HOW TO WRITE AN

EFFECT PARAGRAPH
To remember the paragraph outline…
 WHAT ARE SOME OF THE NEGATIVE RESULTS
OF USING A CELLPHONE TOO MUCH?
Health
Problems

Using a
cellphone
too much

Wasting Car
money Accidents
 Analyze the outline of the paragraph below
The number of people using a cell phones is increasing rapidly day by day and it
is a well-known fact that using a cell phone has a lot of negative effects on
humans. Firstly, it can cause health problems such as cancer owing to radiation.
Even though you don't use it actively, you have the risk of cancer because you live
your life next to a cell phone. Secondly, people who use a smart phone always
want to have a better phone even though their phones work perfectly. Therefore,
the amount of wasteful expenses go up for these people when they allocate money
for a new phone. To give an example, Iphone 11 Pro Max and Galaxy S11 which
are very expensive cell phones are being sold in high numbers despite their prices.
Finally, car accidents which cause hundreds to die may result from using cell
phones on the go. Thus, police officers always stop people who talk on their cell
phones while they're driving. In short, there are many disadvantages of using a
cell phone in spite of enabling us to communicate with other people. (Student
Sample)
 BE CAREFUL!
Do not use informal/slang language!

Yeah, today’s kids watch too much telly.

Avoid contractions and spoken forms!

I’m gonna talk about..