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English Language Component 2

Reading Paper
What does the reading section on English
Language Component 2 paper look like?

• You will be given two non-fiction articles.


• One will be a modern article and the other will be
an article from the 19th century.
• Both articles will be on the same or a similar subject.

There are always 6 questions.

Questions 1 and 2 will be on one article.


• Q1 -‘locate and retrieve’ question – 3 marks.
• Q2- ‘how’ question -10 marks.

Questions 3 and 4 will be on the other article.


• Q3 ‘locate and retrieve’ question – 3 marks.
• Q4 ‘evaluate’ question – 10 marks.

Questions 5 and 6 will be on both articles.


• Q5 – synthesise question – 4 marks.
• Q6 – comparison question – 10 marks.
Question 1 – locate and retrieve
Tip – this should be 3 easy marks but it’s easy to make silly mistakes and
lose marks .
Make sure you read the correct article.

Read the question CAREFULLY.


Underline what it is they’re asking you to look for in the article. The answers will be from any part of the article.
Question 1 answers
Question 2 – How question
Underline key words in the question.

You need at least 7 different points from across the article.


Point, short embedded quote, explain how it might persuade.
Persuasive techniques
• Putting forward an argument - this is about considering tactics used by
writers to put across an argument. Match the tactic to the example.
Tactic Example
Scare tactics suggesting it will get ‘innocent whales’ ‘distressed animals’ ‘bloodiest
worse bout’ ‘endangered fin whales’ ‘gruesome
Expert or eyewitness evidence spectacle’
Norway plans to ‘increase its whale hunting’
Emotive words
‘more than 2000 animals are likely to be directly
hunted’. ‘biggest whale slaughter for a generation’.
Statistics and facts designed to shock Captain of a Sea Shepherd boat: ‘it was perfectly
clear….slaughter proceeded…with full consent of
the Danish Navy.’
Use of tone – sarcastic/angry
‘in defiance of world opinion’ ‘so called ‘scientific’
whaling’ ‘How much longer can the government of
Denmark continue it arrogant support?..’
Call to action
‘Save the Whale’ ‘All decent people should see’
Question 2 – How question
How would I start?
The writer uses a variety of methods to persuade the reader. Firstly, the call to action at the
beginning of the article stating we need to “dust down the slogan Save the Whale”to help whales
“again” is aimed at making readers feel they need to do something to help. The writer then
states that “over 2000 whales” have been killed “this year” which is aimed at shocking us into
action as this is a huge number and it’s happening right now so we can stop it if we try. The
writer calls this “the biggest whale slaughter for a generation” which suggests that this is the
worst its been for many years and the word “slaughter” suggests the whales’ deaths have been
very brutal and cruel which is aimed at making readers feel sorry for the whales.

Carry on…...

Don’t waste time waffling. State a point, short embedded quote, say how it’s persuasive – move on!
Mark scheme
Other areas you could have considered: • the writer uses quotes from one of the Sea Shepherd captains
to show the killing of whales in the Faroes implicates Denmark
and goes against international law;
• it's unacceptable because it breaks international • his language is condemnatory – 'This label is a fiction which
fools no one';
agreement/law;
• he uses language and imagery to emphasise the brutality of
• he tells us the specific countries that are still killing whale hunting – 'by far the bloodiest bout of whale slaughter...';
whales – along with some statistics; • he calls the killings in the Faroes 'massacre'; 'the gruesome
• he refutes Japan’s claim that whaling is for 'scientific spectacle';
research'; • the opening sentence reads like a rallying cry, telling readers
• he tells us Japan is increasing the number of whales they need to 'Save the Whale';
it kills ('double the number it killed last year'; • he begins the article by reminding readers of the international
• he tells us the killing of whales is going on 'right agreement to stop whaling;
now'; • he then gives examples of the countries ignoring the
international agreement;
• he tells us Norway is whaling 'openly' by not
• he gives an example of a specific whale hunt in the Faroes to
adopting the 1986 international agreement; show hunting is still happening;
• he says Norway is planning to kill more whales than • he includes the view of the Sea Shepherd captain to emphasise
before; how Denmark is ignoring international law and action should be
• he says Iceland has recommenced whaling recently taken
and gives details of the large numbers killed; • the final paragraph questions Denmark’s commitment to
international law;
• he uses the Greenpeace spokesman to illustrate the
increasing concerns about whaling; • the article ends by emphasising that “all decent people” should
see that the hunting of whales is “cruel and unacceptable”;
• he gives a report of the recent whale killing in the • impact of photos
Faroe Islands to show what is happening now;
Question 3 – locate and retrieve
Tip – this should be 3 easy marks but it’s easy to make silly mistakes and
lose marks .
Make sure you read the correct article.
Questions 3 and 4 are always on the
second article.

