Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Extra curricular
• Try and focus on transferrable skills
• Selection criteria for other four universities
With the person next to you, decide who is person A
and who is person B
“After reading John Donne's "The Flea", I was intrigued by his choice to
represent love for a woman through the conceit of a parasite, eating
away at himself. I saw this as an example of Donne's alleged misogyny
furthering the stereotype of women as "cruel and sudden", in contrast
to his predecessors who idealized and even worshipped them.
However, I think it is equally interesting to consider the view expressed
by Ilona Bell that Donne does not present the woman as singularly
cruel, but as being capable of independent thought and challenging
patriarchal authority, even if Donne himself viewed that in a negative
light and considered it a perversion of gender roles.”
“I find human and cell biology interesting and
this inspired me to read 'Genome' by Matt
Ridley. It explained each chromosome and its
relationship to a part of human history or a
disease. The chapter on stress was especially
interesting, but what really intrigued me was
the section on cancer.
“I find human and cell biology interesting and this inspired me to read 'Genome' by Matt Ridley
.(1) It explained each chromosome and its relationship to a part of human history or a disease.
The chapter on stress was especially interesting, but what really intrigued me was the section
on cancer.(2) This led to me reading 'The Emperor of All Maladies' by Siddhartha Mukherjee
which I enjoyed, as it included cases rather than just being a history of cancer.(3) The book
demonstrated how current treatments were developed and tested.(4) I also enjoy
documentaries such as Inside Birmingham Children's Hospital and Obesity: The Post Mortem,
and articles from BBC Health which have given me further insight into medical issues.”
Medicine
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the Same “Biology is a facsinating
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wear it might be going.”
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This February I attended a taster lecture at Oxford University focussing on the usefulness
of lasers in visualising nature (1,2). I was intrigued to see the role that technology plays
in being able to visualise things on a cellular level, particularly the role of fluorescence
(3). The ability to use adaptations from other organisms (e.g. the GFP gene from
Jellyfish) to see the inner workings of the cell, is incredibly powerful. Subsequently I
accessed the Cell Library Online to explore other examples of fluorescent labelling of cell
components, e.g. LipidTOX to visualise fat stores (5).
2. Giving specific details about activities you have done, and insights you have gained, is
TRUE more important than listing more activities.
3. The personal statement is about showing your personality so it should focus on your
FALSE hobbies and interests as opposed to your academic activities.
5. Personal statements should include a paragraph where you take a specific topic you are
TRUE interested in and analyse it in detail.
Some common things
to edit:
• Meet the subject criteria
• Opening paragraph
• Critical Thinking
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Stepping stones
UP Concise language