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COMMA SPLICES

COMMA SPLICES
 The incorrect use of a comma to join two
independent clauses

 Example: My family bakes together nearly every


night, we then get to enjoy everything we make
together.
FIX # 1
 Make the sentence into two separate sentences.
 Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night,
we then get to enjoy everything we make together.

Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night.


We then get to enjoy everything we make together.
FIX # 2
 Add a semicolon between the two sentences if the sentences
are closely related.

Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we


then get to enjoy everything we make together.

Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night; we then


get to enjoy everything we make together.
FIX #3

Revise the sentence and add subordinating conjunction in front of


the sentence.
Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we then
get to enjoy everything we make together.

Correct: Since my family bakes together nearly every night, we get


to enjoy everything we make together.
FIX # 4

 Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb (therefore, then,


however, consequently, etc.)

Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every night, we


then get to enjoy everything we make together.

Correct:My family bakes together nearly every night; then, we


get to enjoy everything we make together.
FIX # 5
 Add a conjunction (FANBOYS) and a comma
 Incorrect: My family bakes together nearly every
night, we then get to enjoy everything we make
together.

 Correct: My family bakes together nearly every night,


and we get to enjoy everything we make together.

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