Results of Exit slip: 2/4/13

Student A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U # Full Poems finished 1 6 6 0 3 4 4 6 3 6 2 5 3 2 4 7 4 5 3 4 Difference between # revised - # finished 1 4 4 -1 3 3 4 5 3 1 1 3 2 1 3 7 2 3 1 2 # Poems finished + 2nd draft 2 2 2 1 0 1 0 1 0 5 1 2 1 1 1 0 2 2 2 2

Student A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U

Would like more time in class to work on Wants more help with... Independent writing Figurative language Independent writing Fig Language Independent/computer time more ideas for poems-- learning about poets (more pre-writing) independent/work on poem time line breaks and more imagery Independent writing Imagery Workshopping figurative language workshopping--maybe do some partner edits Workshop/computer lab Independent/time to work on poems imagery Computer time/revising time Fig lang variety Independent/workshopping imagery Independent rhyming Independent writing show don't tell Independent writing--slow down figurative language Lab time Metaphors workshop sound devices Lab time to write and revise Figurative language and how to use it effectively more writing time figurative language workshop/skill focus line breaks work and skill focus figurative language+help writing all of his/her ideas the way word their thoughts says "doesn't think anyone including him/herself used independent writing wisely"

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