
quality of life, and nobody wants to live on a limited amount of money.
For all of these reasons, financial stress can be accepted as a negative
effect of energy drinks.
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

9. Does this
paragraph start In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of
with an consuming energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young
appropriate
connecting people. People can live without energy drinks; in this way, they
word? will probably have a healthier and happier lives.
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of

consuming energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young
people. People can live without energy drinks; in this way, they
will probably have a healthier and happier lives.
● All in all, ● In
brief,
● To conclude, ● In
short,
● To summarize,
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

10. Does it
include a In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of
concluding consuming energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young
sentence which
paraphrases the people. People can live without energy drinks; in this way, they
thesis statement? will probably have a healthier and happier lives.
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of consuming

energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young people. People can
live without energy drinks; in this way, they will probably have a healthier
and happier lives.

Topic Sentence: Energy drinks have some negative

effects on young people, two of which are addiction and
financial stress.
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

11. Is there a final

comment with a In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of
message consuming energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young
/suggestion/
warning or people. People can live without energy drinks; in this way, they
concern? will probably have a healthier and happier lives.
 CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

In conclusion, addiction and financial stress are the results of

consuming energy drinks, and they have negative effects on young
people. People can live without energy drinks; in this way, they will
advice
probably have a healthier and happier lives.