Read the question CAREFULLY.


Underline what it is they’re asking you to look for in the article. The answers will be from any part of the article.
Question 3 answers
Question 4 – Evaluate
question

EVALUATE means to weigh up. These questions are asking your opinion. On this paper they
might be worded in different ways:
• What do you think and feel about the writer’s views?
• The writer makes this sound dramatic and exciting. How far to do you agree?
• How successful do you think the writer was in getting their view across?
Question 4 – Evaluate question
Underline key words in the question.

You need at least 7 different points from across the article.


I think/ I feel/ I believe/ this makes me feel it is dramatic because../ I think this is clear because….
• Read the article.
• Is the description clear?
Is the whale hunt
presented as dramatic?
• How?
• What does the writer
tell us happens?
• What words does he
use?

How do I tackle this


question?
Question 4 – EVALUATE question
How would I start?
I agree to a large extent that the writer provides a clear and dramatic description. Firstly, I think
he gives a clear description of what happens when a whale is spotted and orders are given to
‘stand by and lower boats’. Also, when the whale was spotted, the shout went out which is
described as a ‘thrilling’ noise which in my view suggests it is exciting and dramatic. I believe the
writer increases the drama when he tells us that one whale was ‘little more than half a mile
away’ which means finally the hunt is about to begin. He uses words such as ‘chase’ which
suggest speed and I feel this is dramatic as the action will now accelerate as for the ‘first time in
ten weeks’ a whale is in sight.
Carry on…...

Don’t waste time waffling. State a point, use a quote, say why it’s clear and/or dramatic.
Say I think/I feel for each point.
Mark scheme
Other areas you could have considered:
Question 5 – Synthesise question
• Questions 5 and 6 ask you to use both articles to write your answers.
• Question 5 is worth 4 marks and should be quite straightforward. The key is to make sure you look in
both texts for the SPECIFIC thing they ask you to look for.

YOU NEED TWO POINTS FROM EACH ARTICLE.


Question 5 – Synthesise question
• What do we know about how whales were hunted in 1850 and now in the Faroe Islands?

Example response
1850 Faroe Islands In Cheever’s text the hunters leave
• When whales were sighted, • Small boats drive whales towards a large ship and get into small
small boats were lowered into the beach. boats to hunt one whale but in the
water and chased after them. • There are many whales. Faroe Islands the hunters are just
• A harpoon attached to a tow line • Local people drag the whales onto in small boats and hunting many
was plunged into the whale. the beach.
• The whale would then pull the • The whales are killed on the beach whales. In Cheever’s text, the
whalers’ boat injured until it by the locals. hunters kill the whale by plunging
died. a harpoon into it which is attached
• Dead whale would be towed to their boat. This wounds the
back to large ship. whale so it will die from the injury.
• The boat would chase after one
whale. However in the Faroe Islands the
whales are forced to shore by
hunters and then dragged onto the
beach by locals who kill them.
Question 6 – Comparison question
Which comparative connectives do you know?

• When there are similarities: • When there are differences:


similarly however
also unlike
likewise conversely
this is similar to in contrast
this is different to
Question 6 – Comparison question

Underline key words in the question.


Read question carefully.
Which part of the modern
text should you be referring
to in this question?

This is very important. If you don’t do this – you will get 0 marks.

You need at least 4 different comparison points from each article.


