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The Art

of Tellin
g
Stories
11 katao, nawawala sa
San Miguel, Catanduanes
dahil sa baha at landslide

Tanong ni Sandra:
Paanong bumangon sa
isang malagim na
bangungot?
Hidilyn Diaz wins
Philippines’ first Olympic
gold medal with weightlifting

Anatomy of Gold
Mga Rekomendasyon sa
Araw ng mga Puso

PhilPost may pakulo


ngayong araw ng mga puso
FEATURE ARTICLE
Can be about any subject, from the
fluffiest lifestyle piece to the toughest
investigative report or anything written in
a feature-oriented way
 based on facts
FEATURE ARTICLE
news story that goes beyond the facts to
weave in a narrative and tell a compelling
story
 informs and inspires
 factual reporting but enjoys the freedom of
creative writing
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/tips-for-writing-a-captivating-feature-article
FIND
STORIES
Hook
Tension
Reflection
Payoff
 May inform, instruct, and advise, but its
primary purpose is to entertain
 May be of any length, ranging from long
magazine articles to the short human-
interest story
 May or may not be timely
 Rarely has a news lead instead,
it often has a novelty lead
 Usually has a striking opening
sentence that attracts the
reader’s interest
 Uses specific nouns, adjectives,
and verbs to create vivid images,
sounds, and feelings for the
readers
 Applies the principles of effective
writing: unity, coherence, and
emphasis
KAPAG SUMUSULAT
NG LATHALAIN
Ang manunulat ay humahanap ng
subject.
Nagtatanong ng ano naman? Bakit
ito ilalathala? Ano ang kahalagahan
nito?
News Feature
 in-depth story from a current
news
 digs deeper on the more
interesting angles of the news
which is still timely and relevant
Dealing with the nCoV Scare
The unabated rise in the number of confirmed novel coronavirus
(nCoV) cases, with figures spiking more than tenfold in a week’s time, can
be very alarming…
With the alarming rise in cases of the new virus which can travel at
lightning speed in this age of globalization, doing everything to prevent its
spread is essential. And to be repetitive over the need to observe personal
hygiene, especially on washing hands with soap and water as often as
necessary, it is also essential.
-Atty. Joey Lina
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YHHxTXne2o
Human Interest
 interesting humorous stories that touches
human’s inner feeling
 usually include anecdotes to make the reader
sympathize with people in the story
(anecdotes may include biographical data or
achievements of individuals, in some cases those
considered underdog of society
College Dropout Makes It Big in
Fashion
At 24, Mard Rancy is the only Filipino designer to be
certified this year by the global brand for crystals,
Swarovski, in using crystals from Austria for his personally-
designed gowns.
As such, he is included in the official magazine of
Swarovski, circulated in all its accredited partners and
growing industrial clienteles and retailers…
https://www.thedailysentry.net/2022/06/pinoy-tricycle-driver-viral-dahil.html
Personality Sketch
 articles that are based on interviews with
important men and women, such as
celebrities, businessmen, politicians, and
others
 to provide or give readers a behind-the-
scenes look at what a person is really like,
away from their public persona
Personality Sketch

 name
 personality
 background
 physical appearance
 environment
 hobbies
 influence on others
 anecdotes/observation
Personality Sketch

Angel Locsin:
More than
an angel, a true
hero for humanity

https://redcross.org.ph/2019/11/04/angel-locsin-more-than-an-angel-a-true-hero-for-humanity/
Practical Guidance/How-tos

helpful and educational articles on certain


topics that cater to specific target audiences
 usually comes with graphics, illustrations,
charts, and other visually appealing
materials
Practical Guidance/How-tos

25 Tricks to Study Faster and More Effectively


There’s an upcoming test tomorrow so
you settle down your thinking chair, a mug
of coffee as you plan to pull an all-nighter.
So you carefully get your book, and turn it
the coverage of the exam and you read the
first few lines. https://www.studypug.com/blog/how-to-study-faster/
Practical Guidance/How-tos

https://www.studypug.com/blog/how-to-
study-faster/
Practical Guidance/How-tos

https://www.happeninginphilippines.com/2020/03/milk-quarantea-paggawa-ng-home-made.html
Practical Guidance/How-tos

• How to Ace an Interview


• A Guide to Healthy
Living
• Tips to Fall Asleep
Holiday/Season Feature

 features that present


topics that are seasonal
and related to special
occasions
https://redcross.org.ph/2019/11/04/angel-locsin-more-than-an-angel-a-true-hero-for-humanity/
After a three-year hiatus, the revival of the
Panagbenga Festival this year in Baguio City is
proving people’s resilience from calamity, the
same reason why it was conceptualized nearly 30
years ago.

