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WAYS TO ATTRACT MORE TOURIST TO MALAYSIA

Name : Mohammad Fahmi bin Tajaudin (Luffy) Matrix Number : DCS131006 Section Number : 1 Name of the Lecturer : Vickneswari a/p Rengasamy

Task : Recommend ways to attract more tourist to Malaysia. 1. General Statement: Every year there more and more tourist visit Malaysia for their holiday. Thesis Statement: There are many ways to attract tourist to visit Malaysia such as making campaigns, promote low priced holiday package and prepare good quality to them.

2. Topic Sentence 1: Firstly, we can attract them by making campaigns. i) Supporting Detail 1 :

In 1999, Malaysia launched a worldwide marketing campaign called "Malaysia, Truly Asia". ii) Supporting Detail 2 :

The campaign was largely successful in bringing over 7.4 million tourist. 3. Topic Sentence 2: Beside that, we can attract more tourist to visit Malaysia by promote low priced holiday package. i) Supporting Detail 1 :

Promotion lower package such as lower price for accommodation for tourist. ii) Supporting Detail 2 :

Promotion lower package also for transport system for visit to tourism places and other. 4. Topic Sentence 3: After that, we also can attract the tourist by prepare good quality to them. i) Supporting Detail 1 :

Good quality means our country prepare more facilities, accommondation, safely and other. ii) Supporting Detail 2 :

With all of that, there's surely tourist will increase in our country. 5. Concluding Sentence: Lastly, we have to work hard to make Malaysia a better country so that amount tourist in Malaysia will increase in 2015.

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