Use comparative connectives ALL THE TIME!
Say what the writers’ attitudes are and comment on how they use words to make their attitudes clear.
Question 6 – Comparison question
How do I respond to this?
Firstly, what are the two writers’ attitudes to hunting whales?
1850s – Cheever’s text Faroe Islands – modern text
Not against whale hunting Sees whale hunting as horrific and
illegal.
What else could we add?
Describes the hunt from the hunters’ Sees the hunters as cruel. The locals
point of view –sees them as brave ‘no ‘violently dragged’ the whales who’d
boys’ play’ been ‘forced’ to swim to the beach by
hunters.

Views the whales as large monsters Views the whales as victims – ‘innocent
compared to the small hunters ‘huge whales’
creature’
Question 6 – Comparison question
How do I set out my response?
You have to compare in order to get marks and therefore it is best to make a
point about one text and then a comparative point about the other text.

Model example
What’s good about this? In Cheever’s article from the 1850s, his attitude towards
• Clearly states which article the the whale hunt is positive. He describes the hunt as a
information is from. battle between a ‘huge creature’ and the men on ‘small
• Uses evidence to back up points. boats’ suggesting the hunters are brave for daring to kill
• Comments on how the writer gets the whale. In contrast, the writer of the modern article
views across – through the words implies the hunters are sly, as they ‘herded’ the ‘innocent
they use. whales’ ashore where they were ‘ruthlessly slaughtered’.
• Uses comparative connectives. ‘Herded’ implies the whales are compelled to obey the
hunters on the boats whereas the whale in Cheever’s text
fights against the hunters with ‘fury’ creating the idea that
it is like a monster.
Carry on…
Some details candidates may explore or respond to: Cheever text
The newspaper article The writer’s attitude
The writer’s attitude  he is not against the whale hunt;
 the writer is strongly against the whale hunt – he writes  he admires the hunters – and the whalers’ willingness to face
about 'the slaughter of whales in the Faroe Islands'; dangerous and difficult situations
 he says it’s wrong because it’s against international  he celebrates the killing of the whale;
law;  he describes the whale in negative terms - 'monster';
 he believes countries are ignoring/flouting the  but shows some respect for the death of “so mighty a creature”.
international agreement to stop hunting whales;
 he says “decent people” would agree whale hunts are how the writer gets his/her attitude across to readers
cruel and unacceptable.  he uses contrast to emphasise the battle between the small
boats and the 'great creature';
how the writer gets his/her attitude across to readers  he talks of the skill and bravery of the harpooners – the 'brave
 he gives a graphic description of how the whales were captain';
killed;  they gave “three hearty cheers” at the death of the whale;
 he tells us of the large numbers killed – "as many as  but says seeing the whale in its death-agony was “painful
250 whales were reportedly massacred"; enough”;
 he refers to the whales as 'innocent' and 'distressed' to  he describes the difficult task of getting the dead whale back to
make his views clear; the ship and how it is “cheerfully endured” by the men because of
 he uses powerful, emotive language, particularly the rewards it brings.
adverbs and adjectives – 'massacred', 'savagely killed',
'horrific scenes', 'distressed animals', 'ruthlessly This is not a checklist and the question must be marked in levels
slaughtered'. of response. Look for and reward valid alternatives.
Persuasive techniques
• Putting forward an argument - this is about considering tactics used by
writers to put across an argument. Match the tactic to the example.
Tactic Example
Scare tactics suggesting it will get ‘innocent whales’ ‘distressed animals’ ‘bloodiest
worse bout’ ‘endangered fin whales’ ‘gruesome
Expert or eyewitness evidence spectacle’
Norway plans to ‘increase its whale hunting’
Emotive words
‘more than 2000 animals are likely to be directly
hunted’. ‘biggest whale slaughter for a generation’.
Statistics and facts designed to shock Captain of a Sea Shepherd boat: ‘it was perfectly
clear….slaughter proceeded…with full consent of
the Danish Navy.’
Use of tone – sarcastic/angry
‘in defiance of world opinion’ ‘so called ‘scientific’
whaling’ ‘How much longer can the government of
Denmark continue it arrogant support?..’
Call to action
‘Save the Whale’ ‘All decent people should see’

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