“After the killer earthquake in 1990, we


thought of a festival that the people of Baguio can
participate in and they can own which also aims to
bring in tourists for the economy to move again,”
said Mauricio Domogan, Baguio Flower Festival
Foundation Inc. lifetime chairperson.

The first festival in 1996 was a one-day


event. It was later extended to one week, further
expanded to two weeks, then a month….
https://ph.theasianparent.com/regalo-sa-pasko
Travel Sketch/Travelogue

presents a detailed description of one's


personal observations and thoughts
regarding the entire trip experience,
beginning with how one decided to set out
on a journey and moving on to
transportation, the people met along the way,
the terrain, and so forth
Travel Sketch/Travelogue

The Ultimate Travel Guide To Iloilo


The Pinoy Traveler
The people from Iloilo are known to be "malambing" (gentle, soft-
spoken) and that's the quality I love about Ilonggos. Aside from that, they
are friendly and accommodating. During my Iloilo trip, I talked to many
locals to ask for directions on how to go to several destinations. With their
help, my solo adventure in the province went very smoothly. So if you are
planning to visit Iloilo any time soon, let me share my Iloilo Travel
Guide.

https://www.thepinoytraveler.com/2021/04/the-ultimate-travel-guide-to-iloilo.html
Beautiful When It Rains
I sit by the dining table as I write this account. From time to time I stand
up to check on the fish I am cooking for breakfast. By now, the room should
have smelt of fish and oil combined, the odor sticking to my hair and pajamas.
But the scent of pine blown by the strong wind into the tiny cracks of the
window still prevailed.

It is beautiful in Baguio when it rains. I have written about it several


times in my blogs and I am writing about it again. Before I wrote that it is lonely
but beautiful. However, I am doing my best to put up with some “pick me up”
lines and “positivity and happy thoughts” stuff so this time I am writing – It is
beautiful and fascinating…
Travel Sketch/Travelogue
How to get to Iloilo
Airlines such as Philippine Airlines, Air Asia, and Cebu Pacific fly between
Manila and Iloilo. There are also available flights from Clark, Cebu, Davao,
Cagayan De Oro bound for Iloilo International Airport.
From the Iloilo Airport, you may take a jeepney, van, or taxi to reach the town
proper.
Another option to reach Iloilo is by ferry. Travel time from Manila to Iloilo
will take around 20 hours. There's also a ferry trip from Cebu, General Santos City,
Cagayan de Oro City, and Zamboanga City.
Getting around in Iloilo
Tricycles and jeepneys are the main modes of transportation in the city. Both of
these land transportation are available at any time of the day. Please make sure to
always check the signage to know the jeepney's route. There are also available
The Trend Story
 take the pulse of the culture at the moment,
looking at what’s new, fresh, and exciting in
the world of art, fashion, film, music, high
technology, and so on
 emphasis is usually on light, quick, easy-to-
read pieces that capture the spirit of whatever
new trend is being discussed
The Trend Story
 take the pulse of the culture at the moment,
looking at what’s new, fresh, and exciting in
the world of art, fashion, film, music, high
technology, and so on
 emphasis is usually on light, quick, easy-to-
read pieces that capture the spirit of whatever
new trend is being discussed
TITLE

INTRODUCTION

BODY

CONCLUSION
ANG EPEKTIBONG PAMAGAT AY
NAGSASALITA
MAY SINASABI! (CLEAR)
Sa pagbasa pa lang ng pamagat alam na kung
tungkol saan ito
MAY DATING! (COMPETITIVE)

Mararamdaman ng babasa na “Gusto kong basahin


ito!”
AN EFFECTIVE TITLE IS STRONG AND
POWERFUL!
Must establish the point of the feature story
Hindi ligoy, palabok, mema
STRAIGHT AND FORWARD

The elderly gay Filipinos who


perform in drag to survive
vs
Mga lola, pagod na!
Sweet Lovers’ Dilemma

Baguio, You’re Next!


PANIMULA (INTRODUCTION)

✔ The starting point of a feature story


✔ Must hook the readers
✔ Set the tone of the article
✔ Range: 1-5 sentences (depending on your
style)
✔ YOU MUST ESTABLISH YOUR POINT
HERE
IWASAN

Question Introduction
Have you ever been in love?

