MADHAV INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY

& SCIENCE GWALIOR, (M.P)

NEC PRESENTATION SEMINAR

ON
CREATIVE WRITING (2000160)

Presented to: Presented

By:
Dr. Preeti Gupta Yash Gupta
Proffessor (Humanities dept.)
0901CS211135 COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING DEPARTMENT
COMPARE THE FORMS OF
POETRY BY HARIBANSH RAI
BACHCHAN AND
 Introduction ATAL BIHARI
to Harivansh Rai JI
Bachchan .
 Discussing about his forms of
poetry.
 Introduction to Atal Bihari
Vajpayee.
 Discussing about his forms of
poetry.
 Comparison between forms of
poetry by Harivansh sir and
Atal ji.
 HARIVANSH RAI BACHCHAN
 Harivansh Rai Bachchan (1907-2003) the celebrated Hindi poet, was a master of weaving
emotion, philosophy, and imagery into various poetic forms. Let's explore the forms of poetry
used by Harivansh Rai Bachchan through a creative and imaginative lens:
 Nindak Niyare Rakhiye - Keep Critics
Close

निन्दक नियरे राखिये, आंगन कु टी छवाय।
बिन पानी, साबुन बिना, निर्मल करे सुभाय।
सिलते रहसए हर्ष में, बढ़ि गया संकट जैसे।
गछ को दूर से फें को, तांक गए कै से कै से।
धिनधिन जो कहाँ सुंग, कोटि खल में रहे।
निन्दक से यह सांचा, सब कु छ ही सुझे हमें।
खुलकर निन्दा करो, निन्दक की है सब बात।
निन्दक से सांच कहो, निन्दक के सच बिन हाथ।
बड़ा हुआ संतान कु छ नहिं, चाहिए उतना ही बड़।
प्रेम का सिन्दूर खरीदकर, आप सब संसार फिर छवड़।

जो परको चकना, ते पैदा करानें तुम्हार बालक। निंदा हो जाए अच्छी, यदि सावधानी से की जाए।
निंदा हो जाए अच्छी, यदि सावधानी से की जाए।
क्यों लोग निर्मल आपन, क्यों करा प्रिय मिलाक।

चाहत कहा, निन्दा हमारी, लौंडो पाखड़ा सुथा।

छानी बेन किसै नहीं, खूदा गया सब कु छ सुथा।
 Excerpts from the poem

"निन्दक नियरे राखिये, आंगन कु टी छवाय।“

"बिन पानी, साबुन बिना, निर्मल करे सुभाय।“

"निन्दक नियरे राखिये, आंगन कु टी छवाय।“ "बिन पानी, साबुन बिना, निर्मल करे सुभाय।“

In this line, the poet suggests that one should keep their critics This line underscores the idea that criticism can cleanse
close, as their presence can serve as a source of constructive and purify one's character and actions, even without
feedback and self-improvement. Just as a thatched hut external tools like water and soap. It emphasizes the
provides shelter, criticism can offer protection and growth. transformative power of constructive criticism.
Interpretation of the poem's message according to me

•"Nindak Niyare Rakhiye" advises us to keep our critics close, similar to how a lush garden keeps its weeds. In
other words, it suggests that criticism and feedback, even when negative, can serve as valuable tools for self-
improvement and growth.

•Some positive points that I learn and pick out from this poem are as follows :

Embrace Constructive Criticism

A Path to Self-Improvement
The Power of Self-Reflection
The Importance of Humility
The Contrast Between External and Internal Purity
Blessing in Disguise
 SOME FORMS OF POETRY BY HARIVANSH RAI BACHCHAN

Madhushala (The House of Wine): This is a collection of poems that use a metaphorical representation of a wine
house to explore various aspects of life, including joy, sorrow, desire, and liberation. The poems in "Madhushala"
are often in rhymed quatrains (four-line stanzas) and are known for their philosophical depth.

Nindak Niyare Rakhiye (Keep Critics Close): This poem implores readers to welcome criticism and view it as a
tool for self-improvement. It uses couplets and simple language to convey its message.

Aakul Antar (Restless Mind): A reflective and introspective poem in which the poet explores the restlessness of
the human mind and the eternal quest for meaning. It is characterized by free-verse lines that emphasize the inner
turmoil of the human psyche.

Madhubala (Honey Bee): A collection of sonnets that explores the journey of love and the complexities of
relationships. These sonnets are structured in a more structured and lyrical format, following traditional sonnet
rules.
 SOME FORMS OF POETRY BY HARIVANSH RAI BACHCHAN
Hari Aur Gharwale (Hari and the Housemates): This is a narrative poem that tells the story of Hari, a character who experiences
humorous and everyday situations. It employs a storytelling format and often has a lighthearted and anecdotal style.

