Professional Documents
Culture Documents
OF A WELL-
WRITTEN
TEXT
Objectives:
Example:
Jane loves cooking, dancing, and
to eat.
Coherence is concerned with the
macro level features of a text, such
as topic sentences, thesis
statement the summary in the
concluding paragraph (dealt with
in the essay structure section), and
other 'bigger’ features including
headings such as those used in
reports.
Others to Avoid:
1. JARGON is occupation-specific
language used by people in a given
profession, the “shorthand” that
people in the same profession use to
communicate with each other.
Example:
● negative - results of a test that indicate a
tested condition not present (medical)
● berries and cherries - the lights on top
of a police car
2. CLICHÉ – expressions, idea or
phrase which has been used so
much that is no longer interesting
or effective or no longer has
much meaning.
Example:
● Don’t judge a book by its cover
● Good things come to those who
wait
3. EVERYDAY ABBREVATIONS
Example:
● photos
● fridge
● phone
● info
4. SLANG - the informal language of
conversation, text messages, and
other casual social communication
among friends.
Example:
● dude - guy
● buck - dollar
● chill - relax
● hot - attractive
5. NOT GENDER NEUTRAL
Policeman Police officer
Steward, Flight attendant
stewardess
Legislator,
Congressman congressional
representative
Example:
Last week was my sister’s wedding, so I
prepared to go to the salon for my
haircut.
d. Use commas after introductory
clauses, phrases, or words that
come before the main clause.
Example:
While I was waiting for the rain to
subside, suddenly there was a bolt of
lightning split the sky.
Example:
▪ Being on time, I have received an
incentive from my boss. (participial phrase)
Example:
▪ My favorite verse is Psalm 23:1
▪ Majority of the references that I cited were
taken from the Academic Journal 11:23
(volume 11, page 23)
b. Use a colon to introduce a
formal list
Example:
▪ Three things I have accomplished
today: answered modules,
e-mailed documents, and
researched enrichment activities.
Example: Oh God, I thank You.
Examples: