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What does the reading section on English
Language Component 2 paper look like?
Carry on…...
Don’t waste time waffling. State a point, short embedded quote, say how it’s persuasive – move on!
Mark scheme
Other areas you could have considered: • the writer uses quotes from one of the Sea Shepherd captains
to show the killing of whales in the Faroes implicates Denmark
and goes against international law;
• it's unacceptable because it breaks international • his language is condemnatory – 'This label is a fiction which
fools no one';
agreement/law;
• he uses language and imagery to emphasise the brutality of
• he tells us the specific countries that are still killing whale hunting – 'by far the bloodiest bout of whale slaughter...';
whales – along with some statistics; • he calls the killings in the Faroes 'massacre'; 'the gruesome
• he refutes Japan’s claim that whaling is for 'scientific spectacle';
research'; • the opening sentence reads like a rallying cry, telling readers
• he tells us Japan is increasing the number of whales they need to 'Save the Whale';
it kills ('double the number it killed last year'; • he begins the article by reminding readers of the international
• he tells us the killing of whales is going on 'right agreement to stop whaling;
now'; • he then gives examples of the countries ignoring the
international agreement;
• he tells us Norway is whaling 'openly' by not
• he gives an example of a specific whale hunt in the Faroes to
adopting the 1986 international agreement; show hunting is still happening;
• he says Norway is planning to kill more whales than • he includes the view of the Sea Shepherd captain to emphasise
before; how Denmark is ignoring international law and action should be
• he says Iceland has recommenced whaling recently taken
and gives details of the large numbers killed; • the final paragraph questions Denmark’s commitment to
international law;
• he uses the Greenpeace spokesman to illustrate the
increasing concerns about whaling; • the article ends by emphasising that “all decent people” should
see that the hunting of whales is “cruel and unacceptable”;
• he gives a report of the recent whale killing in the • impact of photos
Faroe Islands to show what is happening now;
Question 3 – locate and retrieve
Tip – this should be 3 easy marks but it’s easy to make silly mistakes and
lose marks .
Make sure you read the correct article.
Questions 3 and 4 are always on the
second article.
EVALUATE means to weigh up. These questions are asking your opinion. On this paper they
might be worded in different ways:
• What do you think and feel about the writer’s views?
• The writer makes this sound dramatic and exciting. How far to do you agree?
• How successful do you think the writer was in getting their view across?
Question 4 – Evaluate question
Underline key words in the question.
Don’t waste time waffling. State a point, use a quote, say why it’s clear and/or dramatic.
Say I think/I feel for each point.
Mark scheme
Other areas you could have considered:
Question 5 – Synthesise question
• Questions 5 and 6 ask you to use both articles to write your answers.
• Question 5 is worth 4 marks and should be quite straightforward. The key is to make sure you look in
both texts for the SPECIFIC thing they ask you to look for.
Example response
1850 Faroe Islands In Cheever’s text the hunters leave
• When whales were sighted, • Small boats drive whales towards a large ship and get into small
small boats were lowered into the beach. boats to hunt one whale but in the
water and chased after them. • There are many whales. Faroe Islands the hunters are just
• A harpoon attached to a tow line • Local people drag the whales onto in small boats and hunting many
was plunged into the whale. the beach.
• The whale would then pull the • The whales are killed on the beach whales. In Cheever’s text, the
whalers’ boat injured until it by the locals. hunters kill the whale by plunging
died. a harpoon into it which is attached
• Dead whale would be towed to their boat. This wounds the
back to large ship. whale so it will die from the injury.
• The boat would chase after one
whale. However in the Faroe Islands the
whales are forced to shore by
hunters and then dragged onto the
beach by locals who kill them.
Question 6 – Comparison question
Which comparative connectives do you know?
This is very important. If you don’t do this – you will get 0 marks.
Views the whales as large monsters Views the whales as victims – ‘innocent
compared to the small hunters ‘huge whales’
creature’
Question 6 – Comparison question
How do I set out my response?
You have to compare in order to get marks and therefore it is best to make a
point about one text and then a comparative point about the other text.
Model example
What’s good about this? In Cheever’s article from the 1850s, his attitude towards
• Clearly states which article the the whale hunt is positive. He describes the hunt as a
information is from. battle between a ‘huge creature’ and the men on ‘small
• Uses evidence to back up points. boats’ suggesting the hunters are brave for daring to kill
• Comments on how the writer gets the whale. In contrast, the writer of the modern article
views across – through the words implies the hunters are sly, as they ‘herded’ the ‘innocent
they use. whales’ ashore where they were ‘ruthlessly slaughtered’.
• Uses comparative connectives. ‘Herded’ implies the whales are compelled to obey the
hunters on the boats whereas the whale in Cheever’s text
fights against the hunters with ‘fury’ creating the idea that
it is like a monster.
Carry on…
Some details candidates may explore or respond to: Cheever text
The newspaper article The writer’s attitude
The writer’s attitude he is not against the whale hunt;
the writer is strongly against the whale hunt – he writes he admires the hunters – and the whalers’ willingness to face
about 'the slaughter of whales in the Faroe Islands'; dangerous and difficult situations
he says it’s wrong because it’s against international he celebrates the killing of the whale;
law; he describes the whale in negative terms - 'monster';
he believes countries are ignoring/flouting the but shows some respect for the death of “so mighty a creature”.
international agreement to stop hunting whales;
he says “decent people” would agree whale hunts are how the writer gets his/her attitude across to readers
cruel and unacceptable. he uses contrast to emphasise the battle between the small
boats and the 'great creature';
how the writer gets his/her attitude across to readers he talks of the skill and bravery of the harpooners – the 'brave
he gives a graphic description of how the whales were captain';
killed; they gave “three hearty cheers” at the death of the whale;
he tells us of the large numbers killed – "as many as but says seeing the whale in its death-agony was “painful
250 whales were reportedly massacred"; enough”;
he refers to the whales as 'innocent' and 'distressed' to he describes the difficult task of getting the dead whale back to
make his views clear; the ship and how it is “cheerfully endured” by the men because of
he uses powerful, emotive language, particularly the rewards it brings.
adverbs and adjectives – 'massacred', 'savagely killed',
'horrific scenes', 'distressed animals', 'ruthlessly This is not a checklist and the question must be marked in levels
slaughtered'. of response. Look for and reward valid alternatives.
Persuasive techniques
• Putting forward an argument - this is about considering tactics used by
writers to put across an argument. Match the tactic to the example.
Tactic Example
Scare tactics suggesting it will get ‘innocent whales’ ‘distressed animals’ ‘bloodiest
worse bout’ ‘endangered fin whales’ ‘gruesome
Expert or eyewitness evidence spectacle’
Norway plans to ‘increase its whale hunting’
Emotive words
‘more than 2000 animals are likely to be directly
hunted’. ‘biggest whale slaughter for a generation’.
Statistics and facts designed to shock Captain of a Sea Shepherd boat: ‘it was perfectly
clear….slaughter proceeded…with full consent of
the Danish Navy.’
Use of tone – sarcastic/angry
‘in defiance of world opinion’ ‘so called ‘scientific’
whaling’ ‘How much longer can the government of
Denmark continue it arrogant support?..’
Call to action
‘Save the Whale’ ‘All decent people should see’