Dohe (Couplets): Bachchan also wrote in the traditional doha (couplet) format, which is a common style in Hindi and Indian poetry.
These couplets often convey profound wisdom and moral lessons in a concise and rhythmic manner.

Geetanjali (Song Offering): Inspired by Rabindranath Tagore's "Gitanjali," Bachchan created his own collection of songs that express
devotion and spirituality. This collection is characterized by its lyrical and devotional style.

Rubaiyat (Quatrains): Bachchan occasionally used the Rubaiyat format, a style of four-line poetry often associated with the Persian
poet Omar Khayyam. In these quatrains, he contemplated various aspects of life and existence.

Harivansh Rai Bachchan's work showcased his ability to adapt to and excel in various poetic forms, making him one of the most
versatile and celebrated poets in Hindi literature. His poems continue to resonate with readers due to their philosophical depth,
emotional richness, and lyrical beauty.
 ATAL BIHARI VAJPAYEE ( THE POET IN
POLITICS )
 Atal Bihari Vajpayee (1924-2018) was a towering figure in Indian politics and a
renowned poet, multifaceted personality known for his eloquence in both arena.
 Haiku - The Essence of Simplicity
A Sample Haiku by Vajpayee

"In the still of night,

Moonlight on a lotus pond,
Silent beauty blooms."

Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry consisting of

three lines.
•It is celebrated for its minimalist structure and ability to
convey profound emotions, observations, or experiences in just
a few words.
INTERPRETATION OF POEM’S MESSAGE
1. Stillness and Serenity: The first line, "In the still of night," sets the scene by emphasizing
a moment of profound quiet and calm. It suggests a time of perfect tranquility and peace.
2. Moonlight's Magic: The second line, "Moonlight on a lotus pond," introduces an image
of moonlight gently illuminating a lotus pond. Moonlight has a soft and soothing quality,
and the choice of a lotus pond adds a touch of natural elegance.
3. Silent Beauty Unfolding: The final line, "Silent beauty blooms," encapsulates the
poem's essence. It implies that the moonlight's gentle touch on the lotus pond reveals the
silent, understated, yet profound beauty of the lotus blossoms as they open in the night.
 SOME FORMS OF POETRY BY ATAL
BIHARI VAJPAYEE
 Sonnets: Vajpayee wrote sonnets, a 14-line poetic form with a specific rhyme scheme and meter.
In sonnets, he often explored themes of love, longing, and human emotions.

 Ghazals: Ghazals are lyrical poems with rhyming couplets that often focus on themes of love and
yearning. Vajpayee's Ghazals are celebrated for their deep emotions and expressive language.

 Haikus: Inspired by the Japanese form, Haikus are short poems with three lines, typically
capturing a single moment in nature or life. Vajpayee's Haikus are known for their simplicity and
depth.
 SOME FORMS OF POETRY BY ATAL BIHARI
VAJPAYEE

 Rubaiyats: Rubaiyats are quatrains, each consisting of four lines, often used to convey wisdom,
philosophical ideas, or moral lessons. Vajpayee employed this form to share his insights.

 Nazms: Nazms are a form of free-verse poetry that reads like prose. Vajpayee's Nazms often
explored personal and philosophical themes.

 Lyrical Poetry: Vajpayee also wrote lyrical poetry, which is characterized by its emotional and
musical qualities. His lyrical poems often touched on love, nature, and human experiences.
 SOME FORMS OF POETRY BY ATAL
BIHARI VAJPAYEE
 Blank Verse: Blank verse is unrhymed poetry that adheres to a specific meter. Vajpayee used
this form to create poems with a structured rhythm and meter.

 Ballads: Ballads are narrative poems that tell a story. Vajpayee's narrative poems often
explored historical or cultural subjects.

 Atal Bihari Vajpayee's work as a poet showcased his versatility and creativity in using
various poetic forms to convey his thoughts, emotions, and perspectives on life and society.
His poems are celebrated for their depth, eloquence, and profound insights.
 Let’s Compare the Harivansh Rai Bachchan
and Atal Bihari ji in terms of forms of poetry
 Harivansh Rai Bachchan - The  Atal Bihari Vajpayee - The
Visionary of Poetry. Wordsmith of Politics and Poetry
 Bachchan - The Traditionalist  Vajpayee - The Modern Maverick
 Bachchan - The Sage of  Vajpayee - The Poet of the Heart:
Philosophy
 Harivansh Rai Bachchan - The
Visionary of Poetry:
• Bachchan's poetry often resonates
with philosophical depth and
spiritual insights. His work is like a
grand tapestry, weaving together
various forms to express his
profound thoughts.
 Atal Bihari Vajpayee - The
Wordsmith of Politics and Poetry:
• Vajpayee's poetry is a blend of the
poetic and the political, resonating
with everyday emotions and
universal themes.