The document discusses comma splices, which is the incorrect use of a comma to join two independent clauses. It provides an example of a comma splice and then lists 5 ways to fix a comma splice, such as making the sentence into two separate sentences, adding a semicolon or conjunction, or revising the sentence structure.
The document discusses comma splices, which is the incorrect use of a comma to join two independent clauses. It provides an example of a comma splice and then lists 5 ways to fix a comma splice, such as making the sentence into two separate sentences, adding a semicolon or conjunction, or revising the sentence structure.
The document discusses comma splices, which is the incorrect use of a comma to join two independent clauses. It provides an example of a comma splice and then lists 5 ways to fix a comma splice, such as making the sentence into two separate sentences, adding a semicolon or conjunction, or revising the sentence structure.
COMMA SPLICES The incorrect use of a comma to join two independent clauses
Example: My family bakes together nearly every
night, we then get to enjoy everything we make together. FIX # 1 Make the sentence into two separate sentences. Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we then get to enjoy everything we make together.
Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night.
We then get to enjoy everything we make together. FIX # 2 Add a semicolon between the two sentences if the sentences are closely related.
Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we
then get to enjoy everything we make together.
Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night; we then
get to enjoy everything we make together. FIX #3
Revise the sentence and add subordinating conjunction in front of
the sentence. Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we then get to enjoy everything we make together.
Correct: Since my family bakes together nearly every night, we get
to enjoy everything we make together. FIX # 4
Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb (therefore, then,
however, consequently, etc.)
Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we
then get to enjoy everything we make together.
Correct:My family bakes together nearly every night; then, we
get to enjoy everything we make together. FIX # 5 Add a conjunction (FANBOYS) and a comma Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we then get to enjoy everything we make together.
Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night,