Nakaligo ka na ba sa dagat ng basura? Nagpasko ka


na ba sa gitna ng kalsada? Si Manny Villar nagawa
‘yan!
IWASAN

Sunod-sunod na pang-uri o paglalarawan


Mapula. Madumi. Malubak. ‘yan ang mukha ng
aking matalik na kaibigan.

Nabigo. Nasaktan. Bumangon. Naging teacher.


IWASAN

Sunod-sunod na pang-uri o paglalarawan


Amfee. Obese. Pimply. Ugly. Worthless piece
of trash. The world is better without you. These are
just some of the cruel words that greeted Mina one
Sunday morning when she checked her phone…
IWASAN

Quotation
A wise man once said, “Practice makes perfect.” But
then again no one’s perfect, so why practice?
IWASAN

Generic Statements
Learning to love yourself is the greatest love of all.
IWASAN
Literary
Sa bawat pagtilaok ng manok sa madaling araw,
nakadarama ako ng dagling pag-asa. Habang
humahampas ang malamig na simoy ng hangin ay
nabubuo sa akin ang panibagong lakas. Hindi alintana
ang bagwis ng pagsubok na darating sapagkat taglay
koý lakas na hindi mapapantayan ninuman.
Instead, do one of these…
EXAMPLE: (USING CONTRAST)
Dreams do come true: How an 80 year old Granpa
became a model

In fashion runaways, we used to seeing young and fresh-


faced models. However, Deshun Wang can still give these
18-year old catwalk heroes a run for their money. Tagged as
the ‘World’s Hottest Granpa’, all eyes are on him as he
becomes the only 80-year old model on the catwalk.
REINVENTING A SAYING
May asim pa si lolo: Ang pagtupad sa pangarap ng
tinaguriang “Hottest Granpa in the World”

Sa hinaba-haba ng kanyang naging prusisyon, sa rampa pa


rin ang kanyang naging tuloy. Animnapung taong naghintay
si Deshun Wang, 80, bago niya nakamit ang kanyang
inaasam-asam na pangarap- ang maging isang modelo.
ONE LINER
The Love Affair starring three penguins

Even penguins get involved in a love triangle.


ONE LINER
No Other ‘Penguin’: Ang love triangle sa mundo ng
mga penguin

Kahit silang mga penguin nakikiapid din.


ONE LINER
The elderly gay Filipinos who perform in drag to
survive

For Manila’s Golden Gays, drag is both a means of survival


and a glimmer of hope.
ONE LINER
Sa may bahay ang kanyang bati: Karoling ni Rufino
para sa kanyang kapatid

Para kay Rufino Tapdasan, 8, ang pangangaroling ay hindi


lamang isang paraan para ipagdiwang ang Kapaskuhan,
kundi isa ring paraan para matustusan ang siyam na
buwang gulang na kapatid.
AN EFFECTIVE BODY IS ORGANIZED
Coherent
- Details are related to the angle of
the subject
Cohesive
- Relationship between sentences and
paragraph
ANG KATAWAN (BODY)

✔ This is where the story angle comes in : Kapag


walang anggulo, magulo
✔ Stay focused
✔ Do not be overwhelmed by the details
✔ Stick to the point of your feature story
MGA DAPAT IWASAN SA PAGSULAT NG
LATHALAIN
maligoy

masalita

paggamit ng mga malalim na salita

Sobrang haba ng mga pangungusap at talata

Kulang sa dramatikong kalidad

Sabog ang pagkakaayos ng mga ideya


Criselda R. Gavilan
Ang mga manunulat ay hindi
maiwasang mag-iwan ng
hamon o stand sa
CONCLUSION
NOTE:

END WHERE
YOU STARTED!
INTRODUCTION: When he was young, Airick had set his eyes on one
thing: to be an Atenean.

CONCLUSION: Airick wasn’t bound to be an Atenean because God had


designed the most beautiful destiny for him that would make him his best: to be a
Thomasian.
TITLE: Sa may bahay ang kanyang bati: Karoling ni Rufino para sa
kanyang kapatid

INTRODUCTION: Para kay Rufino Tapdasan, 8, ang pangangaroling ay


hindi lamang isang paraan para ipagdiwang ang kapaskuhan, kundi isa ring paraan
para matustusan ang kaanyang siyam na buwang kapatid

CONCLUSION: Hindi maitatangging nasa murang edad pa lamang si


Rufino, mahina pa ang pangangatawan at isip. Ngunit, ang kanyang boses ang
magiging lakas niya upang ipagpatuloy ang pangarap kasama ang kanyang
minamahal na kapatid.
Sweet Lover’s Dilemma
-Rebecca Kelsey C. Famoso

