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Diplomacy Tone and Emphasis in Business Writing
Diplomacy Tone and Emphasis in Business Writing
in Business Writing
Learning Objectives
Write:
You’ll have a new analyst to work with on this, and, luckily, you will be
able to train her on the way you'd like things to be done.
2. Acknowledge the Work of Others as Often
as You Can
Rather than:
I need this by 5pm tomorrow.
Write:
I imagine you’re just as swamped as we are, but in order to move
forward, we really need this by 5pm tomorrow.
3. Ask (when you can afford to hear no)
and Thank Your Reader
Rather than:
You need to stay until the meeting ends, which will likely be around
7:00 p.m.
Write:
Would it be possible for you to stick around until this meeting ends,
which will likely be around 7:00 p.m.? I’d really appreciate it.
4. Avoid Passive Aggressiveness at all Times
Rather than:
It seems that reading the document I sent that outlined the
instructions wasn’t a priority amidst all of the other very important
work you had to do, so please let me explain it here, for the second
time: The steps include…
Write:
The steps include…
5. Use Passive vs. Active Voice to Your Advantage
Rather than:
It seems that reading the document I sent that outlined the
instructions wasn’t a priority amidst all of the other very important
work you had to do, so please let me explain it here, for the second
time: The steps include…
Write:
The steps include…
Active voice is a sentence in which the subject of the sentence
performs the action.
Rather than:
It’s very important that you COME PREPARED TO THE MEETING.
Write:
It’s very important that you come prepared to the meeting.