Mang Dani bought his first jeepney 80 years ago for a hundred thousand pesos. He is a father of four
children and a loving husband to his wife. Being the driver that he is, it is deemed that the jeepney is their main
source of income.
Mang Dani only finished second grade in primary school. He can not read nor write well. To help him
in his daily work, his wife is his daily company, and their children left at home are taken care of by their eldest
child. Mang Dani can not afford automotive repairs. So, to avoid further damage, he makes sure that he drives
safely on the way to the
different destinations.
The Department of Transportation launched the Public Utility Vehicle Modernization Program in 2017.
The aim of the said program is to make the Philippine transport system efficient and environment-friendly by the
next three years. The program involves the phasing out of public utility vehicles like jeepneys and buses that are
at least 15 years old. The old vehicles will be replaced by new models that are safer, more comfortable for the
commutes, and friendly to the environment.
It is pleasant to the ears to hear the objectives of the PUVMP. However, this program is said to be “anti-
poor” based on some transport groups. The replacement units of the vehicles are way too
Pricey, especially for small-time operators. According to the Landbank of the Philippines, each jeep replacement
will cost PHP 1.6 million, and with added six percent of interest, a new jeepney can cost
PHP 2.1 million, a lot more expensive than Mang Dani’s hundred thousand jeep.
https://ph.theasianparent.com/regalo-sa-pasko
Sweet Lover’s Dilemma
-Rebecca Kelsey C. Famoso

The drivers and operators who were not in favor of the program showed their
opposition by doing transport strikes as their protest against the program. The latest
nationwide transport strike was on September 30, 2019, which made the commuters suffer
even if the mayors of affected cities already
suspended the classes to avoid a big hassle.
Many Mang Dani’s can not afford to replace their jeepneys. The new one requires a
Euro-4-compliant engine that will lessen the pollution brought by the smoke. Some proposed
additional features that the old jeepneys do not have are CCTV (closed circuit television)
cameras, GPS (Global Positioning System),
automated fare collection systems, front-facing seats, and new exits on the right-hand side.
The DOTr claims that the economic and environmental benefits of the PUVMP will be
experienced by drivers and commuters. However, these are people with cases similar to Mang
Dani who can not shoulder the PHP 2 million for a new unit of jeepney.
The sectors of transportation must hear out these conditions as it is the main factor that
stops the program itself.
THANK YOU FOR LISTENIN
Before Gal Gadot, there was Irene Habijan- my Wonder WoMom
Everyone is looking for Wonder Woman in Israel, But I have found her in
the Philippines.
In 1998, I was diagnosed with Rheumatic Heart Disease. It was
excruciatingly painful to move every part of my body because my joints were
extremely sore. I cried every time I tried because I couldn’t endure the pain. So I
had no choice but to stay on bed- lonely, scared and a bit depressed.
But in the middle of my agony, my Wonder Woman was always there to
save me.
I told her that 1 piece of Chickenjoy helped in easing the pain. So she would
frequent buy Jollibee and come home with a 2-piece Chickenjoy.
Every time I felt depressed, she would bring me to Sta. Lucia’s World of
Fun. She knew that singing in Celine Dion’s “Heart Will Go On” would energize
me and make me happy.
Having RHD also hindered me from school and this got me anxious and
pressured about my academic standing. So she went to my school to ask my
teachers about our lessons and how could I catch up with the class. And it was a
good thing that she was a teacher in profession.
I knew she was in pain seeing me in bed looking powerless and defeated.
But she never showed that to me. Instead she would always cheer me up with plans
of the things that we would be doing after I win over the disease.
And whenever I asked her, “Ma, gagaling ba ako?” she told me that I should
not doubt because God was in control of my life. Then, we would hold hands,
prayed together, and claimed to my complete healing.
Fast forward to 2017. I just turned 30 last July 11- healthy, strong and
beautiful! 19 years ago my heart is sick, but my mama’s love was the cure.
“Only love will truly save the world,” said Wonder Woman. And without
doubt, my own Wonder Woman’s love saved my world!
References:
Campus Journalism in a Global Perspective by Dr. Zenaida Yuson-Arao and Manuel C. Zacarias
https://www.lifehack.org/articles/lifestyle/how-to-be-successful-in-life.html

https://journals.worldnomads.com/loriejoy/story/76570/Philippines/Travelogue-Beautiful-When-It-Rains

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